Sad an story:(..mala Romeo and julliet..kya lng d nga mxadong mafeel kz an bilis and ung song 4 me it wasn't bagay sa story...hehe...pero nice p dn nmn..
..the story is very predictable.u just created another version of the story but the same endings..soo boring..ive red that story so many times..different stories but the same endings..NO OFFENSE
@1ba4rb3ie why happy ending then??...happy endings are too common..u call urself a critic yet you dont even know how to make any good comments/suggestions...making a story is not easy as reading it...make a video of ur own..then try to criticize...^^..no offence
@mrjamez23 buti nga nag mention na nainspired cya...anu ba naman....mag isip ka nga??..bkit hndi ba pwedeng gumawa ng vid na kagaya ng kay mr marcelo??...isip isp.^^
maganda xa, kaso un time mashado mabilis, some of sentence kc mhaba kya d ko mabasa lahat, wen im reading lagi ako ng ppause, dats y para sa akin d nkkrelax bshin..un lang sana mchange next time u make a story! :)..anywz d sotry inspired m tnx!!!
Damn!!! I mean how sad.... to the creator pls improve more on the slideshow ha. A littlebit slowly para mas feel k. nice nice 2 thumbs up. babasahin ko ulit ang next na isusulat mo.
hey..guess what..you really need improvement, you can make your own originality,i may sound harsh but all i can say is it is like trying hard to compete what others made, try to find what makes you really enjoy and love,sorry can help it to comment
touching story though the whole "bitch=baby" thing was kinda laughable
Method2thaMadness 7 months ago
Omb!This is so sad!Cmon!She killed herself and justin is alive!¨Poor justin...
TheBiebsCro 10 months ago
Sad an story:(..mala Romeo and julliet..kya lng d nga mxadong mafeel kz an bilis and ung song 4 me it wasn't bagay sa story...hehe...pero nice p dn nmn..
bellemefrancey 11 months ago
ANTANGA-TANGA-TANGA-TANGA! hahaha
iLuhbTOKIOHOTEL13 1 year ago
someone copied this or you copied it or you both heard it
imac903 1 year ago
the words are too fast .
andyssrein 1 year ago
boredom,,,
alynameow 1 year ago
love this vid.. it kinda made me cry
princesschristine02 1 year ago
sorry....its too fast...ndi ako maxado natouched gawa ng mabilisang pagbabasa...but nice job...
nanigoh 1 year ago
hahahaha....romeo and juliet ung story....iniba lng...hahaha...mejo modern...pero nice one....:)
6tinbeatx 1 year ago
What happened to happy endings...? *she sniffles thru tears*
BabyliciousBex 1 year ago
story is good kaya lang di masyadong mafeel ang bilis eh.. ang boring pa ng song.. sayang!!!
20sUpeRbOiNk42 1 year ago
awtchxzz
lovekosimarcelo 1 year ago
antanga. nagpakamatay kagad.. peace! :)
sweetieterizz 1 year ago
too fast :|
0702pai 1 year ago
ganda..woo
szupladhitahful 1 year ago
wal n bang iba ..... san meron pa ...
rea0891 1 year ago
imba to..cinopy lang/restate...gumawa ka na lang ng sarili mo :DD
xampookreig14 1 year ago 3
@xampookreig14 get a life moron. i didn't claim this as my own who the fvck cares if it's not mine.
superkryzza 1 year ago
naniniwala na aqu xa kasabihang,
maraming namamatay xa maling akala
lol
msmaroonage 1 year ago
kkALungkOt aMn un
macolmadrigal 1 year ago
cute nmn! ..
:D
rjayneaguilar 1 year ago
ahhh.. romeo and juliet.. modern edition.. hahahh!
wilagan03 1 year ago
i really like this..
ayah092523 1 year ago
awch :(
kaachi25 1 year ago
nabasa ko na to na xtory....
xkenoxxx 1 year ago
Marcelo i made a video for you hope you like it just view my profile na lang po tnx!!!
altheaveronica 1 year ago
@altheaveronica i am not marcelo i am superkryzza. ahaha
superkryzza 1 year ago
@superkryzza oo nga naun ko lang nakita hahaha. ..
sowi
altheaveronica 1 year ago
shOcks!!! maling akala nnman
Diamond43957 1 year ago
anu bah.,. tumatayo ung mga balhibo ko while watching.,. kalungkot namaN.,.
ceztamz 1 year ago
oh my god!.. so ganda the story..like it!
tsupaflymherille 1 year ago
ooooouuucch!!
maehopebear 1 year ago
grbe bilis nmn! haha! ngmamadali ba :)) LOLS !
hae04pink 1 year ago
kewl!
strangerbecbec23 1 year ago
..sayang..
chocomocha21 1 year ago
kaantok nmn sONG ZZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzz
walter4293 1 year ago
@walter4293 alam ko po.
superkryzza 1 year ago
i've read this on myspace 3 years ago. this story is old. just saying... but its a good story though.
jestoni202020 1 year ago 3
@superkryzza oh.. i tot it was, coz my friend told me.. anway, thanks!
VanillaQuake37 1 year ago
ang bilis.. nid q pa mgstop
jasliesixteen 1 year ago
cute :D
jhekanne3 1 year ago
@jhekanne3 - smooch.
superkryzza 1 year ago
bata ikaw ba gumawa nito?? hehehehe ok huh...?? sakto sa reading comprehension ku.. ang bilis!! hehehehehe
MrRutherFordium 1 year ago
@MrRutherFordium nag comment kpa. haha
superkryzza 1 year ago
GUYS. WATCH MY FRIENDSHIP STORY SA CHANNEL KO :) It's an original story made by ME :)
superkryzza 1 year ago
nice!
MegaRaymond50 1 year ago
I like it!
MegaRaymond50 1 year ago
loka ka tlaga mel.... hehehehehe..... tayong dalwa yan ahh..... hehehehe...
kuramisu13 1 year ago
nabasa ko na to about 3 years ago . :) pero nice paren sha :)
mimi11 1 year ago
i've read that on FB, is it a true stor?
VanillaQuake37 1 year ago
@VanillaQuake37 nope.
superkryzza 1 year ago
..the story is very predictable.u just created another version of the story but the same endings..soo boring..ive red that story so many times..different stories but the same endings..NO OFFENSE
shojier 1 year ago
@shojier okay. then, why READ it in the 1st place?
superkryzza 1 year ago
SAKIT NAMAN
chubx01 1 year ago
aww cute sya :) peo tanga nung girl hihi :) love d story !
zee030 1 year ago
pwedi mu nmn istop eh!
creigntot 1 year ago
the story is lame and kinda predictable.. why have sad endings when there can always be a happy one?.. no offense.
1ba4rb3ie 1 year ago
@1ba4rb3ie why happy ending then??...happy endings are too common..u call urself a critic yet you dont even know how to make any good comments/suggestions...making a story is not easy as reading it...make a video of ur own..then try to criticize...^^..no offence
bortalz 1 year ago
@bortalz wow. u rock!
superkryzza 1 year ago
NAiNTiNDIHAN CUH :(
liljez2000 1 year ago
bitin ung ending :L
iilovemyfriends23 1 year ago
bakit di man lng nlaman ng guy na dedo na si gurl shonga nmn ni gurl dpat nag intay muna xa or nagtanong tanong, but it was a nice story i like it!!
kharskie00 1 year ago
@kharskie00 onga eh
superkryzza 1 year ago
ouch :( that hurts..
junaxs52 1 year ago
tanga... but it was AWESOMMEE!!!
vEryTHiNicE 1 year ago
@vEryTHiNicE thanks
superkryzza 1 year ago
aus ah.. flight 1-80.. final destination..xD
kanszaki17 1 year ago
@kanszaki17 tahahaha.
superkryzza 1 year ago
inspired ka lang pala eh,,,,,,gago,,,,gaya.2x puto maya!
mrjamez23 1 year ago
@mrjamez23 haha WHUUTTT?
superkryzza 1 year ago
@mrjamez23 buti nga nag mention na nainspired cya...anu ba naman....mag isip ka nga??..bkit hndi ba pwedeng gumawa ng vid na kagaya ng kay mr marcelo??...isip isp.^^
bortalz 1 year ago
@bortalz lmao. YOU ROCK pa rin!
superkryzza 1 year ago
T_T kaka touch n sana eh! panget lng dahil ded n yung gurl T_T
rhyvan2010 1 year ago
@rhyvan2010 onga eh
superkryzza 1 year ago
dko mxadong maintindihan.!!! bilis ng mga transitions..
Lilchute 1 year ago
@Lilchute sorry po
superkryzza 1 year ago
@superkryzza pwede namang i pause dba? kung nabibilisan ka, haha!
nothingtodo18 1 year ago
@nothingtodo18 tama!
superkryzza 1 year ago
@Lilchute e di i pause mo problema ba un?
JEJEMONHATERS 1 year ago
yan kasi, ang bilis mag assume ni Mel, tanga :P :P :P :P :D wawa naman si justin oh :((
coleen040897 1 year ago
Shit. Antanga nung gurl >:P
ayaishii18 1 year ago
aray...tamang tama tanga tlga
AndreoLuizzzzz 1 year ago
nabasa ko na to sa isang site ah.. ^^ about sa mga broken love story..
zhoa123 1 year ago
maganda xa, kaso un time mashado mabilis, some of sentence kc mhaba kya d ko mabasa lahat, wen im reading lagi ako ng ppause, dats y para sa akin d nkkrelax bshin..un lang sana mchange next time u make a story! :)..anywz d sotry inspired m tnx!!!
maya050891 1 year ago
@maya050891 sure sure thanks
superkryzza 1 year ago
porma men .
krisiadem01 1 year ago
.. awtss aman un :((
mhieelle 1 year ago
pait!
lyleangelie4 1 year ago
nasa huli tlga ang pagsisisi...
zheidenblackdoll 1 year ago
why does everyone have to die? don't you have any story which ends up happy?.
franzmarcapilan 1 year ago
i will try to make one for you
superkryzza 1 year ago
ay tanga ng babae ..
aviladinggoy123456 1 year ago
@aviladinggoy123456 TAMA!!
superkryzza 1 year ago
this is good.. like romeo and juliet in a way.
xclampfuma 1 year ago
i really like this... so nice.
lovex000 1 year ago
@lovex000 thanks
superkryzza 1 year ago
so nice story..
lovex000 1 year ago
wow
nice story
23grid 1 year ago
so SAD naman :'((
1990hanz 1 year ago
@1990hanz :'(
superkryzza 1 year ago
` nabasa qu na to eh ..
havattar13 1 year ago
so sad..huhu,ganda.
annielocyn 1 year ago
ang gaganda nman ng mga videos mo nkakainspired at nkakaiyak pa ung iba..stay touching peoples lives.
1223rosemarie 1 year ago
@1223rosemarie sure. thanks
superkryzza 1 year ago
nakakalungkot nmn 2ng story n 2.
mahal na mahal ni justin si mel.
at mahal na mahal ni mel si justin.
sweet sna eh..
pr8tydoll 1 year ago
wawa nmn ! ang laking tanga nmn ng BABAENG UN ! haha
mishlike 1 year ago
nice kryzza! ryo here :)
galing :)
Migzenx 1 year ago
@Migzenx Yooo. Haha. Thanks.
superkryzza 1 year ago
anu ba yan..laging tragic ending nakikita ko..haha like ng mga sinabi nila, padahan-dahan mo din po ung slides...hehehe kip up d gud work!!!
marshie1620 1 year ago
@marshie1620 Okay po. Thanks sa suggestion.
superkryzza 1 year ago
Damn!!! I mean how sad.... to the creator pls improve more on the slideshow ha. A littlebit slowly para mas feel k. nice nice 2 thumbs up. babasahin ko ulit ang next na isusulat mo.
xavier19 1 year ago
@xavier19 Okay. Thankss.
superkryzza 1 year ago
this made me cry, i call this true love xxx
good video!
CharleneMcElhinney 1 year ago
copy and paste
2.send this to 2 other videos.
3.hold your breath for 10 seconds.
4.press refresh twice.
3.LOOK AT YOUR HAND
8harelgem 1 year ago
='(
jewelnobody01 1 year ago
.nice :D
michellai25 1 year ago
hey..guess what..you really need improvement, you can make your own originality,i may sound harsh but all i can say is it is like trying hard to compete what others made, try to find what makes you really enjoy and love,sorry can help it to comment
uniqueako11 1 year ago
@uniqueako11 ohh its okay :) Thanks for suggesting. this time, i know what to improve ;)
superkryzza 1 year ago
nice :D
khaitoot 1 year ago
The story was nice but one suggestion i can say. Hope you made the slides slide slowly. I can't read the words well ee.
achibe01 1 year ago
@achibe01 Okay. Thanks sa suggestion. I will improve some of my vids later on
superkryzza 1 year ago
kabilis nman mwala ng bnabsa ko, naghahabol 2loy ako, tsk
jaimecorpuzjr 1 year ago
@jaimecorpuzjr sorry na. i will improve sa next vids ko
superkryzza 1 year ago
parang romeo and juliet lang ah ahaha
ailabyutol 1 year ago
@ailabyutol haha. maybe nga
superkryzza 1 year ago
omg!! grabe!! kakalungkot nga 2ng video nah 2.. kum acoh eun boy,, kung gnun di ang nangyari magpapakamatay nlang din acoh.. =( huhu..
xexahkhim 1 year ago
@xexahkhim but you have to make sure muna.
superkryzza 1 year ago
k sad nmn 2..
am gling mu nmn mk.gawa nm story..!
keep it up!...:)
02nikka 1 year ago
@02nikka sorry but i didnt make it. found it around the net and shared it sa inyo.
superkryzza 1 year ago
haha baliw ung girl..sayang nman..:(
CamZie06 1 year ago
@CamZie06 tama. haha.
superkryzza 1 year ago
nu bah ean.,, badtrip ung babae.. ndi man lng muna inaalam kung nmtay nga ung lalake.. xDD
liljemmy29 1 year ago
@liljemmy29 haha. kya nga. lesson na.
superkryzza 1 year ago
nice:))
potxkie03tog 1 year ago
@potxkie03tog thanks.
superkryzza 1 year ago
ahhhh .. so sad .. :'(
bayulett03 1 year ago
waahh.. kainis nmn ung story..
hahahaha.. nasad ako..
jemnstone04 1 year ago
@jemnstone04 aww. =)) hehehe.
superkryzza 1 year ago
Nice. haha :) your the character.
pinkyang12 1 year ago
@pinkyang12 haha. and JUSTIN BIEBER baby <3
superkryzza 1 year ago
@superkryzza yea.yeah :D
pinkyang12 1 year ago
@pinkyang12 hehe.
superkryzza 1 year ago