Hey, that was great fun! I thought this one went smoother than the first one. I think the flow of Alpha's voice was best at the very end, where the pace was quicker and the tone and mood was lightest. It brought out Alpha's... happiness with herself and her place in the world. (if that makes sense)...
^_^ Another great chapter, one of my favorites, so thanks for bringing it to life like this!
Hey, that was great fun! I thought this one went smoother than the first one. I think the flow of Alpha's voice was best at the very end, where the pace was quicker and the tone and mood was lightest. It brought out Alpha's... happiness with herself and her place in the world. (if that makes sense)...
^_^ Another great chapter, one of my favorites, so thanks for bringing it to life like this!
SilverbackRon 3 years ago 2