Straying the Path

[the13thchild33]

I'm not saying your music is bad but in today's world you have to be original using MC Spider, a name that has already been used isn't original I'm sorry even if you didn't know about it still you need to do your research before picking a name

[McSpider1066]

@the13thchild33 Keepin it out of respect for an old friend who died. These days I only really use spider though. Although if it ever did become a problem I always have Arachnid I suppose.

Thanks for your input though, I do know what you mean.

[the13thchild33]

So do you enjoy taking Powerman 5000s name? Look up MC Spider that name has already been used and he released an EP in 1990 under that name

[chino14norte]

i didnt know da dude from da new guy can rap !!

[Blasianpower2]

i think it has potential just line up the bars ;]

[tobyc92]

The beat's shit, your accent's annoying, the lyrics are as deep as Soulja Boy's, the video is just awful-completely out of sync and you just look like an idiot.

[DARKSANCTUM1]

@tobyc92 ouch. that was harsh coming from a guy who's trying to get big with a video of eating crackers. and if thats how you look hun...wow. look, if you cant do better, then dont bitch at someone for what their doing.

[MsMoviestar1]

great words and muisc

[McSpider1066]

@MsMoviestar1 cheers dude, appreciate it.

[JaqupD]

I love the lyrics its awesome. i did notice the time thing that sonny did though, and that'll come with practice for sure. The voice though i may know how to fix. Try a harder song, one with an upbeat tempo. If you speed up the lyrics it may blur your accent and it might bring out more of a rapper voice. just a thought it may work it may not. i know when I speed up my freestyles my voice changes a bit because I'm not rapping as hard.

[McSpider1066]

@JaqupD thx dude, n yeah ok then it's kl, and ok klkl, i'll keep that in mind thx for advice, in process of writin a new song now which is more upbeat in tempo, so hopefully that'll be better, should be longer 2, prob atm is i got alot of songs i'd like to record atm, with a fw possible covers maybe 2 as a self test thing, just can't seem 2 find anywhere 2 record em and home recordings are hard and suck lol :P

[sonny19852006]

ok. this is my honest opinion, i think your a good writer but your vocals are not your strong point, some of it was out of time and to me the sound of your voice doesnt fit a rapper, like eminem and others, sum of it sounds like your tryin to put an american accent on, i think if u wrote for other people to rap your song you might get some where in the music industry, maybe make some big £. its not all bad though dude, just my honest opinion, keep up the writting

[McSpider1066]

@sonny19852006 it's kl dude, if thats ur opinion then fair enough, this sonny from last year at col btw? and soz it took so long to reply i've had alot going on and havent got around to it till now lol :P Yeah my dads told me the same thing, but if i'm honist he's the only other one who's said about the voice tbh, only thing i will say to that though is i'm not aiming to be like anyone anyway, just myself tbh

[McSpider1066]

@sonny19852006 also all of that recording was my proper voice, there was no putting on an american accent like i used 2 lol :P i got out of that habbit about half way through or a bit longer through last year :P but yeah, thx for ur opinion dude, it's a gd thing u ain't the type 2 just say yeah it's gd 4 the hell of it cuz no1 gets anywhere if peepz are like that :)

[McSpider1066]

@sonny19852006 the out of time bits, i'm not so sure about but fair enough, everyone else seemed to think its in perfect time, unless u mean a bit in the vid cuz yeah theres a bit where the lip sync is out slightly, if u do mean the track, could be cuz i've been experimenting with different timing patterns that flow with the beats i write too, like a certain word said just very slightly be4 the beat cuz it'd sound better than exactly on it 4 example

[MojoWeedPatrol9]

Gangsta:D

[DjHyphie]

no needs to be scared of messing things up. KNOW everything will be alright, you just have to belive :).

[McSpider1066]

ye ur right :)

[smallfoot11759]

very good....a real message there ...keep it up xx

[McSpider1066]

thx :)

[lbigland92]

FIT.

[McSpider1066]

lol cheers lee :P