This speech is too long. She talks like she is trying to sell somthg; that always give the false portrayal of a self-benefiting/selfish agenda. Get straight to the message! FIGHT THE POWER! Shes rit about how this sounds like a sermon. Get to the point! the verbose language is making my yawn.
One thing we cann all agree on is that Erica Williams has a GREAT future ahead of her. Good job! You inspire me Erica, keep up the good work :)
IvoirRienna 10 months ago
Good speech but less emotional connotation would be best.
MegaCindy5 1 year ago
This speech is too long. She talks like she is trying to sell somthg; that always give the false portrayal of a self-benefiting/selfish agenda. Get straight to the message! FIGHT THE POWER! Shes rit about how this sounds like a sermon. Get to the point! the verbose language is making my yawn.
duesexmachina01 1 year ago
Im glad to be the first to comment on this...
Now I ll post my comment.
duesexmachina01 1 year ago
Strong!
bromin6 2 years ago