5)Prop's (need something to make more interesting)
If this a demo reel you just need to rotate the model to let viewer see 360 degree of the model but not zoom in and zoom out. this make other people will get difficulty to view your model accurately. (refer other people demo reel to improve your's)
Your modelling is good, and so are your textures. I'm sure they're better now, but if I could give you one suggestion? Your camera movement is really fast and really erratic. You might try slowing it down a lot. Start with a 360 of the character and then random slow-shots either moving from top to bottom or vice-versa, getting in front and back shots.
Kickass dude, I'd love to see a tutorial on this or something... I've been meaning to base a character of mine off the basic style of Cloud's but no one likes sharing their stuff. If you wish to share with me, I'll give you full props, I only need it to see how I will do mine. But if no, at least let me know where you got your references from.
hi there did you use reference pictures to making your f*%$ing wicked design because i'm trying to design my own and if you remember where you got pictures from thanks
wow, i am very impressed. Are you going to release this to the public or you made it just for yourself? I would love to play around with that model in 3ds max :P
thats crazy XD. but it shouldnt have taken 5 hours to render. i just did an animation thats 550 frames long and it took less than an hour to render, and your computer is probably better than mine. but its probably becuz ur model is harder to render, i dunno.
thanks, i used skylight in 3ds max with light tracer cuz i was too lazy to set up good lighting that was also time saving. thats why it took so long to render. im making sephiroth now so check back , i will probably have put on a vid of him too.
my pc is moderate, but it still took like, 5 hours to render it. it had 400 frames. big companies use a technique called batch rendering, where a massive amounts of computers each render a different part of the whole project.
he is perfect except the hair :(
but still love it <3
zombiiexmassacre 1 month ago
looks like he has shorter Jin Kazama hair o.o
ThePocoamisto 1 year ago
whats the polygon count at?
WickedV3ng3nc3 1 year ago
can i get the link
biznich171 1 year ago
Not bad but you screwed a little with the hair at the back of his head
TalysAlankil 1 year ago
check my cloud strife video
poy360 1 year ago
would it be possible to use a model like this for a game ?
WiggyRap 2 years ago
No, i don't think it would, this looks far too high poly.
traggeydatroll 2 years ago
Of course, it's possible, but this looks more like a cutscene model
MaMastoast 2 years ago
@MaMastoast oh ok thanks
WiggyRap 2 years ago
nice work. looks like him too
diz90productions 2 years ago
He has Goku hair. :P lol
Nice model.
~Meg
DragoonSorceress 2 years ago 6
I think that you shouldn't have made his hair so slicked back....
GuitarGirl1718 2 years ago 7
cool
Dnize 2 years ago
Do you have MSN? I'd like to know how you went through with this model as Im starting myself.
maybeitsandy 2 years ago
I'm hella impressed with the improvements man!
maybeitsandy 2 years ago
thanks
wait for more
carboxyl 2 years ago
what did u use to make the hair? u think u can do a tutorial?
steve0h2004 2 years ago
i guess i'll make one... i should add more videos of my models too..
carboxyl 2 years ago
His head is shaped like Alien....
Maca68 2 years ago
he looks more like noctis from Final Fantasy 13 O_o...xDD
AlchemyOfDawn 2 years ago
ye, only witout the brownish hair
ArtixT7 2 years ago
His hair is just a bit long in the back, and his face looks a little to old, like he looks like he's about 40.
Haha
Other than that, great job!
Didi4sempre 2 years ago 2
i'm just gonna make him again..
third time's the charm :D
carboxyl 2 years ago
Haha good luck with it!
that wasn't bad at all though. 8)
Didi4sempre 2 years ago
Did you use 3ds Max?
ANGRYMAPLE 2 years ago
yus
carboxyl 2 years ago
The stuff you need 2 fix:
1)Hair (To dull)
2)Neck (Is to shot)
3)Cloth (Is to big)
4)Post (Require an action pose)
5)Prop's (need something to make more interesting)
If this a demo reel you just need to rotate the model to let viewer see 360 degree of the model but not zoom in and zoom out. this make other people will get difficulty to view your model accurately. (refer other people demo reel to improve your's)
ngweihong 2 years ago 3
dude
the neck is definitely not too short.
carboxyl 2 years ago 3
@carboxyl Problem is that the collar is too large so his neck looks smaller than it is.
LeaTelamon 5 months ago
he kinda looks like noctis...but all in all thats pretty good! 5/5
1BlueRozez1 2 years ago
Fix the hair, that's it.
il927 2 years ago
PERFECT JOB!
Anthonyduo 2 years ago
:o really cool model of Cloud Strife great job carboxyl.
i like the face and the hair they look cool.
DanEnobisan 2 years ago
where can i download him at ?
triplerivera 2 years ago
his face is a lil...to macho-ish make it more feminish =p
as67as 2 years ago
bak hairs a bit long, but looks good
Bboy0ne90 3 years ago
Really nice model.
Did you make this in 3d Max only or did you create the organic parts in lets say, mudbox or something?
ninthjake 3 years ago
this is just 3ds max.
i think im gonna remake it in zbrush.
carboxyl 3 years ago
Ok cool.
Any chance that you will make Noctis next? =D
ninthjake 3 years ago
I didn't know about him.. but i think i will.
carboxyl 3 years ago
i want to keep it
:0
YunasCrimsonWave 3 years ago
This is really good and it's a year old, do you think you could make one as high quality as in Advent Children and post it?
Gutted94 3 years ago
i guess...
carboxyl 3 years ago
thats badass, just fix his hair in the back a lil and tada.
ThatTerryKid 3 years ago
what software is this?
where can i get it?
SixStringSublime 3 years ago
good modeling
nicoleWANNAbetifa 3 years ago
Your modelling is good, and so are your textures. I'm sure they're better now, but if I could give you one suggestion? Your camera movement is really fast and really erratic. You might try slowing it down a lot. Start with a 360 of the character and then random slow-shots either moving from top to bottom or vice-versa, getting in front and back shots.
Cypherviii 3 years ago
Kickass dude, I'd love to see a tutorial on this or something... I've been meaning to base a character of mine off the basic style of Cloud's but no one likes sharing their stuff. If you wish to share with me, I'll give you full props, I only need it to see how I will do mine. But if no, at least let me know where you got your references from.
xXVannXx 3 years ago
hi there did you use reference pictures to making your f*%$ing wicked design because i'm trying to design my own and if you remember where you got pictures from thanks
cardboardboxs 3 years ago
:P no answer yet huh?
FraGx4 3 years ago
wow, i am very impressed. Are you going to release this to the public or you made it just for yourself? I would love to play around with that model in 3ds max :P
scope51791 3 years ago
uhh. i made that a while ago, and its not very good compared to what im capable of now.
carboxyl 3 years ago
Oh, ok. It looked pretty good in that video.
scope51791 3 years ago
right now im making alucard from sotn :D
carboxyl 3 years ago
it looks like a KH2 rip to me ^^
Slygar 4 years ago
i was looking at pics of the kh2 when i made it
violectic 4 years ago
thanks dude model is great, i rigged it myself though i noticed a few mistakes in your previous rig. works pretty good.
Alec013 4 years ago
dude did you find it yet? cant start without it, everything else is ready :S
Alec013 4 years ago
:A ur a great modeler XD
i got a crappy cloud strife model from turbosquid, only to practice animating tho. if i cud model like this it wud be sooo AWESOME!!
Alec013 4 years ago
thats crazy XD. but it shouldnt have taken 5 hours to render. i just did an animation thats 550 frames long and it took less than an hour to render, and your computer is probably better than mine. but its probably becuz ur model is harder to render, i dunno.
nice model btw.
Alec013 4 years ago
thanks, i used skylight in 3ds max with light tracer cuz i was too lazy to set up good lighting that was also time saving. thats why it took so long to render. im making sephiroth now so check back , i will probably have put on a vid of him too.
carboxyl 4 years ago
thats the best cloud model iv seen XD.
is it rigged?
Alec013 4 years ago
yea
carboxyl 4 years ago
How fast does you PC have to be to make one like this?
CGA212 4 years ago
my pc is moderate, but it still took like, 5 hours to render it. it had 400 frames. big companies use a technique called batch rendering, where a massive amounts of computers each render a different part of the whole project.
carboxyl 4 years ago