Decent performance of both pieces. just a couple of things:
Sapphische Ode: You need to work on keeping a legato line. It wasn't extremely choppy, but it wasn't as legato as it needed to be. There was also a lack of expression in this piece. It seemed more like you were singing the words and thinking about your technique or how you sounded more than what you were saying actually meant. Tempo was also too slow
Honor and Arms: In the B section (Vanquish a slave), your vowels were WAY to spread.
You need to work a bit more on the German vowels, though: when to open and close the Eh (ie bewEgten is a closed vowel), and when to sing an u and when and ü, and when to have a voiced and unvoices S - Süsser, for example, is pronounced Züsser, as in "Raise" rather than "Race". The Ls need to be italian, at the front of the mouth, rather than American L at the back teeth. Very promising, though, good work.
OMG so fast!!!! pls no!!! voice is good, all the rest is :-(
newhotmailit 1 week ago
great voice!
and performance!
dutchbaritone08 2 years ago
Very well done; especially Honor and Arms is a difficult piece to perform.
Tenderness6 2 years ago
Decent performance of both pieces. just a couple of things:
Sapphische Ode: You need to work on keeping a legato line. It wasn't extremely choppy, but it wasn't as legato as it needed to be. There was also a lack of expression in this piece. It seemed more like you were singing the words and thinking about your technique or how you sounded more than what you were saying actually meant. Tempo was also too slow
Honor and Arms: In the B section (Vanquish a slave), your vowels were WAY to spread.
chaoticflame5 2 years ago
@chaoticflame5 , too slow?
rachelo93 2 years ago
Sorry, I meant too slow for Honor and Arms, but even that was a decent tempo, I guess. I, personally, would've taken the Handel a little faster.
chaoticflame5 2 years ago
@chaoticflame5: You must mean Sapphische Ode too fast.
A beautiful voice... Keep it up!
You need to work a bit more on the German vowels, though: when to open and close the Eh (ie bewEgten is a closed vowel), and when to sing an u and when and ü, and when to have a voiced and unvoices S - Süsser, for example, is pronounced Züsser, as in "Raise" rather than "Race". The Ls need to be italian, at the front of the mouth, rather than American L at the back teeth. Very promising, though, good work.
bobom1 7 months ago