I must also add the last two slides are very rushed, if possible re do the last two slides, and try not to lose consistency when you speak, perhaps prepare a script or some general bullet points for you to follow while you talk. the graph on the penultimate slide was far too small to read the key.
I think your example of height differences between short haired and long haired people was incredibly good. But throughout the video I found you spoke far too quickly, almost at times I wondered when you were taking in breaths to speak! If you could slow down a little in general I think the impact of your video would be even greater :) even if you think you are going over the basic material (such as the general CAPM equation of expected return) you should try and keep a nice steady pace.
I must also add the last two slides are very rushed, if possible re do the last two slides, and try not to lose consistency when you speak, perhaps prepare a script or some general bullet points for you to follow while you talk. the graph on the penultimate slide was far too small to read the key.
Mj4665 1 year ago
I think your example of height differences between short haired and long haired people was incredibly good. But throughout the video I found you spoke far too quickly, almost at times I wondered when you were taking in breaths to speak! If you could slow down a little in general I think the impact of your video would be even greater :) even if you think you are going over the basic material (such as the general CAPM equation of expected return) you should try and keep a nice steady pace.
Mj4665 1 year ago