carry me home like a phone call for e t wake me up hold me feed me discretely make me luv make me hate be my sweetie i need a drink, i'll take some sweettea with a side of sugar my bodys sore and my mind is gone styles all wrong and I feel like a booger pick me up off the floor darling girl pick up the pieces to the broken world & throw away my key im bout to hurl dont need these nights in my recalection mask the stench of whiskey and the erection thats the way it goes babe life suspension
@fallenrise321 It would be cooler if you said "trying to find a balance and get my ass off god's bathroom floor" because then it would be two head nods to the master who you no doubt style ripped from in the first place.
and you did, through the rain and the snow you carried me home, burried the bone with a few glances to the left and a few to the right, feelin uptight cause what you did was wrong and this is that song this is that song that day you played along and it went on and on and on and on it was politics, and your my first lady everything we did back then it was crazy, yeah i stayed out with you cause it was better than sleep, better than dreams and better than deep thoughts before i fell off.
carry me home please garry i wanna go home get in teh car strap me in and lets slow mo drive, see if u go 2 fast im gunna puke i ate 6 pokeballs i dropped da nuke!! carry me home im in alien zones cant see straight jus leave me alone put a shot in my dome take me out of this pain out of the game im sick im insane feel like im dieing cant eat or drink done poppin pills man fuckin ecstasy -- insted i shoot up the brown, get it from outta town leave me feeling bomb so numb no sound
500 characters aint enough to say, the way you truly made me feel that day, i had a broken heart, broken soul, and a broken mind, thought you were the one i've wanted to find, things were great, i dont know what happened, must of been the love i was stuck and trapped in, you avoided that the word, i know it was only weeks, but i thought at the time we had reached a peak, you left me there feeling guilty and weak, made me believe that no longer should i seek,,,,, told you there weren't enough :/
Cuz these jerks don't deserve to mark your body like you were their property. Fuck these Bitches! Ladies, sing it with me...IF YOU FEEL ME,LETS IMPOWER OUR MENTALITY. TOGETHER WE CAN SAVE EACHOTHER. JUST CONSIDER ME, YOUR FALLEN ANGEL!
Like i said, i'll fuck you up if you ever come back to my presence. Ha! Revenge is sweet, isn't it? I wouldn't be surprise to see you on the streets. Still, you twisted my mind so now i don't trust anyone, only me. My defenses are up, and it sucks, but.. I bet i wont date another guy whos abusive. I got a story to tell so all the women please listen, even if you're only 12. Don't let it come to scars and hospital beds.
its, too late, to apologize, for all the mistakes that you made,
u didnt give a shit then, so now im left forever scarred, and no, u werent worth it. and it bugs me, cuz im forced to reminise about those times, every fucken day of my life.
u know i use to be so fucken kind, i never had to fight, alwasy got that static off my chest until u came around with stupidity on ur breath.
please dont look now. there aint no hook now . i got right back up after i was took down . its part of my few values , some good, some badd too . some values i had when i had you id travel the world too see you for one night id give you my life it made you feel just right id take my eyes out if it would give you sight atlantic to pacific, coast to coast . panic and trickin . hoax by hoax. roast the most . toast the rest . lowest on the totem pole, but imma give it my best
somebody carry me home, tried to brave the winds, I got buried in snow, sometimes the world is scary n cold, but i barely care i rarely hear what im told, so ill find out lifes lessons on my own, make my mistakes, let the blessins unfold, they fell from the sky, but the flow was sent from below, a devil in disguise, or an angel from up high, can i really be both or is one just lyin?
so i dont know where home is, heaven? hell? anywhere where theres nothing to sell, cuz all this fake marketing is puttin us in a spell, magic illusions, tragedy brewin, what we had is in ruins, our ancestors roots is/ dug up, i still remember when we moved in/ dumb luck, that i ever made one buck, wasnt a greedy chump, yea ive been beaten n jumped, but i guess im peaceful, so what? i take it easy, no such/ thing as livin wit hate in my heart, thats how i was made from the start
"""""Got to change my way of living.........."""""" """""Got to change my style..............""""" For a second i thought this fool had me i know that my rhymes aint too shabby got to get me a cabby and stay off alley dont want robbers to come and grab me might not lose but i get bruised badly a fight is what people watch madly i know its true, but it has to end sadly get dropped get beat get sacked cuz once your gone man theres no going back you lost and yet u cant face the fact
why do you guys say everyone sucks at freestyle? When half the time you didn't leave anything better. Can't we all agree we love Atmos and be together? Just having fun, the art of freestyle forever. You can't imagine how much fun i'm having Didn't even notice you over there being rude I thought we were buds at the show dude? But Atmosphere fans only bicker on the youtube Cuz the comments never are sincere Why can't we all get along We all love the 'sphere
finally given a chance to live the girls glance made him adjust his stance pull up his pants and find his soul inside the woman that hides in all your hearts but you dont pull her out cause it hurts too much so just let me crunch, down the stories im not in a hurry im just tryin to find that one the will free my mind show me the signs that will maybe make life less of a grind but everytime i think i find her she says no thank you im fine. so i walk away like i guess im mine.
Now.... i cant lie like the rest man so far you da best and..... i'll give you that,
dont know who you are
or what you is
but i dont fuckin care cuz thats the way it is
Life flys by you know that aint no lie but you had her in your grasps and let her slip.............. Help Me Fix It Up or Add On....... i liked what you wrote give you Props
i just remembered that you made this instru for me when i needed it while back much love bro and looks like kkillbrb either cant rap or is really funny wrong flow lol
let me give it a spin:
she believed no man would tell her the truth even her own father fucked with her views so she fights figures nothing to lose in the end she was just a tool to be used
he soul was put on auction for no value was told no1 in the world will ever love you felt the weight of every word even though it was untrue
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carry me home your mom kept saying as she laid there half unconcious bare she was butt naked as she took it up her ass when i pulled out my dick came a bubble of gas shes a smelly bitch loose and wet put a leash on treat her like my pet she always drunk a fuck tonight definate thats not a bet dont forget the flows i spit by now your jaws probably dropped the rhymes i spit get tooken by cops i keep a microphone and recorder in my kit im sittin here flowin ur slitten ur wrists
lol man you fucking suck i mean seriously goddamn you're just mad kaptain told the truth you are so pathetic man do you think since you freestyle rude vulgar and obnoxious you-re good? kaptain fucking ripped you and made it have a meaning like the song is supposed to have unlike you and you pathetic attempt of a crack
haha that i like flows good and it tells a lil story
now let me see...
little girl was everything she wanted to be her father was just to lazy to see she thought her dreams would be reality free
his drama was of no equal every single problem just had another sequel in the end he lost his free will guess hes just another victim to the worlds evil
baby girls its just me and you against the world you the only one who can save got to be sure cant live on maybe carry me home before i go crazy
wow man i mean wow that was so gay what was the point of that an insult to kapt? wow man just give up i mean damn is there a point at all and he was right youre dumb shit dont flow with the song right this song is supposed to have meaningful lyrics which kaptain provided all you did was bring down the song im not saying you suck but if a gonna spit on an a atmosphere instrumental spit some deep shit and not some pointless garbage about his mom when he didnt even come close to going that far
you gotta good point but i gotta few errors i lay awake at dark thinkin of personal terrors cops chasin my 3 am in the morning non stop runnin their startin to get boring i ran like a pussy like no other i ran laughing and yellin mutha fuckas!!! hitched hiked got picked up by a trucker got home to find my wife goin down on my brother i was drunk im really sorry but i went to the gun store capped my brother in the head and one in the whore an then i unloaded a full clips more
you mean acapella no man vodka vodka i want somthing else or ill sock ya ok man ok man what do you need a girlfreind some whiskey and a sack of weed ya feel me yeah now shut up please man fuck you no fuck you i dont think you have a clue what? who do you think your talking to! i dont know but you smell like poo oh yeah i shit my pants i ate tofu did you vomit your starting to drool
i'd like to hear what slug sounds like with out the backgrounds...think you could do something like that? a comparison between the vocals and the insturmentals.
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EMIN3Mfan2010 1 month ago
DJScallywag 8 months ago
Wrote a song to this tune, check it out and tell me what you think!
Garbloom 10 months ago
Woke up to the echos of my phone ringin/
aint the type of mornin u wake up to hear the birds singin/
with the toilet bowl substitudin the ceiling/
no words descirbe wtf i am feeling/
it was just one of those/
nights of alcohal overdose huggin my toilet bowl/
throwing up everything from the night before/
with a headache drillin to my brains core/
trynin to find a balance and get my ass of this bathroom floor/
fallenrise321 1 year ago
@fallenrise321 It would be cooler if you said "trying to find a balance and get my ass off god's bathroom floor" because then it would be two head nods to the master who you no doubt style ripped from in the first place.
kevinshinkle 1 year ago
@kevinshinkle wow you have powerfull observation skills i bet your mommys special boy huh ,,
fallenrise321 1 year ago
and you did, through the rain and the snow you carried me home, burried the bone with a few glances to the left and a few to the right, feelin uptight cause what you did was wrong and this is that song this is that song that day you played along and it went on and on and on and on it was politics, and your my first lady everything we did back then it was crazy, yeah i stayed out with you cause it was better than sleep, better than dreams and better than deep thoughts before i fell off.
koslives 1 year ago
kkillbrb 1 year ago
500 characters aint enough to say, the way you truly made me feel that day, i had a broken heart, broken soul, and a broken mind, thought you were the one i've wanted to find, things were great, i dont know what happened, must of been the love i was stuck and trapped in, you avoided that the word, i know it was only weeks, but i thought at the time we had reached a peak, you left me there feeling guilty and weak, made me believe that no longer should i seek,,,,, told you there weren't enough :/
gto745 1 year ago 2
carry me home- baby please
im down on my knees
seen you from across the sea
knew that you the one for me
i go by the name of jc
ill provide you anything you need
erase the weed - cuz i dont need
indeed lets plant our seed &
proceed to breed after we - get married
253jc 2 years ago
Cuz these jerks don't deserve to mark your body like you were their property. Fuck these Bitches! Ladies, sing it with me...IF YOU FEEL ME,LETS IMPOWER OUR MENTALITY. TOGETHER WE CAN SAVE EACHOTHER. JUST CONSIDER ME, YOUR FALLEN ANGEL!
roxy42088 2 years ago
Like i said, i'll fuck you up if you ever come back to my presence. Ha! Revenge is sweet, isn't it? I wouldn't be surprise to see you on the streets. Still, you twisted my mind so now i don't trust anyone, only me. My defenses are up, and it sucks, but.. I bet i wont date another guy whos abusive. I got a story to tell so all the women please listen, even if you're only 12. Don't let it come to scars and hospital beds.
roxy42088 2 years ago
i always knew when that 40oz corrupted ur mind cuz, u acted like a bitch, now i can say all this shit cuz compared to u im too legit,
and i no longer cry, instead, i listened, and paid attention..
I'LL FUCK YOU UP IF U EVER COME BACK TO ME PRESENTS!!
roxy42088 2 years ago
its, too late, to apologize, for all the mistakes that you made,
u didnt give a shit then, so now im left forever scarred, and no, u werent worth it. and it bugs me, cuz im forced to reminise about those times, every fucken day of my life.
u know i use to be so fucken kind, i never had to fight, alwasy got that static off my chest until u came around with stupidity on ur breath.
roxy42088 2 years ago
j3wishPr1de 2 years ago
was always a lost soul, bound for nothin considered great
maybe i wont know, but everyday when i smoke dro
get in the zone n flow its like a megaphone
tellin me im never gettin home
gotta change my style; cant remember where to go
its gonna take a while, cuz i take shit slow
put in the fullest effort, otherwise it's jus a fools endeavor
let the path appear before my eyes
gotta heart of gold, I been here since forty nine
ill never be cornered by any borderline, that was the former guy...
maztakeef420 2 years ago
somebody carry me home, tried to brave the winds, I got buried in snow, sometimes the world is scary n cold, but i barely care i rarely hear what im told, so ill find out lifes lessons on my own, make my mistakes, let the blessins unfold, they fell from the sky, but the flow was sent from below, a devil in disguise, or an angel from up high, can i really be both or is one just lyin?
maztakeef420 2 years ago
so i dont know where home is, heaven? hell? anywhere where theres nothing to sell, cuz all this fake marketing is puttin us in a spell, magic illusions, tragedy brewin, what we had is in ruins, our ancestors roots is/ dug up, i still remember when we moved in/ dumb luck, that i ever made one buck, wasnt a greedy chump, yea ive been beaten n jumped, but i guess im peaceful, so what? i take it easy, no such/ thing as livin wit hate in my heart, thats how i was made from the start
maztakeef420 2 years ago
NatesSound 2 years ago
and wonder how your body is still intact
lucky enough u didn't get jacked
if there's a friend, i always got his back
id be the first one to help him talk smack
start the fight? N soon you'll get wacked
its the intelligence that you lack.......
"""""Got to change my way of living..........""""""
"""""Got to change my style.............."""""
NatesSound 2 years ago
You start to think life is worthless
Smoking crack wont make things hurt less
all your doing is making a huge mess
like a girl fussing about her prom dress
you gata know when life puts you to the test
you gata try hard and soon you'll be the best
but until then put your head down and rest.......
NatesSound 2 years ago
i am a dopest rapper
rapper is dopest , happer
-ly ever after
i am in the presence like santa
boom boom
i be running on the moon soon
yes i bring heats
like a beat
i r sonic the hedge hog
and now IM GONE!
Obnoxiousist 2 years ago
Half the knack and ya lack the tactics
Ya mask the fact that ya fa*gs are bastards
That's the crap that distracts the acts that I have to blast in the face of disgrace but it had to happen
proliteriate 2 years ago
tlink1993 2 years ago 3
nice bruh
illertop10 2 years ago
hahah nice +1 thumbs :P
NatesSound 2 years ago
123 not for you but for me
we'll just see let it be
whose the worst amoung us
the lies we cant trust eachother
especially a lover
popped into my head
outlawdking 2 years ago
hitman9o9 2 years ago
Now.... i cant lie like the rest man so far you da best and..... i'll give you that,
dont know who you are
or what you is
but i dont fuckin care cuz thats the way it is
Life flys by you know that aint no lie but you had her in your grasps and let her slip.............. Help Me Fix It Up or Add On....... i liked what you wrote give you Props
Eddie852258 2 years ago
LOL at the wife who keeps going down on your closest friends
dinkhead1 2 years ago
i just remembered that you made this instru for me when i needed it while back much love bro and looks like kkillbrb either cant rap or is really funny wrong flow lol
let me give it a spin:
she believed no man would tell her the truth even her own father fucked with her views so she fights figures nothing to lose in the end she was just a tool to be used
he soul was put on auction for no value was told no1 in the world will ever love you felt the weight of every word even though it was untrue
KaptainBlazinV 2 years ago 5
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kkillbrb 2 years ago
lol man you fucking suck i mean seriously goddamn you're just mad kaptain told the truth you are so pathetic man do you think since you freestyle rude vulgar and obnoxious you-re good? kaptain fucking ripped you and made it have a meaning like the song is supposed to have unlike you and you pathetic attempt of a crack
Ytoobinfinity 2 years ago 6
and bt is wasnt crack on ur skill he just didnt really get what you were trying to do with those lyrics i dont either for a matter of fact.
Etelix1859 2 years ago 4
let me flow...
walked in on my wife givin head to my room mate
she wouldnt even blow me i had to masterbate
it was late i just ate cake i lay awake
thinkin bout crimes and hate what an awful day
i go to work everyday around 5 in the morning
fuck my bosses secretary
come home smoke bowls and drink tequila and cherries
kkillbrb 2 years ago
haha that i like flows good and it tells a lil story
now let me see...
little girl was everything she wanted to be her father was just to lazy to see she thought her dreams would be reality free
his drama was of no equal every single problem just had another sequel in the end he lost his free will guess hes just another victim to the worlds evil
baby girls its just me and you against the world you the only one who can save got to be sure cant live on maybe carry me home before i go crazy
KaptainBlazinV 2 years ago 4
baby girls its just me and you against the world you the only one who can save me got to be sure cant live on maybe carry me home before i go crazy
edit left out a word or two
KaptainBlazinV 2 years ago
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kkillbrb 2 years ago
u wack niga..
SwitchTreAllDay 2 years ago
u wack
kkillbrb 2 years ago
wow man i mean wow that was so gay what was the point of that an insult to kapt? wow man just give up i mean damn is there a point at all and he was right youre dumb shit dont flow with the song right this song is supposed to have meaningful lyrics which kaptain provided all you did was bring down the song im not saying you suck but if a gonna spit on an a atmosphere instrumental spit some deep shit and not some pointless garbage about his mom when he didnt even come close to going that far
Etelix1859 2 years ago 5
kkillbrb 2 years ago
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kkillbrb 2 years ago
this is def gewd to get fucked up to...lol then 'carry me home'
eklipzer 2 years ago
nice post! by giving out a download link it prevents $lug from raping his fans any further...
Rsun88 2 years ago 2
Damn Max, you post nothing but the best!! thanks bro
alvinamar83 2 years ago 2
thats what I do.
thanks for the love
maxcaster989 2 years ago
i'd like to hear what slug sounds like with out the backgrounds...think you could do something like that? a comparison between the vocals and the insturmentals.
?
:)
ProthoPectore 2 years ago
You mean an acapella....
paulhus123 2 years ago