Keep Goin On -Original Song by Jaycee **WATCH THIS

[Jamezz420]

Sound of your voice and performance of your voice is good... Lyrics need some impovement, a bit simple, not trying to hate...also the way you dance around is kind of akward : / .... Either way, keep it up, u got mad potential....

[MsLegaC]

i just remembered how i know u...from youtube!! i saw this video a long time ago :)

[Slippie]

check out this white rapper on youtube. i watched this fool grow up from his toddler days, now he's tearin' it up: "Christian Blake Live @ The Terrace.mov"

P.S. - KEEP ON KEEPIN' ON. follow your dream, girl. much love and respect forever. peace.

[Slippie]

when you break down rapping into elements of style, you notice that rappers try *never* to over-accentuate their words. this means that their diction is poor, but the reason this is good is because it falls in line with this specific style of singing. what if you tried using more of a ghetto dialect? like turning "th" into "d", and softening your T's, R's, and G's at the ends of words/syllables. practice lots with this youtube vid: Da Brat - That's What I'm Looking For (..just google the lyrics)

[Slippie]

nice job jaycee! two suggestions: 1) try never to rush in extra words that don't fall on the beat; it sounds awkward, like at 1:06 ...this might mean rewriting the lyrics so they fit. 2) think of taking up voice lessons. your voice has lots of power, but you aren't controlling it effectively with your diaphragm in the sections where you're singing "as long as you keep going onnn". learning to compress air flow will keep your notes clear so that they don't waver at the end of your breath. U ROCK!

[jtwiztidbagz]

not bad but you need to change it up a bit instead the same rhyme patter every line...also i notice girls do this more pick up the speed also when you go slow it sounds cat in the hat

[TheBerkley]

You are very talented, keep up the good work, Jaycee! Well done!!

[KookiesKream]

damn this is my shit!

[TheOshauna]

your soo cute! an i love your flow cos it has really strong emotion.. keep up the good work! ;)

[Doggisha]

No-one said that life is fair. :) yeah no one did. You SHOULD be famous girl

[TDA2099]

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[Doggisha]

Wow, you're good !

Im a hip hop dancer, hehe. Love this song ! the lyrics rock.

[terriwindh1]

you are my girl and Im very proud that I am close to you . keep up the great work you are going to make it big one day girl .

[Matt187die]

Diggin the hook and good message keep it up

[streepd]

here's some constructive criticism. are you trying to rap or sing? you should try to do one or the other. you do seem pretty passionate about what your doing though.

[GhettoOfficialEnt]

ima unsign artist trying to get heard i just uploaded my video on youtube i need everyone to take a few second to check me out THIS SONG IS FOR EVERYONE ESPECIALY FOR THE LADIES

CHECK IT OUT N SPREAD THE WORD CAUGHT UP IN LOVE CAUGHT UP IN LOVE

[Airica880]

love it

[shaun9634]

well thts good just keep up the good work ur better then some of the other ppl out there

[shaun9634]

damn girl u can rap im waiting 4 more

[jclaycamp]

@shaun9634 thanks man!! im working on a couple new songs now...i got a club banger then another song kinda like this one

[jclaycamp]

THANKS FOR THE LOVE EVERYONE!! new video coming soon :)

[XMrMoon]

I cant wait for more, you shit is good its all real

[jclaycamp]

@XMrMoon i really appreciate that man!!

[CueEntertainmentVids]

I like the hook!!! well written

[terriwindh]

Hey Jaycee we are waiting on another video because you are so good we want more please. love Momma T

[TheDailyComicsDotCom]

thelatetimallen: (3:57:33 PM) don't hurt 'em

[terriwindh]

you can hear the REAL life pain in this vidio girl I really felt it and I cryed this is your best vidio yet keep it up . love you girl .

Momma T

[bookittybits]

this is a GREAT video, love!!!!