"The Next Chapter" ((An Original Song)))

[Kayleneciara]

You sound okay Buy what the fuck are you saying?

[joyousorrow]

@Kayleneciara sorry i tend to mumble, its something i'm working on

[littlelols72]

a lil pitchy but it's good!

keep practicing and you'll get better

I like the song :D

[joyousorrow]

@littlelols72 thank you and i'll do the best that i can :)

[PuneyGuney]

if you don't want people to 'flame' then don't upload unless you can take the critizem

[joyousorrow]

@PuneyGuney umm ...i can take Contructive criticism.... not things like "you suck don't ever sing," "you can't sing give up," or "you're voice sucks" etc... if you tell me something like... "you're a lil pitchy," "you're mumbling the words," or "you not breathing enough" etc. that's just fine.

[SoapAndGlory5239]

No problem :)

[SoapAndGlory5239]

Loving it! Great job xx

[joyousorrow]

@SoapAndGlory5239 thanks

[joyousorrow]

@Gonerong10 this is any older video my singing may have gotten better since

[PregnantHippo14]

Interesting...

[joyousorrow]

@PregnantHippo14 how so??

[megarain111]

what do flames mean's?

[joyousorrow]

@megarain111 i think it means rude comments, that's what someone told me

[candeykissable]

@joyousorrow ya i think it means rude comments i just kinda guessed

[princessofbronxville]

cool