even my lil cousin can rap better then him u shuld quit your job. you ryhm like an ignorant person and stop using syllabyls like man, can ,a, i, you , we
Should ask username Shiggashay to help you with the lyrics. He's pretty good with it trust me. I think add to the rap part will complete the song. try search for his name "Shiggashay" and check out. :D NIce lyrics though :D
@smellybutt96, I am no hater. Personally, I really do find that the rap verse wasn't rap. If i was a hater, why would i say that the vocals were okay? I was offering constructive criticism.
too bad the haters cant produce shit making them feel jealous as fuckkkkkkkkkk
brittlethings 9 months ago
tell your mom to buy you a new mic and kriz, go take some poetry class, your lines are so lame
etcinfected 1 year ago
sweet :]
xlilmissbluex 1 year ago
lol haters dont know what theyre talking about.
fatgogi 1 year ago
I like your voice. ;)
daretodream86 1 year ago
did one of these singers take part in the ETERNAL SUNSHINE SONG BY WE3??????????
Kyungiie 1 year ago
sounds like your in a giant empty room with super echo...
davisiscrazy 1 year ago
Actually not bad! Good job! (Y)
Check out my cover of JD's version ^^
Peace
V7DKuraudo 1 year ago
Rap too simple. No. Singing good.
bobbletea 1 year ago
I liked your voice and the rap part was pretty good. ;]
prsea 1 year ago
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and your cover sound like a kareoke machine with lots of echos ton it down then rest should be good.
bunbot05 1 year ago
and your cover sound like a kareoke machine with lots of echos ton it down then rest should be good.
bunbot05 1 year ago
even my lil cousin can rap better then him u shuld quit your job. you ryhm like an ignorant person and stop using syllabyls like man, can ,a, i, you , we
bunbot05 1 year ago
nice job men cool
arhaeih03 1 year ago
the rapping is good but ther are some parts wer i jst lost intreast but overall its pretty good ^^
RAnDomMaN0394 1 year ago
Dam nice cover
Good Job
iBringRukus 1 year ago
nice cover
keep it up with the music
lilarek 2 years ago
best english version ive herd. it was good but it has the potential to become great, just need to cut the echo and tighten up a few loose screws :)
MrKezza09 2 years ago
Should ask username Shiggashay to help you with the lyrics. He's pretty good with it trust me. I think add to the rap part will complete the song. try search for his name "Shiggashay" and check out. :D NIce lyrics though :D
kingsufian07 2 years ago
that was good but... the story totally changed haha
K4ivin 2 years ago
@smellybutt96, I am no hater. Personally, I really do find that the rap verse wasn't rap. If i was a hater, why would i say that the vocals were okay? I was offering constructive criticism.
TheAsianRapper 2 years ago
LOL woow nice comment ;P
xXNightWish 2 years ago
Vocals were o-kay but the rap verse was .......it wasn't rap. 1)No flow. 2) Lines were too short. kthxbye.
TheAsianRapper 2 years ago
hater
smellybutt96 2 years ago
i meant cute lyrics how am i a hater i have this as one of me favs
btw the e got cut off i had issues with the e when i was typing in a long time ago
UPGrade607 2 years ago
yeah the rap fukin sucked -_-
Lo0kiTzDavid 2 years ago 16
LOL
TheAsianRapper 2 years ago
@Lo0kiTzDavid you duh bitch bitch guy mudafucker u suck duh focking eggroll bitch
awsomeguys503 1 year ago
wasn't this done by NAKBoys? what the hell are you doing with their video, DJSteveenMusic?
dew0802 2 years ago
i like the second dudes voice cut lyrics
UPGrade607 2 years ago
hater
smellybutt96 2 years ago
gd song. nice lyrics :)
bhuntulii16 2 years ago
You can still hear the auto tune at times
ml2noodle 2 years ago
the echo is annoying and so is the beginning...u said AYE AYE AYE too much, the rap by Kritz is awesome and M-ru suxxx
soccerbitch 2 years ago
hater
smellybutt96 2 years ago
its good 5*
xXazngurl206Xx 2 years ago
i like the rap
zobydabest 2 years ago
wow this is nice, keep up the good work =] only thing is too bad the recording has that echo thing if not this would've been a great track
YohJae 2 years ago
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wtf is not even the song.....is it english one or wat
hmongmaster209 2 years ago