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From: KevKenshin101
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  • eternity of light waves as start music

  • Final Fantasy music :D

  • wow its nice :D make more of this type of videos :D jyjy

  • ur an amazing animator. subscribed<3

  • It's pretty good, but least the text longer the next time

  • EXCUSEEE MEEEEEE, I REALLY LIKE THISSS VIDEOOO must u wait until 500 subscribers to make the second one =[

  • teach me how to custom pose pm m

  • Hmm... the plot so far lacks cohesiveness (I find myself asking 'what's going on?' too often). What I can determine from the plot makes me think that your theology is something strange, insane even. Some of the exposition is original, while other parts are clichéd. The characters... while you clearly make their positions and ailments known, it seems to be done in a very blatant matter without regard to expositional depth. Their designs also lack originality.

  • (con't) Some of your sprites are awkward (particularly at 2:53), and the repetition is a bit boring. You have quite a few grammatical errors strewn throughout the video, and it adds to the confusion. The profanity is rather unnecessary and repulsive. Sentence structure is rather passive, and makes the dialouge dull.

    That's the bad news. The good news: you have potential. Keep working on this project, refine it, sharpen it. You might make something amazing out of it. Best of luck to you.

  • @mrFaymus Everyone has different way of animating, people seem to enjoy it, im not a perfectionist and i do not make magic when i animate so please dont expect me to be perfect and some what seem to offend my way of animating, the day that you make an animation and make it better is the day that your allowed to judge my animaton but please dont try to what seems to be offend me in my video.

  • @KevKenshin101 I was trying to offer constructive criticism, but if you're too uppity that you can't be bothered to improve yourself, then so be it. Perfection is not necessarily the goal, but it is nonetheless worth striving for. If a single of the simple things I mentioned was to be improved upon, people would rave you even more. I mean you no ill by posting what I posted. Feedback is not meant to flame, nor is it meant for mindless glorification. Dwell upon edification to improve yourself.

  • @mrFaymus Its not that im arrogant, Im not striving for perfection either, I enjoy animating not to be the best but for myself and to please the people, And i am not The best animator so dont expect complete greatness from my efforts, I dont wished to be rave'd I just enjoy, enjoying the people and having fun doing what im doing, so thanks for your criticism but no thanks

  • Where the fuck is my camp piggy 5?!!!!!(jk lol) this video was awesome :D

  • Woo nice FF10 music, love it :D

  • Woah, nice man.

  • Lol that was cool, idk why but I started laughing when I recognized where the sound effects came from. :D

  • the random capital letters annoy me..

    and when they're all walking together or something, maybe you can put them in different frames, so they don't look like they're walking in the same frame.

    it looks weird like that.

  • So far so good! I can't wait for the next episode. =D

  • lol Final Fantasy X much hehe the first one i dont remember what part that was in lol the 2nd one i think it was his first fight with the boss the big spider or that squid one

  • really kool

  • really good vid definatly make more just make the reading time a little longer couldnt finish reading in time

  • Freshh azz VID

  • needs a better name than HIM, i understand it but still D:

  • @masteritachi500 His name isnt actually HIM, it just hasnt be revealed yet.

  • @KevKenshin101 i know but rlly, messes some vocab in things up owo;, so when the episode gonna come out?

  • @masteritachi500 Go to my prof and read the side itll explain some things.

  • cool alot of story and action this may be a great series :D

  • i love this<3 great job ima sub you :D -subs-

  • i hope you finish this looks good you know :P

  • Lol.. Final Fantasy 10 influences aye Lol

  • @RandomDota its not a FFX influenced, i just love that game so i use the songs and stuff from it because it fits perfect.

  • Post more comments yoo

  • Very awesome I hope you continue the episodes this is very cool

  • @rizened Thanks, I plan to work more on this and eventually finish chrono story after this nahmean?!?

  • omfg epic

  • cool

  • Nice to know you're back :)

  • first

  • @narutoeps2  xD lmfaoo

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