your rhymes are fine but you'll find they're not that as important as keeping the rhythm consistent. lyrics, especially rap lyrics follow the same rules as poetry.
I do memorize it, but i just didn't wanna mess up so i had to look at it since it was a one shot video no edit straight through kind of thing. It'll be better when I actually record it.
stop your voice sucks and my ears are bleeding ..........who ever likes her voice is a dumb ass .
wtf i dont even understand what she says ....horrible y r u in youtube how old are u nine or ten?
power1622 1 year ago
das wassup. keep doing ya thing.
RevolutionarySavior 2 years ago
hehe; your AUH-MAZING! i friggin love ur voice! :D
imalovingyou 2 years ago
hey do you remember me from las vegas when you like my uncle and andy and peter my cousins
animal54vivi 3 years ago
WOW. :O
That was amazing. :)
HPGirlAna 3 years ago 2
aka SHEGO, haha. >:D
hAhAhEbAx3 3 years ago
kathyy! <3 ahh this song is superr good. well they all are, but this one is one is my favorite. greatt work; keep them coming! :D
- Heba
hAhAhEbAx3 3 years ago
i give u super props
un1c0rnpr1nc3 3 years ago
i love it
GULJEEN 3 years ago
DOPEEEEE :) You got a sick flow
Mysterysk8er18 3 years ago
thanks :]
KATHYTRANN 3 years ago
watch the rhythm and pentameters.
your rhymes are fine but you'll find they're not that as important as keeping the rhythm consistent. lyrics, especially rap lyrics follow the same rules as poetry.
aznpuraido 3 years ago
hey its yoshi. -claps- keep it up loser =]
hockeyplaya44 3 years ago
very nice very nice...how long did it take to write this?
spitfirewarrior 3 years ago
I do memorize it, but i just didn't wanna mess up so i had to look at it since it was a one shot video no edit straight through kind of thing. It'll be better when I actually record it.
KATHYTRANN 3 years ago
YES :] i love this one. i still say memorize the lyrics the flow will feel more natural.
vietshortiegurl 3 years ago 2
Keep the tracks coming, and keep up the good work! :D
swimmerhollister 3 years ago 2