Zanessa story-eps 1-I LOVE YOU

[xXxBajanBambixXx]

OMG Loved it!!!

Would you be interested in my contest?

[oOzanessaforeverOo]

i think your story line is good, but that's actually kinda ridiculous that nessa forget zac's appointment so fast LOL

another thing is you can make the intro and the story slower i think.

anyway, love it <3 keep going!

i have sub. you! :)

[ntiph]

Thanks,,,

Okk,, i will make slow down!!

keep support!!!

thxx!!

:)

[ZanessaJonessa]

i love it :)

[ntiph]

Thanks,,,

:) ur comment really make me happy

:D!!!!

[meenuumol12]

i like but i think the story is goin a little too fast!!

like in the beginnin i dont get it what happened!!

[ntiph]

Thanks for commen :)

in zanessa story ep.2

i make it Slow down,,,

thanks,,

really make me happy:)

[meenuumol12]

but i do really like it!!