Toxic - Superiors (rap) Ft.Raiza

[ThisKid310]

He's Alright (;

[iTommmmm]

I recon ur quite good :)

[Gitsoe]

practice your flow slow down a bit and make it flow smooth.

[d12ha1]

Put some rhyme to it, say shit that puts a picture in their mind but make it suck

[Welcome2KFC]

It was pretty good for starting out, but you need to work on your rhythm some more.

[OBEYSIVE]

Practice

[KawtinKandi]

You need a little more practice before you spit all that ego everywhere. I'm not sayin you're bad. With some work you could kill it, but you're not there yet, so you need to shrink your head down a bit for now.

[IBMarkyG]

I think Toxic murdered it but that raiza fool was kinda whack...Toxic is goin sumwhere with rap fuck his haterz

[thatcrippledninja]

And Don't rap fast until you can be heard perfectly when doing so, other then that good one mate, :D

[thatcrippledninja]

Dude the beat wasn't suited for the things you were saying, if the beat was synced and better for the song, I think this was fine.

[dakingokbling]

i know you can see my comments mr toxicass rapper

[dakingokbling]

iknow your the doo doo

[dakingokbling]

stop dancing

[dakingokbling]

thnxmas u right

[DexterForce346]

Dont listen to him your lyrics are okay but your trying to rap to fast for your skill level. Busta Rhymes didnt start rapping fast until he was famous just slow it down and then when you have more skill you try it again. But otherwise your doing decent just practice more. And do you have a mic if not a samson co1u is great beginner microphone. And if you need any beats just message me.

[ThxmasGuitared]

Your weak ass coat, tight ass pants, weak ass dance moves, fake ass jordans and ghetto ass back yard and shit ass flow. Your lyrics are weak your metaphors don't even flow. Just stop. Practice. Then maybe make another video.. till then just stop... please.