With the Bears Prophecy

[darkstarkc99]

You drew all of these?.....Impressive! Personally, I like your artistic style quite a lot. I think everyone sees something different. Look at Picasso. Personal style is the fine line that separates artists from illustrators. I hope you have overwhelming success with you book. Well done :)

[swordclaw42]

@darkstarkc99 Thanks a lot!

[WolfPawDragonClaw]

Yay! You finally iploaded it! X3

Oh my gooooosh! These are epic! And you got ma sweeetie in there! X3

I don't know who the black haired dude in the background of the last picture is, but its great! I think its your best front face (of a person) veiw yet! X3

I'd hate to ask....but do you want critique? I also hate to ask,....but can I post some fanart as a responce to this?

Yes, I will be the raging fangirl of your series. Team Jokavh all the way! XD

[swordclaw42]

@WolfPawDragonClaw Hahahaha, thanks! Yes to all of your questions, and be careful with Jokavh, he might poison you. :D

[WolfPawDragonClaw]

@swordclaw42 Okay...I'll just go pic by pic.

1) I actually don't have much to say on this one. But one of Gabe's legs is shorter than the other.

2) Her right hand side of her face goes out too far, and I've noticed this with your other pictures too. Sorry...maybe try to make the sides of the face symetrical?

3) see 2

4) I love how he's pointing! X3

5) The badgar is good, but maybe look at animal photos? The cub's nose is too small and cute! X3

[WolfPawDragonClaw]

6) His right thumb bothers me, but its a hard angle that we both fail at! XD

7) The body's pretty good, but maybe use more 'curves' so they don't look stiff.

8) The bear's tongue is too small, and the arrangements of the teeth are a bit wrong...sorry....Again, look at photos.

9) You drew him too awesome.

10) Her right shoulder is a little weird. But shoulders are hard, so...sorry.

11) Frein's left paw is a bit weird...sorrry.

[WolfPawDragonClaw]

12) The hands and feet are a little awkward, the only suggestion I have is to look at your own hands.

13) The open profiles are a bit weird on Gabe, but I can't do those either, so we both need to work on it.

14) None, except the face thing in #2

15) See 14

16) The shoulders again. Look at yourself in the mirror, and move your shoulders.

17) None really

18) The face thing.....is gone! X3

19) His face is too narrow, but maybe not, if that's what you're gunning for?

[WolfPawDragonClaw]

20) The sleeping bear looka a bit warped, but I'm wondering if that's just the curve of the paper? The blue eyed bear's (fore)head needs to be bigger (bears have big heads! O.O)

21) I think you really fixed the front face thing! Yay!

[swordclaw42]

@WolfPawDragonClaw Wow, uh..... thanks!

[WolfPawDragonClaw]

@swordclaw42 You're welcome! XD

[WolfPawDragonClaw]

@swordclaw42 I'd like that. XD Kidding! Ew, who wants to be poisoned! Really!

[swordclaw42]

@WolfPawDragonClaw I don't know.... that'd be weird. But be careful he seems to be the kind of guy who'd poison his fan girls. :D

[WolfPawDragonClaw]

@swordclaw42 *sigh* If its what I must do....then so be. Jovavh! Poison away! (It's not like I'll drink the stuff anyway).

[swordclaw42]

@WolfPawDragonClaw Hahahahaha!!! Wow..........