Your piece moved very well, and the acting was good. However, there were two bits that didn't quite fit: The Hat and the Squirrel. They weren't part of your story of the musical Frances of Assisi and should have been cut. It would have made you film tighter and funnier.
That's the beauty of working on a 24 hour shoot: It forces you to just be done. But, yeah, there are things I'd go back and change with more time on mine too. I hear ya.
I'm here to help in whatever way I can. Let me know if you ever need anything. -Luke
Ha, yeah, it definitely has it's good side too. I get kind of carried away tweaking things sometimes, trying to make sure everything is just how I want it. It's kind of nice to make a movie and just be done with it, whether you're 100% happy with it or not.
Dustin this has been my most favorite film from you so far I think. I laughed several times. The writing, acting, filming and editing were all brilliantly done. You have some real talent. Good luck in the contest!
What's with the guy standing there at 0:48?
GoodApolloImSteve 3 years ago
he was admiyaring Dustins artistic statement for gerbils.
Horun437 3 years ago
That's me you @#!@&#("
Fletcher92xxxxxxxxxx 3 years ago
awesome, that luke guy said everythi'n. so, i'm gonna go play with my bunnies. they have the mangekyou sharingan. i trained them on using it.
Horun437 3 years ago
you play blackbird really well.
GoodApolloImSteve 3 years ago
Really enjoyed the video
redaimee 3 years ago
Haha awesome Dustin.
mesystudios 3 years ago
Quite good.
Your piece moved very well, and the acting was good. However, there were two bits that didn't quite fit: The Hat and the Squirrel. They weren't part of your story of the musical Frances of Assisi and should have been cut. It would have made you film tighter and funnier.
Otherwise, a lot of fun. -Luke
TomySky 4 years ago
Thanks man, especially for the criticism. It helps a lot
Yeah there's a lot of stuff I'd like to change looking back at this now. That's the problem with making a movie in 24 hours.
SillverTree 4 years ago
That's the beauty of working on a 24 hour shoot: It forces you to just be done. But, yeah, there are things I'd go back and change with more time on mine too. I hear ya.
I'm here to help in whatever way I can. Let me know if you ever need anything. -Luke
Production-Now
TomySky 4 years ago
Ha, yeah, it definitely has it's good side too. I get kind of carried away tweaking things sometimes, trying to make sure everything is just how I want it. It's kind of nice to make a movie and just be done with it, whether you're 100% happy with it or not.
SillverTree 4 years ago
Agreed.
-Luke
Production-Now
TomySky 4 years ago
Good luck.
a4cts 4 years ago
haha i love it! "HE WANTS TO BE IN HERE!!"
Bombers172517 4 years ago
Nice Dustin but why the hell wasn't I told about this!!
aannddyy353 4 years ago
This is definitely my favorite of your stuff.
blackhelmetman 4 years ago
That was great, ha!
JereMedia01 4 years ago
This is pretty awesome.
Psyxosis 4 years ago
Incredible.
akuma125 4 years ago
Incredible.
akuma125 4 years ago
I laughed so hard. More than once. Great job.
deadkenny3000 4 years ago
this is fantastic!
Ashburyproductions 4 years ago
Dustin this has been my most favorite film from you so far I think. I laughed several times. The writing, acting, filming and editing were all brilliantly done. You have some real talent. Good luck in the contest!
ChrisPalmieri 4 years ago
I love it.
Very good.
AMFilmsMedia 4 years ago
Ha ha, this is amazing. I'm beginning to see common themes in your work.
TonyHex13 4 years ago
haha another amazing movie dustin
jumpingwhitebean 4 years ago
This is great.
jaclynlauren 4 years ago