I like the colors, it had that dirty, sick, scarey feeling to it. I'm an American so I couldn't understand what she was saying, but I think I understood a little. It felt like a poem. I liked it. One thing I must critique, your sound design sounded pretty flat. When the dogs were barking, you cut off the audio too soon.
Not bad. Tindalos' "bark" is not very impressive, but colors, girl and the scenario are good - weird short, I like it.
davidfragale 4 years ago
thanks! you can see more of "the girl" aka Magenta Baribeau if you do a search for her on YouTube :)
mlleend 4 years ago
Note taken. My bad. I'll make the change.
As for the feel, I wanted to get as far away as possible from the 20s, old professors in dusty labs, as possible. Hence the rivethead look to it.
Thanks for the comment!
hansguevin 5 years ago
I like the colors, it had that dirty, sick, scarey feeling to it. I'm an American so I couldn't understand what she was saying, but I think I understood a little. It felt like a poem. I liked it. One thing I must critique, your sound design sounded pretty flat. When the dogs were barking, you cut off the audio too soon.
innerJAG 5 years ago
Yeah, I must work the sound a bit more... Thanks!
hansguevin 5 years ago
I concur. The vid has great visuals, but sound design is seriously half the game.
kiionioni 5 years ago