I modify the original text slightly. As Billy Collins says it, "Audiences teach you the difference between what reads well on the page and what reads well to the ear."
Your point is apt; well taken. I acknowledge adaptations fully on my "Longfellow Reads Longfellow" CD. I confess it did not occur to me to be sure that information transferred to the YouTube version. I'm not especially adept at this medium, but I'll add it if I am able. Layne Longfellow
This is extraordinarily fine work -- but I would feel a lot better about it if you included a statement right up front that editions have been made to the original poem. It strikes me as disrespectful to alter a work without acknowledgement. But as I say... it's excellent.
"...my variations [are] minimal, never to alter the intent or the content or the feeling, but to render the writing more amenable to the oral reading."
"I modify the original text slightly. As Billy Collins says it, "Audiences teach you the difference between what reads well on the page and what reads well to the ear"
These are quotes from below on this page.. My readings intend to generate the response in today's listener that Longfellow created in the 19th century reader. Check my website.
This is so beautiful, the cd of this man readings of Longfellow's poems is on the list of things I really want to purchase. They are things of beauty.' Longfellow touches ones heart."
I modify the original text slightly. As Billy Collins says it, "Audiences teach you the difference between what reads well on the page and what reads well to the ear."
When I look up the poem from which this is based, the lyrics don't seem to match up. All the same, this is wonderful... I enjoy listening to it. Is there more available from this reading?
@timidboldness I have five Longfellow readings on YouTube.
I modify the original text slightly. As Billy Collins says it, "Audiences teach you the difference between what reads well on the page and what reads well to the ear.
@KuraixOji I intended my variations to be minimal, never to alter the intent or the content or the feeling, but to render the writing more amenable to the oral reading (see my Billy Collins quote above). LL
If you can, listen to Robert Powell's reading of an excerpt..It was on BBC radio 4[england] some 17 years back.
Wonderful voice
4realexpat 2 months ago
I modify the original text slightly. As Billy Collins says it, "Audiences teach you the difference between what reads well on the page and what reads well to the ear."
LayneAllen 8 months ago
Your point is apt; well taken. I acknowledge adaptations fully on my "Longfellow Reads Longfellow" CD. I confess it did not occur to me to be sure that information transferred to the YouTube version. I'm not especially adept at this medium, but I'll add it if I am able. Layne Longfellow
LayneAllen 8 months ago
This is extraordinarily fine work -- but I would feel a lot better about it if you included a statement right up front that editions have been made to the original poem. It strikes me as disrespectful to alter a work without acknowledgement. But as I say... it's excellent.
CarolPetunia 8 months ago
"...my variations [are] minimal, never to alter the intent or the content or the feeling, but to render the writing more amenable to the oral reading."
"I modify the original text slightly. As Billy Collins says it, "Audiences teach you the difference between what reads well on the page and what reads well to the ear"
These are quotes from below on this page.. My readings intend to generate the response in today's listener that Longfellow created in the 19th century reader. Check my website.
LayneAllen 8 months ago
another awful reading. Why are people so willing to destroy the poems natural rhythm?
MiataBRG 8 months ago
Belle réalisation! 5*
(from Montreal, Québec)
RICPOIRIER1 2 years ago
@RICPOIRIER1 Merci!!!!
LayneAllen 1 year ago
we are footsteps in the sands of time...
loveupskirts 2 years ago
This is so beautiful, the cd of this man readings of Longfellow's poems is on the list of things I really want to purchase. They are things of beauty.' Longfellow touches ones heart."
JordanDurell 2 years ago
@JordanDurell I am very grateful for your comment. This work is the culmination of my life's work.
LayneAllen 1 year ago
I have five Longfellow readings on YouTube.
I modify the original text slightly. As Billy Collins says it, "Audiences teach you the difference between what reads well on the page and what reads well to the ear."
LayneAllen 2 years ago
When I look up the poem from which this is based, the lyrics don't seem to match up. All the same, this is wonderful... I enjoy listening to it. Is there more available from this reading?
timidboldness 2 years ago
@timidboldness I have five Longfellow readings on YouTube.
I modify the original text slightly. As Billy Collins says it, "Audiences teach you the difference between what reads well on the page and what reads well to the ear.
LayneAllen 1 year ago
@LayneAllen which part of the poem is this
KuraixOji 10 months ago
@KuraixOji It is the very opening, the Prelude, the Preamble
LayneAllen 10 months ago
@LayneAllen ah ok thanks. didnt know how much you had changed so i couldnt acuratley find it
KuraixOji 10 months ago
@KuraixOji I intended my variations to be minimal, never to alter the intent or the content or the feeling, but to render the writing more amenable to the oral reading (see my Billy Collins quote above). LL
LayneAllen 10 months ago
@LayneAllen I have very much enjoyed this adaptation. Thanks!
mpinedar 3 months ago
Aha! Finally you are on Youtube! Now, if only, you'd get on Myspace! ;)
Voo
JessyJane 2 years ago