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  • carry me home like a phone call for e t wake me up hold me feed me discretely make me luv make me hate be my sweetie i need a drink, i'll take some sweettea with a side of sugar my bodys sore and my mind is gone styles all wrong and I feel like a booger pick me up off the floor darling girl pick up the pieces to the broken world & throw away my key im bout to hurl dont need these nights in my recalection mask the stench of whiskey and the erection thats the way it goes babe life suspension
  • Wrote a song to this tune, check it out and tell me what you think!

  • Woke up to the echos of my phone ringin/

    aint the type of mornin u wake up to hear the birds singin/

    with the toilet bowl substitudin the ceiling/

    no words descirbe wtf i am feeling/

    it was just one of those/

    nights of alcohal overdose huggin my toilet bowl/

    throwing up everything from the night before/

    with a headache drillin to my brains core/

    trynin to find a balance and get my ass of this bathroom floor/

  • @fallenrise321 It would be cooler if you said "trying to find a balance and get my ass off god's bathroom floor" because then it would be two head nods to the master who you no doubt style ripped from in the first place.

  • @kevinshinkle wow you have powerfull observation skills i bet your mommys special boy huh ,,

  • and you did, through the rain and the snow you carried me home, burried the bone with a few glances to the left and a few to the right, feelin uptight cause what you did was wrong and this is that song this is that song that day you played along and it went on and on and on and on it was politics, and your my first lady everything we did back then it was crazy, yeah i stayed out with you cause it was better than sleep, better than dreams and better than deep thoughts before i fell off.

  • carry me home please garry i wanna go home get in teh car strap me in and lets slow mo drive, see if u go 2 fast im gunna puke i ate 6 pokeballs i dropped da nuke!! carry me home im in alien zones cant see straight jus leave me alone put a shot in my dome take me out of this pain out of the game im sick im insane feel like im dieing cant eat or drink done poppin pills man fuckin ecstasy -- insted i shoot up the brown, get it from outta town leave me feeling bomb so numb no sound
  • 500 characters aint enough to say, the way you truly made me feel that day, i had a broken heart, broken soul, and a broken mind, thought you were the one i've wanted to find, things were great, i dont know what happened, must of been the love i was stuck and trapped in, you avoided that the word, i know it was only weeks, but i thought at the time we had reached a peak, you left me there feeling guilty and weak, made me believe that no longer should i seek,,,,, told you there weren't enough :/

  • carry me home- baby please

    im down on my knees

    seen you from across the sea

    knew that you the one for me

    i go by the name of jc

    ill provide you anything you need

    erase the weed - cuz i dont need

    indeed lets plant our seed &

    proceed to breed after we - get married

  • Cuz these jerks don't deserve to mark your body like you were their property. Fuck these Bitches! Ladies, sing it with me...IF YOU FEEL ME,LETS IMPOWER OUR MENTALITY. TOGETHER WE CAN SAVE EACHOTHER. JUST CONSIDER ME, YOUR FALLEN ANGEL!

  • Like i said, i'll fuck you up if you ever come back to my presence. Ha! Revenge is sweet, isn't it? I wouldn't be surprise to see you on the streets. Still, you twisted my mind so now i don't trust anyone, only me. My defenses are up, and it sucks, but.. I bet i wont date another guy whos abusive. I got a story to tell so all the women please listen, even if you're only 12. Don't let it come to scars and hospital beds.

  • i always knew when that 40oz corrupted ur mind cuz, u acted like a bitch, now i can say all this shit cuz compared to u im too legit,

    and i no longer cry, instead, i listened, and paid attention..

    I'LL FUCK YOU UP IF U EVER COME BACK TO ME PRESENTS!!

  • its, too late, to apologize, for all the mistakes that you made,

    u didnt give a shit then, so now im left forever scarred, and no, u werent worth it. and it bugs me, cuz im forced to reminise about those times, every fucken day of my life.

    u know i use to be so fucken kind, i never had to fight, alwasy got that static off my chest until u came around with stupidity on ur breath.

  • please dont look now. there aint no hook now . i got right back up after i was took down . its part of my few values , some good, some badd too . some values i had when i had you id travel the world too see you for one night id give you my life it made you feel just right id take my eyes out if it would give you sight atlantic to pacific, coast to coast . panic and trickin . hoax by hoax. roast the most . toast the rest . lowest on the totem pole, but imma give it my best
  • was always a lost soul, bound for nothin considered great

    maybe i wont know, but everyday when i smoke dro

    get in the zone n flow its like a megaphone

    tellin me im never gettin home

    gotta change my style; cant remember where to go

    its gonna take a while, cuz i take shit slow

    put in the fullest effort, otherwise it's jus a fools endeavor

    let the path appear before my eyes

    gotta heart of gold, I been here since forty nine

    ill never be cornered by any borderline, that was the former guy...

  • somebody carry me home, tried to brave the winds, I got buried in snow, sometimes the world is scary n cold, but i barely care i rarely hear what im told, so ill find out lifes lessons on my own, make my mistakes, let the blessins unfold, they fell from the sky, but the flow was sent from below, a devil in disguise, or an angel from up high, can i really be both or is one just lyin?

  • so i dont know where home is, heaven? hell? anywhere where theres nothing to sell, cuz all this fake marketing is puttin us in a spell, magic illusions, tragedy brewin, what we had is in ruins, our ancestors roots is/ dug up, i still remember when we moved in/ dumb luck, that i ever made one buck, wasnt a greedy chump, yea ive been beaten n jumped, but i guess im peaceful, so what? i take it easy, no such/ thing as livin wit hate in my heart, thats how i was made from the start

  • """""Got to change my way of living.........."""""" """""Got to change my style..............""""" For a second i thought this fool had me i know that my rhymes aint too shabby got to get me a cabby and stay off alley dont want robbers to come and grab me might not lose but i get bruised badly a fight is what people watch madly i know its true, but it has to end sadly get dropped get beat get sacked cuz once your gone man theres no going back you lost and yet u cant face the fact
  • and wonder how your body is still intact

    lucky enough u didn't get jacked

    if there's a friend, i always got his back

    id be the first one to help him talk smack

    start the fight? N soon you'll get wacked

    its the intelligence that you lack.......

    """""Got to change my way of living..........""""""

    """""Got to change my style.............."""""

  • You start to think life is worthless

    Smoking crack wont make things hurt less

    all your doing is making a huge mess

    like a girl fussing about her prom dress

    you gata know when life puts you to the test

    you gata try hard and soon you'll be the best

    but until then put your head down and rest.......

  • i am a dopest rapper

    rapper is dopest , happer

    -ly ever after

    i am in the presence like santa

    boom boom

    i be running on the moon soon

    yes i bring heats

    like a beat

    i r sonic the hedge hog

    and now IM GONE!

  • Half the knack and ya lack the tactics

    Ya mask the fact that ya fa*gs are bastards

    That's the crap that distracts the acts that I have to blast in the face of disgrace but it had to happen

  • why do you guys say everyone sucks at freestyle? When half the time you didn't leave anything better. Can't we all agree we love Atmos and be together? Just having fun, the art of freestyle forever. You can't imagine how much fun i'm having Didn't even notice you over there being rude I thought we were buds at the show dude? But Atmosphere fans only bicker on the youtube Cuz the comments never are sincere Why can't we all get along We all love the 'sphere
  • nice bruh

  • hahah nice +1 thumbs :P

  • 123 not for you but for me

    we'll just see let it be

    whose the worst amoung us

    the lies we cant trust eachother

    especially a lover

    popped into my head

  • finally given a chance to live the girls glance made him adjust his stance pull up his pants and find his soul inside the woman that hides in all your hearts but you dont pull her out cause it hurts too much so just let me crunch, down the stories im not in a hurry im just tryin to find that one the will free my mind show me the signs that will maybe make life less of a grind but everytime i think i find her she says no thank you im fine. so i walk away like i guess im mine.
  • Now.... i cant lie like the rest man so far you da best and..... i'll give you that,

    dont know who you are

    or what you is

    but i dont fuckin care cuz thats the way it is

    Life flys by you know that aint no lie but you had her in your grasps and let her slip.............. Help Me Fix It Up or Add On....... i liked what you wrote give you Props

  • LOL at the wife who keeps going down on your closest friends

  • i just remembered that you made this instru for me when i needed it while back much love bro and looks like kkillbrb either cant rap or is really funny wrong flow lol

    let me give it a spin:

    she believed no man would tell her the truth even her own father fucked with her views so she fights figures nothing to lose in the end she was just a tool to be used

    he soul was put on auction for no value was told no1 in the world will ever love you felt the weight of every word even though it was untrue

  • lol man you fucking suck i mean seriously goddamn you're just mad kaptain told the truth you are so pathetic man do you think since you freestyle rude vulgar and obnoxious you-re good? kaptain fucking ripped you and made it have a meaning like the song is supposed to have unlike you and you pathetic attempt of a crack

  • and bt is wasnt crack on ur skill he just didnt really get what you were trying to do with those lyrics i dont either for a matter of fact.

  • let me flow...

    walked in on my wife givin head to my room mate

    she wouldnt even blow me i had to masterbate

    it was late i just ate cake i lay awake

    thinkin bout crimes and hate what an awful day

    i go to work everyday around 5 in the morning

    fuck my bosses secretary

    come home smoke bowls and drink tequila and cherries

  • haha that i like flows good and it tells a lil story

    now let me see...

    little girl was everything she wanted to be her father was just to lazy to see she thought her dreams would be reality free

    his drama was of no equal every single problem just had another sequel in the end he lost his free will guess hes just another victim to the worlds evil

    baby girls its just me and you against the world you the only one who can save got to be sure cant live on maybe carry me home before i go crazy

  • baby girls its just me and you against the world you the only one who can save me got to be sure cant live on maybe carry me home before i go crazy

    edit left out a word or two

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  • u wack niga..

  • u wack

  • wow man i mean wow that was so gay what was the point of that an insult to kapt? wow man just give up i mean damn is there a point at all and he was right youre dumb shit dont flow with the song right this song is supposed to have meaningful lyrics which kaptain provided all you did was bring down the song im not saying you suck but if a gonna spit on an a atmosphere instrumental spit some deep shit and not some pointless garbage about his mom when he didnt even come close to going that far

  • you gotta good point but i gotta few errors i lay awake at dark thinkin of personal terrors cops chasin my 3 am in the morning non stop runnin their startin to get boring i ran like a pussy like no other i ran laughing and yellin mutha fuckas!!! hitched hiked got picked up by a trucker got home to find my wife goin down on my brother i was drunk im really sorry but i went to the gun store capped my brother in the head and one in the whore an then i unloaded a full clips more
  • this is def gewd to get fucked up to...lol then 'carry me home'

  • nice post! by giving out a download link it prevents $lug from raping his fans any further...

  • Damn Max, you post nothing but the best!! thanks bro

  • thats what I do.

    thanks for the love

  • i'd like to hear what slug sounds like with out the backgrounds...think you could do something like that? a comparison between the vocals and the insturmentals.

    ?

    :)

  • You mean an acapella....

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