great story and plotline..camera work need some more potential. it need more medium shots and establishing shots. instead of close up shots all the time... and it is dark on some shots, but hey. storyline is important in my books, and good acting(actors)...i thought it was a good one. kudos!
poor sound and lighting, some horrible shots, some bad cuts, decent acting from few actors, overall I would said i'm disappointed. Disappointed because I expected something better from a VFS student.
17:54 - you can see that Kent - the character who died, was actually born in... 19-th century O.o The flowers just didn't cover the date enough. A funny glitch.
Overall - this picture is kinda good! Well written and acted. Too many closeups I think.
Cool! Food for thoughts. Tripod? No! Hand held works better in this case as it is a kind of semi-documentary feel to it. I foresee some more great stuff from these guys when they go pro. :D
Great story, solid performances. I have to disagree with everyone else about the tripod. I found the handheld camera gave it a more realistic feel. I felt like I caught a glimpse of real life; I know some of these characters! I found the ending a bit weak though, as if you were trying to hard to wrap everything up in a nice neat package. All in all a great short and I look forward to seeing more from you. I look forward to seeing a lot more from you in the future :)
intensely motivating and original, but it would of been much easier to watch if a tripod was used, almost all the shots were shaking. and it kinda got irritating by the time where they were standing around the grave.
flicking from the not-shaking view from the grave, to the shaking in the close-up shots was really making me feel a bit dizzy.
The acting was weak, but i can't blame you.
otherwise from that, i could really understand the characters, and the script was GOLD
liekd it too hmm the close ups didnt seems to be a problem but that shaky footage is to Bad to concentrate on such a soft plot and story. Its nothing action like, its more the thing beteween this people so its realy important u can concentrate on that stuff and a shake distract the people. So try Tripod and Staddycam maybe a dolly
great story and plotline..camera work need some more potential. it need more medium shots and establishing shots. instead of close up shots all the time... and it is dark on some shots, but hey. storyline is important in my books, and good acting(actors)...i thought it was a good one. kudos!
shapman87 1 year ago
Alex looks a lot like mark wahlberg hey?! Great acting! Good work.
TheMichelecummins 1 year ago
Hey, good over the shoulder camera shots and good wide shots ...decent acting :)
fav14 1 year ago
poor sound and lighting, some horrible shots, some bad cuts, decent acting from few actors, overall I would said i'm disappointed. Disappointed because I expected something better from a VFS student.
gskowal 2 years ago
Dude I just talked to Rebecca on facebook and she is My FAAAVE actress!
JayInWonderland 2 years ago
1:18 - 1:33 Nice! haha
jlamadrid91 2 years ago
Gaaay!
mytotallyawesomename 2 years ago
the acting had no emotions to it for me..
the plot really had meaning to it
overall it's good
piggyotoSUSHI 2 years ago
17:54 - you can see that Kent - the character who died, was actually born in... 19-th century O.o The flowers just didn't cover the date enough. A funny glitch.
Overall - this picture is kinda good! Well written and acted. Too many closeups I think.
fakeshocker 2 years ago 2
Very good and original plot, great acting and nice direction. I liked the handheld camera. Only thing I disliked was slightly bad sound at times.
5/5
jaseth1337 2 years ago
Cool! Food for thoughts. Tripod? No! Hand held works better in this case as it is a kind of semi-documentary feel to it. I foresee some more great stuff from these guys when they go pro. :D
4nittie 2 years ago 2
Great story, solid performances. I have to disagree with everyone else about the tripod. I found the handheld camera gave it a more realistic feel. I felt like I caught a glimpse of real life; I know some of these characters! I found the ending a bit weak though, as if you were trying to hard to wrap everything up in a nice neat package. All in all a great short and I look forward to seeing more from you. I look forward to seeing a lot more from you in the future :)
nanagaga2001 2 years ago 3
intensely motivating and original, but it would of been much easier to watch if a tripod was used, almost all the shots were shaking. and it kinda got irritating by the time where they were standing around the grave.
flicking from the not-shaking view from the grave, to the shaking in the close-up shots was really making me feel a bit dizzy.
The acting was weak, but i can't blame you.
otherwise from that, i could really understand the characters, and the script was GOLD
i really wish to ee more!
Lardothefox 2 years ago
agree with everything you said. Spot on
LiveLifeUnrated 2 years ago
operator is not good
iqota 2 years ago
One word... TRIPOD.
monkaboo 2 years ago
liked it, few less camera shakes and i'd be great improvement
cryoarc 2 years ago
liekd it too hmm the close ups didnt seems to be a problem but that shaky footage is to Bad to concentrate on such a soft plot and story. Its nothing action like, its more the thing beteween this people so its realy important u can concentrate on that stuff and a shake distract the people. So try Tripod and Staddycam maybe a dolly
theschnitter 2 years ago
I enjoyed it
FireStick16 2 years ago 2
idd to many close-ups and to shaky footage, try more from tripod
sadapindo 2 years ago
ugh the video stopped working for me
occocooccoco 2 years ago
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fabian309 2 years ago
Too many closeups, imo.
ZeMachinima 2 years ago
...kinda dull
chunkymilk0 2 years ago
Quality. Good job.
BorderlineHumor 2 years ago
gosh.
me too.. both points.
derkule 2 years ago
I'll watch this later, so far I've only seen good things frm VFS,
othonor 2 years ago