That was really great. You guys are awesome. (I five-starred you.)
I loved the whole red-phone thing, and the ending, and.. everything! Only thing I noticed was that you stuck the gun in the back of your pants, lol. If you're carrying a gun you don't usually do that xDD
But, it was a small detail and all in all it was still good.
how about you looking up a little something about copyright? good thing you're not big... then you would actually be held liable for copyright infringement.
Some people have observed a similarity in the premise of this film and an revival episode of The Twilight Zone in 1986. Please note[...]The Twilight Zone weren't the first to do it. There was a short story before that,[...]around since the 16th century (deal with the 'devil'). An almost identical premise exists in several cultures. Richard Kelly is even making a film with this premise[...]Our film is similar in premise, but different in plot[.]
there is a specific difference between "inspiration" and actually do a little research before making a film. See that's why when major movie corporation make a movie they spend a few weeks or so to make sure no part of their movie is infringing.
As for what the info in the black button stated, you continually prove my point. You haven't done a minute of research until this was mentioned. So apparently you thought you were the only one to come up with this.
I don't need to make a short movie to prove shit to you. Apparently this movie sucks ass, so any attempt at a movie would turn out way more succesful than this shit.
As far as the definition of copyright, like I said, spend a minute and google "copyright" you might actually learn something.
You are right, the film sucks ass... that's why it has nearly 2000 views, and 45 ratings giving it 4.5 stars out of 5...
Good call buddy,
Oh, and btw, look at ANY Quentin Tarantino films. They ALL have heavy influence and "homages" to many other films. Are you going to say he is a bad writer/ director?
And next, I'm going to ask you to calm the hell down... if you didn't like the film, you are welcome to express your opinion, but please refrain from flipping the fuck out.
Tarantino NEVER acknowledges that his stories aren't completely his own doing... He just writes and makes it, and that is that, because he doesn't give a fuck about what people think.
You say that we copied directly from The "Black Button"... your an idiot... So anytime that two people people are sitting across from each other and one of those said people is a personification of something related to the afterlife it a direct copy of the black button?
For your information, sense you are so caught up with out movie, I wrote the script before seeing the "Black Button", we then saw the movie, and debating making it, but decided that since the plot differed we would...
although i'm a bit biased, you guys did a fantastic job and i'm excited to see the top ten results because i think you have a good chance of being there :) good luck!
Interesting concept, how long have you been filming? We have a submission too it's of the zero budget variety but I'd love you opinion, It's called "IceBreaker project direct"
yesss yes, the other aspects did impress me also. but the comment would have been wayyy too long if i would have included every single part i enjoyed. so i thought i would emphasize my enjoyment of your acting skills. lol
So some crazy guy I think his name was jon or blairhasomethingorother idk, he told me to rewatch this video and Im glad I did. If i could take off my awesome pants and put on my short film critic skirt It really is excellent, a good length, and as I mentioned the angles are phenomenal. Its a good mix of seriousness and random like the quality of the office or arrested development. You should be really proud of this!
That was great Jake, you really are good at making films. I liked this a lot, the story flowed great and the plot was relateable to other movies but really unique.
Jake the movie was sick you need to make more of thiese but make them longer
punkbety 3 years ago
thanks a ton friend, if longer and better is wat you want, check out the extended directors' cut :D
watch it in HD
BarbedWire324 3 years ago
That was really great. You guys are awesome. (I five-starred you.)
I loved the whole red-phone thing, and the ending, and.. everything! Only thing I noticed was that you stuck the gun in the back of your pants, lol. If you're carrying a gun you don't usually do that xDD
But, it was a small detail and all in all it was still good.
PrettyMuchABigDeal 3 years ago
how would you know?
ms. big mob girl.....
kidding lol
thanks for the rating!
check out the HD Directors' cut!!!! Its much better
BarbedWire324 3 years ago
yeah, that's right, I'm a big mob girl =P Haha! It's true, though. I fyou're packin' you're gonna get a holster.
I definitely will check out the directors' cut. Sounds like fun.
PrettyMuchABigDeal 3 years ago
please watch it in HD
BarbedWire324 3 years ago
I know plenty of people who put a gun in their back like that.
jrobin1611 3 years ago
Great movie! Especially now that have the bloopers up! All three are great!
yano1798 3 years ago
thanks buddy!
MCaparanis 3 years ago
I watched the bloopers first ha ha oh well, this was AWESOME, I was actually annoyed that he died!
paisleypower30 3 years ago
I approve.
StudlyRogers 3 years ago
nicely done..
good location too.
JustDrew32 3 years ago
thank you friend!
BarbedWire324 3 years ago
this is pretty amazing Jake! :)
Nice Job!
JazzyJ1213 3 years ago
Dude....No words.
IBeMe17 3 years ago
this is amazing. =] good job.
TheFloeShow 3 years ago
Way to steal a movie, jackass
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jpq357 3 years ago
forgot to mention it's called "black button"
jpq357 3 years ago
.....yeah we did not steal the story, its not the same.
ps where is your entry asshole?
exactly
fuck off
BarbedWire324 3 years ago
apparently you didn't watch the "black button"
jpq357 3 years ago
apparently i did and its not the same story,
hey
idea
when you get the balls to write direct and produce a short film on a budget of $50 to enter in the next Project Direct, then come talk to me.
until then keep your narrow minded amateur criticisms to yourself
k
thnx
bye
BarbedWire324 3 years ago
how about you looking up a little something about copyright? good thing you're not big... then you would actually be held liable for copyright infringement.
jpq357 3 years ago
Copied DIRECTLY from Black Button's info box:
Some people have observed a similarity in the premise of this film and an revival episode of The Twilight Zone in 1986. Please note[...]The Twilight Zone weren't the first to do it. There was a short story before that,[...]around since the 16th century (deal with the 'devil'). An almost identical premise exists in several cultures. Richard Kelly is even making a film with this premise[...]Our film is similar in premise, but different in plot[.]
BarbedWire324 3 years ago
Even if the stories are similar, there are no music, name, logo, etc. copyright infringements in this film.
Oh and as for looking shit up;
Why don't you get off your soapbox and read the info box of the very film you are defending.
I would love to see your original film that has no traces whatsoever of any previously existing story/legend/film/book
All stories have traces of inspiration.
So go on, make a short film, I hereby dare you.
Until then, stay the fuck away from my channel.
k
thx
bye
BarbedWire324 3 years ago
there is a specific difference between "inspiration" and actually do a little research before making a film. See that's why when major movie corporation make a movie they spend a few weeks or so to make sure no part of their movie is infringing.
As for what the info in the black button stated, you continually prove my point. You haven't done a minute of research until this was mentioned. So apparently you thought you were the only one to come up with this.
jpq357 3 years ago
I don't need to make a short movie to prove shit to you. Apparently this movie sucks ass, so any attempt at a movie would turn out way more succesful than this shit.
As far as the definition of copyright, like I said, spend a minute and google "copyright" you might actually learn something.
jpq357 3 years ago
You are right, the film sucks ass... that's why it has nearly 2000 views, and 45 ratings giving it 4.5 stars out of 5...
Good call buddy,
Oh, and btw, look at ANY Quentin Tarantino films. They ALL have heavy influence and "homages" to many other films. Are you going to say he is a bad writer/ director?
And next, I'm going to ask you to calm the hell down... if you didn't like the film, you are welcome to express your opinion, but please refrain from flipping the fuck out.
Thank you
MCaparanis 3 years ago
Yea It's doing so GREAT!!! To bad it was so great that it made the top 10... :(
No but at least when Quentin Tarantino makes a film he acknowledges, from the start, that he isn't the first to come up with the stuff.
jpq357 3 years ago
Hahaha,
Tarantino NEVER acknowledges that his stories aren't completely his own doing... He just writes and makes it, and that is that, because he doesn't give a fuck about what people think.
Do your research
MCaparanis 3 years ago
You say that we copied directly from The "Black Button"... your an idiot... So anytime that two people people are sitting across from each other and one of those said people is a personification of something related to the afterlife it a direct copy of the black button?
For your information, sense you are so caught up with out movie, I wrote the script before seeing the "Black Button", we then saw the movie, and debating making it, but decided that since the plot differed we would...
MCaparanis 3 years ago
god i love you mike
ha
ps. mr jqp6969, i would really rather you didnt watch my videos......
you wanna talk about unoriginal, stick to your anime bullshit
oh and everyone go to this guys page and call him mean names and tell him that he has absolutely no idea what he is talking about
BarbedWire324 3 years ago
although i'm a bit biased, you guys did a fantastic job and i'm excited to see the top ten results because i think you have a good chance of being there :) good luck!
spletzerm 3 years ago
i loved this : )
very nice!
ylime947 3 years ago
lol nice video.. =) it is pritty good i guess keep maken videos.. they will get better and better. ; )
haunted1818 3 years ago
awesome
natestork 3 years ago
nicce video
matstork233 3 years ago
Freakin awsome!
MiiChemicalRomancexx 3 years ago
thank you sir :D
BarbedWire324 3 years ago
This is awesome! Very different from the puffy videos you have been appearing in, Jake!
amckee2 3 years ago
there's nothing wrong with the puffy videos mckee
blairheir721 3 years ago
:D i loove the editing on this
i like how the guy had a nice fork in his pocket
it reminded me of a saw type thing
i liked it <3 :D
(jon told me about your video. he said it would make him look better if i said he showed me it ;D)
rawrgabbie 3 years ago
lol yeah for sure thanks for watching
vote for us if we make the top ten!
BarbedWire324 3 years ago
playing chess vs death to see if you will live, reminiscent of the Seventh Seal
remainameless10 3 years ago
NICE JOB JAKE I LOVED IT..
NORF3 3 years ago
this was really cool!
morggaan09 3 years ago
wow that was great i loved it!!! keep up the good work!!!
sportysista25 3 years ago
i am impressed.
starcrossedlovers 3 years ago
i am gratefull lol
thank you very much for watching :D
if we make the top ten (knock on wood)
please vote for us!
BarbedWire324 3 years ago
im not saying it wasnt great quality
it really was
im just saying that it didnt make any sense
im not trying to unsult you or anything
i was just stating that it didnt make any sense thats all
sorry if i came off as an asshole
dummydoo93 3 years ago
i liked the end.
when he stabs the pie.
beacuse, yeah.
you know,
it was good :]
beautifulbrighteyesx 3 years ago
yeah we likes that shot hehe thanks
BarbedWire324 3 years ago
you guys did a really great job...i am impressed. :)
parbuckle1018 3 years ago
thanks shmookie-poo :)
BarbedWire324 3 years ago
i cant even hate, you guys did a really good job.
DearNatalieee 3 years ago
thanks you! I'm glad you enjoyed it
MCaparanis 3 years ago
lol thanks girl
BarbedWire324 3 years ago
anytime,boy.
DearNatalieee 3 years ago
great use of colors and yeah that phone does look similar haha
nucleargarden 3 years ago
Interesting concept, how long have you been filming? We have a submission too it's of the zero budget variety but I'd love you opinion, It's called "IceBreaker project direct"
JoelLaFlamme 3 years ago
yeah i did see that one, it wasnt bad i must say. good luck to us both, yes? :) and altogether filming took about a week
but all of the work; writing, preperations, editing, etc took about 3
BarbedWire324 3 years ago
well yeah but then there is the phrase everyones a critic
dummydoo93 3 years ago
true but a lot of hard work went into this
BarbedWire324 3 years ago
mike, i have always loved your acting! great job.
againstme758 3 years ago
Thank you former NFHS student!! lol
I hope you enjoyed the video... besides acting I also wrote and directed (hopefully those aspects impressed you too)
MCaparanis 3 years ago
yesss yes, the other aspects did impress me also. but the comment would have been wayyy too long if i would have included every single part i enjoyed. so i thought i would emphasize my enjoyment of your acting skills. lol
againstme758 3 years ago
lol
funufanis 3 years ago
I am proud of you.
BigmackZach 3 years ago
Thank you good sir!
MCaparanis 3 years ago
hot.
cesca424 3 years ago
yes we are.
i mean thank you.
BarbedWire324 3 years ago
Well, I had to come up with a comment that no one else has already said...
my fave part is when you "die"
cesca424 3 years ago
I rather enjoyed it.
Brilliant mate:)
good luck.
egsaraname 3 years ago
wow...a gun and a holy bible
DanimalNinja 3 years ago
thats actually our favorite shot of the whole thing
BarbedWire324 3 years ago
Lol
yeah that was my fav part xD
DanimalNinja 3 years ago
That was neat,
i really liked that(:
Raddestdinoxever 3 years ago
Very well done!
Crys5736 3 years ago
wow, that was fantastic!
XoAllieMarielov3 3 years ago
genius;)
overxagerated 3 years ago
that had to be the stupidest thing ive ever seen
it made no sense what so ever
i admit it was good acting but the story had to cnter conflict
and btw ur car is a pos
dummydoo93 3 years ago
was it meant to make sense though?! ;)
overxagerated 3 years ago
well with all due respect,
when i think of the biggest and most experience movie critics,
your name does not come to mind.
thanks for watching tho
:)
BarbedWire324 3 years ago
i really liked the beginning shots reminded me ALOT of memento (a great movie if you haven't seen it)
hg1367750 3 years ago
oh we have lol
thank you
BarbedWire324 3 years ago
So some crazy guy I think his name was jon or blairhasomethingorother idk, he told me to rewatch this video and Im glad I did. If i could take off my awesome pants and put on my short film critic skirt It really is excellent, a good length, and as I mentioned the angles are phenomenal. Its a good mix of seriousness and random like the quality of the office or arrested development. You should be really proud of this!
hg1367750 3 years ago
that is quite a compliment thank you sir!
be sure to vote for us if we make the top ten!
BarbedWire324 3 years ago
well you're welcome but...
:( i've been called ma'am before but never sir
hg1367750 3 years ago
Wow! I liked it, very good acting and very atmospheric beginning
illneverturnbacktime 3 years ago
heyyyy that was pretty great. i like all the angles and it flowed pretty well.
MeShellWolfy 3 years ago
soooo good!
nice job :]
juliaalynnn10 3 years ago
great job jake and crew:)
cynthialynnn 3 years ago
"to be, or not to be: that is the question:
whether 'tis nobler in the mind to live or to eat pie...hmmmmm,"
pondered david, the stone cold fox.
browneyedbecca 3 years ago
That was great Jake, you really are good at making films. I liked this a lot, the story flowed great and the plot was relateable to other movies but really unique.
Nickspov 3 years ago
That was great. I was really on my toes with that. Mike, what are you doing smoking. Do I need to tell your mother?
honestkyle 3 years ago
I refused to inhale... so its all good, lol
"mother" doesn't need to know!!!!
MCaparanis 3 years ago
Nicely done. That opening was captivating.
Alex7000 3 years ago 3
good work....well worth the watch :)
l0nelykitty 3 years ago 2
very nice sir. i enjoyed it very much cant wait for the next one. hope to get one of ur movies from work at blockbuster.
mrnotcool77 3 years ago 2
whoever did director of photography did well.
eh you were great as well.
critically the antagonist was a little pushy on his lines/aka not as natural as it should have been
RufioJJ 3 years ago 2
I am glad to see that you enjoyed my cinematography
MCaparanis 3 years ago
well it was well thought through. something a little more fresh then compared to the vlogging-induced community.
thanks dude
RufioJJ 3 years ago
No friend,
... thank you!
MCaparanis 3 years ago
You know Jake, you and I... we make a slightly above mediocre 5 minute short film... What you do think?
MCaparanis 3 years ago
i mean i guess it was ok
BarbedWire324 3 years ago
That was rad.
But I must admit, I got sad when you died, Jake. :(
xXxSanahxXx 3 years ago
that was really cool!
*claps*
iluvpiggypoo0713 3 years ago
Good Job....
Alousius01 3 years ago
thank you sir. and you are an expert on good videos. remember when we made the video at the townhouses ha
BarbedWire324 3 years ago
that was really good.
great job.
<3
xsonnyloverx 3 years ago
awesome. <3
HiImJellyBean 3 years ago
i told you to keep the faith jacob
blairheir721 3 years ago