Cool, but the video looks slow in certain parts, you must make it more intense to entertain people. Besides that, the drawings are cool, so keep them up, hope to see great stuff from you :)
The art was very good! ^-^ Like miserywriter suggested, go a little further into the story. Do that and you should have a lot of people take intrest! Good luck and keep up the great work!
Hmm, the art is interesting but I think your charachters need to be more distinctive, it was a little difficult to tell who was talking. I suppose you're planning to go more into the plot of why he wants to be the greatest fighter and all that later on? You may want to work on the second character a bit too, he seems a little random. Other than that keep up the good work!^^
haha! andrew!!!!
tessie well commented you!!!!
vyesufu 1 year ago
i love gordan freeman better lolz and nice
Sillyantman 3 years ago
page 8 is done
andrew6318 3 years ago
not bad....... i guess not the gretest drawings but nice story.
sasuketrunks 3 years ago
do you know of any way to make my pics look better?
andrew6318 3 years ago
Looks gd, think I need a lesson in movie maker tho cos can't do any of that stuff!! :)
Surfjewels 3 years ago
pretty nice stuff there. looks interesting and id like to see some more stuff. keep it up dude, good job.
parknot100 3 years ago
Cool, but the video looks slow in certain parts, you must make it more intense to entertain people. Besides that, the drawings are cool, so keep them up, hope to see great stuff from you :)
PGV 3 years ago
thanks i have already made the 1st page, and will send you the video when chapter 1 is finished.
andrew6318 3 years ago
The art was very good! ^-^ Like miserywriter suggested, go a little further into the story. Do that and you should have a lot of people take intrest! Good luck and keep up the great work!
XxShadowxxKeeperxX 3 years ago
Thank you so much for your help.
andrew6318 3 years ago
Of course!
XxShadowxxKeeperxX 3 years ago
i love it so much
but u stolzied my song
lol
alix4andrew 3 years ago
Hmm, the art is interesting but I think your charachters need to be more distinctive, it was a little difficult to tell who was talking. I suppose you're planning to go more into the plot of why he wants to be the greatest fighter and all that later on? You may want to work on the second character a bit too, he seems a little random. Other than that keep up the good work!^^
miserywriter 3 years ago
and u have to send me That song or tell me the name it rocks
Sillyantman 3 years ago
This has been flagged as spam show
and go on my blog plz
Sillyantman 3 years ago
A BOY CALLED ANDREW WHO EATS PIES SHOULD BE IN THE DESCRIPTION! lol nice vid
Sillyantman 3 years ago
Cool, keep going on :)
Cinzia7 3 years ago