If she's gunna marry anyone, it's ME. And we're probably going to be polygamists >.> Considering the long ass list of people who'd like to marry her, too..... so..... maybe you can join in after all XD
seriously thats how good you were! The only thing i would say is clean up the phrases and maybe not cut off at the end of each phrase so abrupt. Also the last section is a key change make it noticeable. As in bring it out and really give it oomph!
If she's gunna marry anyone, it's ME. And we're probably going to be polygamists >.> Considering the long ass list of people who'd like to marry her, too..... so..... maybe you can join in after all XD
Nahxsuaisdreadful 8 months ago
WOW WILL YOU MARRY ME?
seriously thats how good you were! The only thing i would say is clean up the phrases and maybe not cut off at the end of each phrase so abrupt. Also the last section is a key change make it noticeable. As in bring it out and really give it oomph!
but i really love it!!!
bubbaXzone 1 year ago