A Poem for Crazylittleemily

[esterday1708]

omg lmao youre crazy!! humoing puppies is so ridiculous!!! lol

i loved her because she was hot.

omg!! =P

[squal3469]

God damn, put on a shirt.

[nigahiga3]

u suck omg lol pez wtf man are u crazy? HUMPING PUPPIES WTF!!

[whothennow24]

Well, the girl I wrote it for really liked the poem, and I guess that's all that really matters. (And it's obviously a stupid poem, guy.)

[Sinyaro]

cuuuute <3

although one small constructive crit, try not to use obvious rhymes, that seem forced, a bit.

like foundation and nation, that seemed odd.

puppies humping...?

amen! <3

good luck in the poetry contest!

[whothennow24]

Haha, I wasn't really going to put this in a poetry contest. It's all a joke, this poem.

[Deathheads69]

Stalker

[whothennow24]

Stalker? Or perhaps love?

[the7thwreck]

aw you wrote her a poem!

[whothennow24]

I did indeed.

[justlooking242]

is this guy for real ?

[whothennow24]

I am indeed.