.....since you used an Abney Park song, I expected to see the girl getting turned piece by piece into a machine. That would have called for more elaborate (and expensive) props, though. Anyways, the song did fit extremely well, and I think you did very well in general. I was surprised that the actin / story development had as good pacing as it did. :)
I think you should have put fake blood on the side of the knife that faced away from the camera (perhaps soaked into a long narrow strip of fabric) so that when he appeared to cut her face and abdomen, a bold red line would appear. And maybe with the hammer at the beginning, as well----could have soaked a sponge with fake blood and hidden it in assailant's hand so that the girl would get heavily splattered as the actor swung... The hand at the end was disgusting (compliment), but.....[continued]
Nice props, but the acting was absolutely and you should have gotten the girl a better costume. I have to admit though that arm twitching at the end made me lmao.
It is very well filmed. The acting on the girls part is not really fitting unless she is autistic. Not meaning to be mean just an observation of maner. My e-mail is SteamLolita@gmail.com Can someone tell me who to contact is I would like to re atempt this video. It's an awesome remdition and I would like to see what I can do with it.
Screw all the haters dude. Any interpretation that is to literal is fanatical. Your interpretation is very interesting. Creepy! Made me want to hurk up my pb & j breakfast! Seriously, good work, keep it up.
you used the wrong tools for the job. after you broke her legs with the hammer you should have used to nail gun on her feet. the big knife you used at the end should have been used on her face. its not as fine a cut as the scalpel but unless you're removing her face, it doesn't need to be fine. it 's just more intimidating. I'm not sure what you were doing to her stomach I can't help there, but when hacking off her arm you should have used the meat cleaver. the big knife wouldn't have done it.
I love this song a lot, it is really hard to find a no-live version by Abney Park so thanks for that and I like so much of this video too ^^ well done :D
Actually I can't tell if there's a line on her face or not... If there is, it's almost impossible to see, even on the higher quality setting. :\
eutytoalba 3 months ago
.....since you used an Abney Park song, I expected to see the girl getting turned piece by piece into a machine. That would have called for more elaborate (and expensive) props, though. Anyways, the song did fit extremely well, and I think you did very well in general. I was surprised that the actin / story development had as good pacing as it did. :)
eutytoalba 3 months ago
I think you should have put fake blood on the side of the knife that faced away from the camera (perhaps soaked into a long narrow strip of fabric) so that when he appeared to cut her face and abdomen, a bold red line would appear. And maybe with the hammer at the beginning, as well----could have soaked a sponge with fake blood and hidden it in assailant's hand so that the girl would get heavily splattered as the actor swung... The hand at the end was disgusting (compliment), but.....[continued]
eutytoalba 3 months ago
Well done! I am a film makling minor in college.
ArchangelAzrael13 4 months ago
love the re-make that they did of this song,but the video could have been much better made.
lildeadred19 4 months ago
nice ccover billy would be proud!
chuckmgjr 6 months ago
Hot.
GoldBagelRS 9 months ago
hmm..
emwjmannen2 10 months ago
dude, anybody else pop a bone?
haterawk666 10 months ago
Nice props, but the acting was absolutely and you should have gotten the girl a better costume. I have to admit though that arm twitching at the end made me lmao.
IgneoBern 11 months ago
There has got to be a LOT of trust there...
SaturnsEthics 1 year ago
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It is very well filmed. The acting on the girls part is not really fitting unless she is autistic. Not meaning to be mean just an observation of maner. My e-mail is SteamLolita@gmail.com Can someone tell me who to contact is I would like to re atempt this video. It's an awesome remdition and I would like to see what I can do with it.
madisonhatter1984 1 year ago
Screw all the haters dude. Any interpretation that is to literal is fanatical. Your interpretation is very interesting. Creepy! Made me want to hurk up my pb & j breakfast! Seriously, good work, keep it up.
alphabitch1331 1 year ago
Dexter meets Abney Park........doesn't fit.
sassmcG 1 year ago
"oh no he's cutting on me...good thing I only have 2 teaspoons of blood..."
rkt739 1 year ago 4
you used the wrong tools for the job. after you broke her legs with the hammer you should have used to nail gun on her feet. the big knife you used at the end should have been used on her face. its not as fine a cut as the scalpel but unless you're removing her face, it doesn't need to be fine. it 's just more intimidating. I'm not sure what you were doing to her stomach I can't help there, but when hacking off her arm you should have used the meat cleaver. the big knife wouldn't have done it.
phorsakyn 1 year ago
@phorsakyn I couldn't care less and be more terrified, maniac.
RedBigButton 9 months ago
looks like snuff ô o
DerOrk 1 year ago
I love this song a lot, it is really hard to find a no-live version by Abney Park so thanks for that and I like so much of this video too ^^ well done :D
Soioblaa12124 1 year ago
More like a red wedding...
R83145 2 years ago 8
nice video real creepy well done
adias06 2 years ago
Interesting interpretation of the song, but I like it. Well done.
Soljourn 2 years ago
A bit to Dexter, but nice editting and the music works very well with it. Abney Park can make most things awesome. Keep up the good work.
Magis25 2 years ago 8
That was way beyond creepy, but in an awesome sort of way.
Kizeira 2 years ago
Well done. Creepy...but since I reckon that was what you were going for...damned fine.
virasabena 2 years ago