I got confused in the beginning, because I couldn't tell if it was about Zuko or Aang, but after a while, I realized it was both. :) it was exellent, but you should make that point a little stronger. Heavier transition between the two, maybe?
OK, you have some potential here with your song/source choice, and some of the parts aren't that bad. The best part you had was from 3:00-3:05. The problem was the sync was very static throughout the video and didn't change at all with the pace of the song, nor did it match up that much with the beats. The scene choice itself was ok, but it needed faster action at the faster bits, the slow bits were fine. More stuff like from 3:00-3:05, and watch your transitions, esp from light to dark scenes.
The lyrics and clips work great together! My only suggestion would be to focus on one character. Zuko maybe? Aang? Or you could have made one verse entirely about Zuko and one about Aang. That way it would be more clear who the central character is.
i love how he asked for constructive criticism and all the comments are just praise. it is well done but the scene changes could blend a little better. you showed a bit of changing between very bright and very dark clips. while a bit ov this strengthens your work too much makes the work less interesting to the viewers try using simple brighten or darkenings on your work or chose bridging clips to quickly disperse the issues
@jewettcoveswhiterose I'm working on a fireflies with Ponyo thing at the moment. it'll be a while before that comes out. Kinda want to do something with Spike Spiegel but not too sure what I should use for it. that's all I've got for right now. but I digress it has been too long since I made a post.
I really like the song and LOVE Avatar the Last Airbender, as for the amv I would say to make it better you need to make the clips go faster to the beat of the music by makeing them shorter and using more fighting clips, and maybe use some special affects to help the longer clips go with the beat. Otherwise I think you did a great job :)
Great! Very good amv! I think it would be better if you changed clips more often and used effects to match the rhythm. Still, 5 stars(if I could rate it that is) !
Thank you, i really appreciate the critique, i'll keep that in mind for future stuff. and as far as ratings go i think they're pointless, i'm flattered that you think it deserves that but i prefer to hear what i can improve on or what was done well. Check out my other stuff if you like.
Very cool! ^.^
Hinatachan121 7 months ago in playlist My PlAyLiSt
Superb, alway in the mood for the avatar world... thanks for the work friend!
greetings from Mexico
MarioRocket 8 months ago
Put simply... O.o
Bloody epic mate, Keep it up.
cheezy805 10 months ago
I got confused in the beginning, because I couldn't tell if it was about Zuko or Aang, but after a while, I realized it was both. :) it was exellent, but you should make that point a little stronger. Heavier transition between the two, maybe?
LongFingered 10 months ago
OK, you have some potential here with your song/source choice, and some of the parts aren't that bad. The best part you had was from 3:00-3:05. The problem was the sync was very static throughout the video and didn't change at all with the pace of the song, nor did it match up that much with the beats. The scene choice itself was ok, but it needed faster action at the faster bits, the slow bits were fine. More stuff like from 3:00-3:05, and watch your transitions, esp from light to dark scenes.
UnderTheBoxProduct 1 year ago
The lyrics and clips work great together! My only suggestion would be to focus on one character. Zuko maybe? Aang? Or you could have made one verse entirely about Zuko and one about Aang. That way it would be more clear who the central character is.
Still...great job!
FNPrincess 1 year ago
i love how he asked for constructive criticism and all the comments are just praise. it is well done but the scene changes could blend a little better. you showed a bit of changing between very bright and very dark clips. while a bit ov this strengthens your work too much makes the work less interesting to the viewers try using simple brighten or darkenings on your work or chose bridging clips to quickly disperse the issues
lawtonaaj 1 year ago
@lawtonaaj Thanks, I really appreciate getting some advice on what I can do to improve. I'll keep what you said in mind for future vids. ^^
XxTheCrimsonRoguexX 1 year ago
this is really awesome!
its matched so well with the song... 5 stars!
ZeroJinKui 1 year ago
EXCELLENT!!!
Very good job on the timing. Matching clips with the lyrics and beat. Bravo.
I wasn't sure a good Avatar AMV could be made to this song, but you cast my doubts aside. Splendid work!
bsquaredbundles 1 year ago
Thanks a lot ^^ i put a lot of work into my AMVs when i get the chance to. lol
XxTheCrimsonRoguexX 1 year ago
@XxTheCrimsonRoguexX amazing, simply amazing. a perfect match between lyrics and clips ^_^ you gonna make another soon? =P
jewettcoveswhiterose 1 year ago
@jewettcoveswhiterose I'm working on a fireflies with Ponyo thing at the moment. it'll be a while before that comes out. Kinda want to do something with Spike Spiegel but not too sure what I should use for it. that's all I've got for right now. but I digress it has been too long since I made a post.
XxTheCrimsonRoguexX 1 year ago
I really like the song and LOVE Avatar the Last Airbender, as for the amv I would say to make it better you need to make the clips go faster to the beat of the music by makeing them shorter and using more fighting clips, and maybe use some special affects to help the longer clips go with the beat. Otherwise I think you did a great job :)
Akkhinna 2 years ago 6
Thanks I'll keep those things in mind and thank you. I love getting solid criticism to help make my work better. ^^
XxTheCrimsonRoguexX 2 years ago
i need to start making amvs againe and get back my subs
BlackSpliff 2 years ago
Great job! Love this show & love love love this song :D
GabsBunnies 2 years ago
dunny know why but i seriously really love this song. and i'm a RnB / pop music person. 5 stars
Juno476 2 years ago
Great! Very good amv! I think it would be better if you changed clips more often and used effects to match the rhythm. Still, 5 stars(if I could rate it that is) !
oxharemonkey 2 years ago
Thank you, i really appreciate the critique, i'll keep that in mind for future stuff. and as far as ratings go i think they're pointless, i'm flattered that you think it deserves that but i prefer to hear what i can improve on or what was done well. Check out my other stuff if you like.
XxTheCrimsonRoguexX 2 years ago
Great! Avatar is cool. Especially Zuko. This deserves so 5 stars!
MetalsonicX7 2 years ago
it great, just brush it up in the first few seconds
DRHGL 2 years ago
One of the best AMVs I've ever seen. Very nice work! :D
Sunfish2011 2 years ago
Wonderfully, wonderfully done!
BrighidDhianna 2 years ago
it's cool an all but I seen better.
koolkid7512 2 years ago
if you've seen better please post CONSTRUCTIVE criticism on how this could be better, as says in the description.
XxTheCrimsonRoguexX 2 years ago
better than i could ever do. i dont even know how to make these =P
P.S. Avatar rules
nejihyuga199 2 years ago
I can tell it took a lot of time to make, it deserves some more credit. Nice timing.
LiquidusSnake 3 years ago
sweet avatar rules!
RichardK16 3 years ago
Hyuu~! Very good!
Spasticgothchild 3 years ago