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  • I'd be cool if they're were more parts of this or if you turned it into a movie.

  • I'd rather this not get onto the comment board, it's more of a question really. Are you interested in making a non-transformation film? I know this is going to sound stupid, but the thing is I have a story for a film that I believe you would be great at. You probably get that alot though, and even so I have no real way to do this on my own due to lack of funding and equipment I think it's right up your alley. I'd appreciate a message back if you can or are interested.

  • @Fightingpacifist21 There are several non TF scripts floating around that I've been interested in. I would do something none TF - but it would have to be something that I felt really passionate about. And that could be done within a modest budget. Unless we somehow get backers to help fund the project.

  • Y'know I've watched this probably a dozen times and I liked it every time, but one thing kinda nags at me... it kinda looks rushed to me. The very end I mean, where the Vamp gets his heart ripped out. Immediately after his heart is removed he drops to reveal the girl, and where the "Big Reveal" is all well and good shouldn't her strength, speed and power be implied? By calling her one of the "Princesses" the viewer would catch on naturally on her abilities. Not trying to judge, only advice.

  • @Fightingpacifist21 Good point. And yes... this was rushed. I think we shot most of this in one night. The story was based on by comic, TOUCHED BY THE HAND OF GOD (over at Femur's site). And I had to do many a compromise just to insure we shot this much. Thanks for the feedback - always appreciated ;)

  • What is the frame rate? 24 frames pre second or 30?

    Love the use of ANAHKI:3 wasn't expecting to see her.

  • Is the myth behind this real?

  • Anne Rice LOL.

  • Cool!!! You got the joke :)

  • The possibilities of the adventures and battles that lies ahead for Erik(a) is just too much to take! A TG Vampire superheroine is just an awesome take!

    Say... Seeing as Erik turns into Erika at night and that Kyle and the other bloodkilling were-woman from 'The Kiss' turn into females every night of the Full moon... Think about it! A battle of the gender-cursed monsters in an intense and death-defying brawl! (or I guess technically it would be an awesome cat-fight!)

  • The ending was funny! I thought Jade was going to take a bite out of the bloody heart right before the credits rolled....

  • LOL that would have been great!!!

  • Is there a continuation to this story? I see such potential in it, with the background info you gave in part 2.

  • Yes. This was just a small section of a larger story I wrote back in the 90's called "Touched By The Hand Of God". There's a heck of a lot more that was supposed to happen beyond this. But I thought it might be cool to at least shoot a little bit of The Interview scene with Erik(a) and Melissa - who are two of the main characters.

  • I'd be interested to know what happens next. The interview leaves the viewer hanging for more, imo.

  • Well I don't want to say too much more just in case I ever actually get my story published or even made into a movie one day. But let's just say Erik(a) ends up gathering a rag tag team of his/her own to confront the bad guys... including... some nasty and older vampires that want her for their own from around the world (Japan and Russia specifically). And at the same time - fighting the urge to become EVIL.

  • Oh great, you have a talent for making people hang around on cliffs. Sounds like a great idea.  I would love to know more and I think I may know where your story lead. But, that's just guesswork.

  • Yeah... I get the "want to see more" bit. I totally understand. But when you have limited budgets and limited time with the same cast and crews... you have to compromise on how much you can really pull off.

  • what was "Touched By The Hand of God" about if you dont mind me asking

  • Well like I mentioned above - it's about Erik/Erika. And follows his/her story with dealing with various evil vampires, aquiring a rag tag team of friends, and also dealing with her own inner demons that can turn her evil at any given moment. I wrote the story back in the 90's. Even started creating a comic that I posted on The Siren Song above 5-6 years ago.

  • I'm sorry, I hust had to ask this... Am I the only one that thinks it's kinda funny that the evil guy died that way? I mean, first the sound when he got his heart ripped out, the look on his face, then the music? MakoDap, in no way am I trying to be offensive. I like your stuff, but I won't lie when I say that was actually kinda funny.

  • I'm not offended at all :)  I actually thought it was supposed to be a little humorous myself. That's why the end bith with both girls is a little funny. This was just a lead in to it.

  • can u plz stop censoring them?

  • so what will happen to the siren song at second life? Ive been trying to watch come TG movies but they never come on, do i hafed to join the group to watch them mako?

  • If you go to The Siren Song this weekend on SecondLife - the full uncensored version of ELEVEN is playing at The Kabuki Theater. When I get the chance to log on is when I can update the theater.

  • oh really? Sweet! Thanks mako.

  • mako i really really want to see your videos on second life can you added me to your island my name is superzinnober dembo thanks a lot

  • It is a good thing your on vacation to relax and do other things. but as the saying goes in your case, can never keep a tf filmer down.

    But it was a shame however that superheroes did not come into your clips and films cuz in the case of this, a hero like my yet to rise Krystalman could have helped Erica in defeating the darkness.

    In my creative mind i tend to make up story ideas using shows and such even with characters made up or from other areas of story to fashion in how i liked.

  • Your clips are cool. But i would love to c one about a guy turned into a girl by a womens hand. like a witch to do the job. Any way keep them coming.

  • Guess that could have worked for THE REVENGE. But we already had so many gender tf stories, and we wanted to try something else for a change ;)

  • Wow, great story! Sadly, it's the last of a great series. (Unless you all change your minds, of course..wink, wink!)

  • Thanks. Never say never ;)  I can't even rely on myself as to what I'll be doing next. It always changes!!

  • All I can say is Mako does it again!

    A VERY good story, and the length of the video helped tell it with depth too!

  • Thanks. I agree. It's a shame we couldn't make longer movies... but it really does increase the budget and time (of which we don't have a lot of).

  • I agree with CNash85, the length definitely helped this one out as far as story development and pacing went. I sufferd a bit of Attention Deficit and was confused about why Lea gave Jade the twenty (went back to Part I) but otherwise a nice effort.

    Q1. Did you "eliminate" the boom operator to avoid paying him?

    Q2. Was the "Egypt/Roman" footage original or stock film footage?  Nice camera work, suspenseful.

    Q3. Are Jade and Lea working on other projects?

  • Thanks. I can see why you might have forgotten about the $20 - guess it's kind of a good sign if it means you were very much engaged in the story. Or you could have been bored to death ;)

  • Q1 = Nope. We had a boom operator. But it was his first time at it - and it was recorded lower than I would have liked. But what can you do?

    Q2 = Some of it is original and some of it is stock. It's really a mix of the two.

    Q3 = I believe so. Jade just helped produce a low budget horror movie and was a dancer in PINK's last performance on the MTV Music Awards. Lea has been doing some model work and I believe was in a music video not too long ago... can't remember which one though.

  • Good to hear Jade's keeping busy - she definately did good throughout the series.

  • Yeah. Jade's a lot of fun to work with. I auditioned her for The Black Rabbit and she got one of the parts in it. When we decided to do the series I thought she would be cool to work with again - and she was excited to do them as well. She even directed The Trap. We did 2 little TF TG shorts for the TFTU DVD and Jade helped us out with one of them too.

  • Wasn't bored (far from it), just concentrating too hard on what was going on and it was such an off-hand, tossed off comment that I ignored it.

  • Np ;)

  • This one's probably my favourite TFTU episode in terms of storytelling, direction and acting. Perhaps it's due to the length of the story - it can have a lengthy TF sequence and get in more characterisation and plotting, compared to most of the others, where there was little time either side of the TF for more than a set-up and denouement.

  • es mas de lo mismo

  • Definite progression in film making from the first attempt, well done good effects and tension. So wait to see what u come up with next all these are good experiences and learning curves for u to master.

    Never say never ?

  • Congrats on completing the series. I guess the only question is now, are there any scenarios/morph sequences/ left that 'you' feel you want to do in live action?

  • That's a great question. I still have lots of TF stories I'd love to bring to the screen... but what it really comes down to is the execution of making it all happen. And that is a question I can't answer at the moment.

    I am currently burnt out, and need to take a break for a while. Once I get back on my feet... I'll figure out what my next step is ;)

  • nice, I like how she still paid the 20.

  • Lea & Jade actually came up with that right there on the spot. We ended up keeping it in the final version. It was really hard not to laugh when they did it - cause it was totally improvisational.

  • well it worked out great

  • Great show. I have enjoyed every episodes. Hope to see some more of your work.

  • Cool, really funny at the end.

  • It... was... brilliant! It's a pity that it's also the last video you'll make. You were marvolous.

  • Thanks. Last video? Not sure it's the last video I'll make, but it is the last TFTU episode we'll be making.

  • ooohhh. Then, if you decided to make more videos, which videos will you make?

  • Wow.

  • Okay....

    1.) That's one HOT vampire at the end! WOOF! It'd be hard NOT to avoid that voice and eyes! :-D

    2.) LOVE the music when Melissa "waves". Even the ending made me smile broadly. Will be nice that Erika can turn back to Erik in the morning, too. ;)

    3.) Yechy heart! But I love Melissa'a reaction at the end, too. LOL She shares mine. ;)

    4.) I was waiting for some reference to Anne Rice. LOL

    5.) THANK YOU FOR ALL THESE VIDEOS!!! I will ALWAYS be a fan! *huge hug*

  • that was a real heart jerker sorry for bad pun/joke

  • first comment, nice job btw

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