it's great but.. the motion was really good... yeah I saw the tutorial you followed....you might need to watch the Online songs typography.. to see what they the other comments mean... :D
0:07 with the word "see" can you hear the music slightly jumping(if that makes sense). It sounds almost as if a bad transmission forced it to be that way. Now what I'd do is simulate a TV fuzz effect on either the "see" or the entire frame to sorta sync it in with the track. Or you could probably do any other effect, perhaps some colour correction or a temporary overlay. I can see you did a similar thing to the scars, but it didn't quite cut it for me.
Point is, things were pretty boring as it lacked diversity, lacked change. Colours... remained the same and so did the text. You could have added a few effects to spice things up on not only the way you presented the words, but how the words represented themselves. If you know what I mean.
agree 100% with Lolammo, my only thing would be to go even furthur then Lolammo. it seems like everybody is doing typography projects now and I am sorry to say, that this one isn't in the top half of them. it's very bland. and im not saying that as an insult, but as constructive criticism. because you did do good, it's just that it's like i've seen this done before.
That could be it! Above all of the layers on the timeline, there's a button that looks like the motion blur icons. Click that to turn on motion blur for all of the layers that you've selected to have motion blur. Depending on your version, it could look like a moving ball, or just an "M" ... should be above your top layer, and a little to the right
very nice, just a little suggestion tho, to give kinetic typography vids a little more in your face, ALWAYS keep the camera moving, i noticed u kinda just stopped the camera and then went to ur next work when it was done being said, instead of stoppping it, inbetween each transistion of words, have it move slightly in one direction, or even in z rotation. it makes out for a better video in the end.
its too awesome
TheLolilol321 7 months ago
its too fast
youmasora 7 months ago
@youmasora thats what she said
TheLolilol321 7 months ago
this typography stuff takes a freaking long time. loved your work. nice job : )
chatuification 8 months ago
pretty damn sexy if i do say so myself
mynameiscool543 1 year ago
cool!!
onahead 1 year ago
that was awesome! howd you learn that? what programs?
xXxDrizzyxXx 1 year ago
it's great but.. the motion was really good... yeah I saw the tutorial you followed....you might need to watch the Online songs typography.. to see what they the other comments mean... :D
kurogane2x 1 year ago
You know I loved this, thought the words were done nicely.
HOWEVER, I do believe if you added some effects to sync with the instrumental you would've been able to create something even better.
Lolammo 2 years ago
can you elaborate? what do you mean?
hawkteflon 2 years ago
Sure. Here are two examples.
0:07 with the word "see" can you hear the music slightly jumping(if that makes sense). It sounds almost as if a bad transmission forced it to be that way. Now what I'd do is simulate a TV fuzz effect on either the "see" or the entire frame to sorta sync it in with the track. Or you could probably do any other effect, perhaps some colour correction or a temporary overlay. I can see you did a similar thing to the scars, but it didn't quite cut it for me.
Lolammo 2 years ago
Point is, things were pretty boring as it lacked diversity, lacked change. Colours... remained the same and so did the text. You could have added a few effects to spice things up on not only the way you presented the words, but how the words represented themselves. If you know what I mean.
Lolammo 2 years ago
agree 100% with Lolammo, my only thing would be to go even furthur then Lolammo. it seems like everybody is doing typography projects now and I am sorry to say, that this one isn't in the top half of them. it's very bland. and im not saying that as an insult, but as constructive criticism. because you did do good, it's just that it's like i've seen this done before.
Z0mbieKangar00 2 years ago
Thanks. I mean that. I'm going to give typography another shot in the coming month. I'll take all this into consideration.
hawkteflon 1 year ago
@hawkteflon I think he means if you added some effects that would sync with the instrumental instead of just the vocals
r34ct 11 months ago
@hawkteflon like on every kick the typography would be affected, and on every snare, etc
r34ct 11 months ago
@Lolammo I agree!
c2mikel 1 year ago
How did you do that blur effect? =o
ajt1012 2 years ago
the motion blur?
hawkteflon 2 years ago
mhm o.o I tried adding some to my videos but it doesn't come out as nice as yours
ajt1012 2 years ago
are you using after effects?
hawkteflon 2 years ago
Yuppers
ajt1012 2 years ago
Do you have both of your motion blur switches on? One for the layer, and the one for the global switch.
hawkteflon 2 years ago
I'm sorry... global switch?
ajt1012 2 years ago
That could be it! Above all of the layers on the timeline, there's a button that looks like the motion blur icons. Click that to turn on motion blur for all of the layers that you've selected to have motion blur. Depending on your version, it could look like a moving ball, or just an "M" ... should be above your top layer, and a little to the right
hawkteflon 2 years ago
Oh thanks! :D Thanks alot
ajt1012 2 years ago
You bet! Let me know if you run into more trouble!
hawkteflon 2 years ago
Kay! :D Because I was thinking of making a kinetic typography with like a compilation of LP's chorus'
ajt1012 2 years ago
Me gusta mucho
silkwhite 2 years ago
I LOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT! OH MY GOD.
angelaa553 2 years ago
very nice, just a little suggestion tho, to give kinetic typography vids a little more in your face, ALWAYS keep the camera moving, i noticed u kinda just stopped the camera and then went to ur next work when it was done being said, instead of stoppping it, inbetween each transistion of words, have it move slightly in one direction, or even in z rotation. it makes out for a better video in the end.
Z0mbieKangar00 2 years ago
Hey, the pace was spot on. And the color choice was nice. Great job!
MrKlay 2 years ago
thats really good. the editing and all was on time!
conoradams10692 2 years ago
cool :)
ricardo7oo 2 years ago
I liked it!
Pinokio131 2 years ago
1st view and 1st comment and sweet editing 5/5
goertzey 2 years ago
thanks!
hawkteflon 2 years ago