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  • touching story though the whole "bitch=baby" thing was kinda laughable

  • Omb!This is so sad!Cmon!She killed herself and justin is alive!¨Poor justin...

  • Sad an story:(..mala Romeo and julliet..kya lng d nga mxadong mafeel kz an bilis and ung song 4 me it wasn't bagay sa story...hehe...pero nice p dn nmn..

  • ANTANGA-TANGA-TANGA-TANGA! hahaha

  • someone copied this or you copied it or you both heard it

  • the words are too fast .

  • boredom,,,

  • love this vid.. it kinda made me cry

  • sorry....its too fast...ndi ako maxado natouched gawa ng mabilisang pagbabasa...but nice job...

  • hahahaha....romeo and juliet ung story....iniba lng...hahaha...mejo modern...pero nice one....:)

  • What happened to happy endings...? *she sniffles thru tears*

  • story is good kaya lang di masyadong mafeel ang bilis eh.. ang boring pa ng song.. sayang!!!

  • awtchxzz

  • antanga. nagpakamatay kagad.. peace! :)

  • too fast :|

  • ganda..woo

  • wal n bang iba ..... san meron pa ...

  • imba to..cinopy lang/restate...gumawa ka na lang ng sarili mo :DD

  • @xampookreig14 get a life moron. i didn't claim this as my own who the fvck cares if it's not mine.

  • naniniwala na aqu xa kasabihang,

    maraming namamatay xa maling akala

    lol

  • kkALungkOt aMn un

  • cute nmn! ..

    :D

  • ahhh.. romeo and juliet.. modern edition.. hahahh!

  • i really like this..

  • awch :(

  • nabasa ko na to na xtory....

  • Marcelo i made a video for you hope you like it just view my profile na lang po tnx!!!

  • @altheaveronica i am not marcelo i am superkryzza. ahaha

  • @superkryzza oo nga naun ko lang nakita hahaha. ..

    sowi

  • shOcks!!! maling akala nnman

  • anu bah.,. tumatayo ung mga balhibo ko while watching.,. kalungkot namaN.,.

  • oh my god!.. so ganda the story..like it!

  • ooooouuucch!!

  • grbe bilis nmn! haha! ngmamadali ba :)) LOLS !

  • kewl!

  • ..sayang..

  • kaantok nmn sONG ZZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzz

  • @walter4293 alam ko po.

  • i've read this on myspace 3 years ago. this story is old. just saying... but its a good story though.

  • @superkryzza oh.. i tot it was, coz my friend told me.. anway, thanks!

  • ang bilis.. nid q pa mgstop

  • cute :D

  • @jhekanne3 - smooch.

  • bata ikaw ba gumawa nito?? hehehehe ok huh...?? sakto sa reading comprehension ku.. ang bilis!! hehehehehe

  • @MrRutherFordium nag comment kpa. haha

  • GUYS. WATCH MY FRIENDSHIP STORY SA CHANNEL KO :) It's an original story made by ME :)

  • nice!

  • I like it!

  • loka ka tlaga mel.... hehehehehe..... tayong dalwa yan ahh..... hehehehe...

  • nabasa ko na to about 3 years ago . :) pero nice paren sha :)

  • i've read that on FB, is it a true stor?

  • @VanillaQuake37 nope.

  • ..the story is very predictable.u just created another version of the story but the same endings..soo boring..ive red that story so many times..different stories but the same endings..NO OFFENSE

  • @shojier okay. then, why READ it in the 1st place?

  • SAKIT NAMAN

  • aww cute sya :) peo tanga nung girl hihi :) love d story !

  • pwedi mu nmn istop eh!

  • the story is lame and kinda predictable.. why have sad endings when there can always be a happy one?.. no offense.

  • @1ba4rb3ie why happy ending then??...happy endings are too common..u call urself a critic yet you dont even know how to make any good comments/suggestions...making a story is not easy as reading it...make a video of ur own..then try to criticize...^^..no offence

  • @bortalz wow. u rock!

  • NAiNTiNDIHAN CUH :(

  • bitin ung ending :L

  • bakit di man lng nlaman ng guy na dedo na si gurl shonga nmn ni gurl dpat nag intay muna xa or nagtanong tanong, but it was a nice story i like it!!

  • @kharskie00 onga eh

  • ouch :( that hurts..

  • tanga... but it was AWESOMMEE!!!

  • @vEryTHiNicE thanks

  • aus ah.. flight 1-80.. final destination..xD

  • @kanszaki17 tahahaha.

  • inspired ka lang pala eh,,,,,,gago,,,,gaya.2x puto maya!

  • @mrjamez23 haha WHUUTTT?

  • @mrjamez23 buti nga nag mention na nainspired cya...anu ba naman....mag isip ka nga??..bkit hndi ba pwedeng gumawa ng vid na kagaya ng kay mr marcelo??...isip isp.^^

  • @bortalz lmao. YOU ROCK pa rin!

  • T_T kaka touch n sana eh! panget lng dahil ded n yung gurl T_T

  • @rhyvan2010 onga eh

  • dko mxadong maintindihan.!!! bilis ng mga transitions..

  • @Lilchute sorry po

  • @superkryzza pwede namang i pause dba? kung nabibilisan ka, haha!

  • @nothingtodo18 tama!

  • @Lilchute e di i pause mo problema ba un?

  • yan kasi, ang bilis mag assume ni Mel, tanga :P :P :P :P :D wawa naman si justin oh :((

  • Shit. Antanga nung gurl >:P

  • aray...tamang tama tanga tlga

  • nabasa ko na to sa isang site ah.. ^^ about sa mga broken love story..

  • maganda xa, kaso un time mashado mabilis, some of sentence kc mhaba kya d ko mabasa lahat, wen im reading lagi ako ng ppause, dats y para sa akin d nkkrelax bshin..un lang sana mchange next time u make a story! :)..anywz d sotry inspired m tnx!!!

  • @maya050891 sure sure thanks

  • porma men .

  • .. awtss aman un :((

  • pait!

  • nasa huli tlga ang pagsisisi...

  • why does everyone have to die? don't you have any story which ends up happy?.

  • i will try to make one for you

  • ay tanga ng babae ..

  • this is good.. like romeo and juliet in a way.

  • i really like this... so nice.

  • @lovex000 thanks

  • so nice story..

  • wow

    nice story

  • so SAD naman :'((

  • @1990hanz :'(

  • ` nabasa qu na to eh ..

  • so sad..huhu,ganda.

  • ang gaganda nman ng mga videos mo nkakainspired at nkakaiyak pa ung iba..stay touching peoples lives.

  • @1223rosemarie sure. thanks

  • nakakalungkot nmn 2ng story n 2.

    mahal na mahal ni justin si mel.

    at mahal na mahal ni mel si justin.

    sweet sna eh..

  • wawa nmn ! ang laking tanga nmn ng BABAENG UN ! haha

  • nice kryzza! ryo here :)

    galing :)

  • @Migzenx Yooo. Haha. Thanks.

  • anu ba yan..laging tragic ending nakikita ko..haha like ng mga sinabi nila, padahan-dahan mo din po ung slides...hehehe kip up d gud work!!!

  • @marshie1620 Okay po. Thanks sa suggestion.

  • Damn!!! I mean how sad.... to the creator pls improve more on the slideshow ha. A littlebit slowly para mas feel k. nice nice 2 thumbs up. babasahin ko ulit ang next na isusulat mo.

  • @xavier19 Okay. Thankss.

  • this made me cry, i call this true love xxx

    good video!

  • copy and paste

    2.send this to 2 other videos.

    3.hold your breath for 10 seconds.

    4.press refresh twice.

    3.LOOK AT YOUR HAND

  • ='(

  • .nice :D

  • hey..guess what..you really need improvement, you can make your own originality,i may sound harsh but all i can say is it is like trying hard to compete what others made, try to find what makes you really enjoy and love,sorry can help it to comment

  • @uniqueako11 ohh its okay :) Thanks for suggesting. this time, i know what to improve ;)

  • nice :D

  • The story was nice but one suggestion i can say. Hope you made the slides slide slowly. I can't read the words well ee.

  • @achibe01 Okay. Thanks sa suggestion. I will improve some of my vids later on

  • kabilis nman mwala ng bnabsa ko, naghahabol 2loy ako, tsk

  • @jaimecorpuzjr sorry na. i will improve sa next vids ko

  • parang romeo and juliet lang ah ahaha

  • @ailabyutol haha. maybe nga

  • omg!! grabe!! kakalungkot nga 2ng video nah 2.. kum acoh eun boy,, kung gnun di ang nangyari magpapakamatay nlang din acoh.. =( huhu..

  • @xexahkhim but you have to make sure muna.

  • k sad nmn 2..

    am gling mu nmn mk.gawa nm story..!

    keep it up!...:)

  • @02nikka sorry but i didnt make it. found it around the net and shared it sa inyo.

  • haha baliw ung girl..sayang nman..:(

  • @CamZie06 tama. haha.

  • nu bah ean.,, badtrip ung babae.. ndi man lng muna inaalam kung nmtay nga ung lalake.. xDD

  • @liljemmy29 haha. kya nga. lesson na.

  • nice:))

  • @potxkie03tog thanks.

  • ahhhh .. so sad .. :'(

  • waahh.. kainis nmn ung story..

    hahahaha.. nasad ako..

  • @jemnstone04 aww. =)) hehehe.

  • Nice. haha :) your the character.

  • @pinkyang12 haha. and JUSTIN BIEBER baby <3

  • @superkryzza yea.yeah :D

  • @pinkyang12 hehe.

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