Oh yes, this is much better. Makes way more sense, the characters are more understandable, and it doesn't have the negative vibe of the shorter version.
Still great shots. A few moments that could have been shortened a bit in editing. Also, keep working on acting, there's room for improvement.
But I love the subtly of the message: You show and don't tell. Good! -Luke
Nice one jamie. oh and by the way its jared from math class
jarzee12 3 years ago
Good Job that was funny
JMan1913COD4 3 years ago
great job, i like this one better.
MeatloafMedia 3 years ago 2
ok i'm i the only one that saw me flip the page on the computer!..maybe i shouldn't say anything
alienmewe 3 years ago 2
LMFAO I noticed that too.
it's alright though. I'm assuming you're sarah!
I didn't know you acted! you did pretty well
alex, you're great at filming.
I can't word what I'm trying to say correctly right now and if I tried I'd sound like an idiot, so I won't bother.
but you did a great job filming.
great job guys. (:
btw this is molly from french/english class
my favorite part was when the little kid (alex's brother I assume?) yelled out "you're dumb!". it was cute haha
Mijanova 3 years ago
Oh yes, this is much better. Makes way more sense, the characters are more understandable, and it doesn't have the negative vibe of the shorter version.
Still great shots. A few moments that could have been shortened a bit in editing. Also, keep working on acting, there's room for improvement.
But I love the subtly of the message: You show and don't tell. Good! -Luke
TomySky 3 years ago 2