The Letter: A Creepy Real Life Short Film

[moldren]

he gets caught.

[jpappyo]

Cool

[DrgDrg]

Great short movie man! I really liked the composition, editing and natural lighting.

How long did it take for you film it?

[raiseitup01]

this shit in uncreative

[l3ojao]

my little sister's screenplay is better than this.

[PedroSoaresdp]

love it

[iDorksxX]

do more ! :)

[u2todit4me]

"36 hours later, he was caught due to the hand writing comparison"

[evesaenz13]

@u2todit4me LOL! True! And the angle of the gunshot wound proved that it was NOT self-inflicted LOL

[pragzter]

not very creepy tbh... but good starter for a story

[jooky10]

that some peng girl(:

[guywhoisnotme11111]

creepy much

[blacklightgamer97]

D:

[N1wSGaming]

[̲̅$̲̅(̲̅2)̲̅$̲̅] 

[matmann96]

@SagelessRanger Hahaha exactly what i was thinking!

[onis]

fragtality is going to have a hard time getting a girlfriend now. i guess apparently him being a little busy means the only option is to shoot his girlfriend. the sound was so horrid too. the foley was so poorly done. 0/5 stars.

[Pajoolian]

they would discover it wasnt her hand writing and from the angle she was shot she did not shoot herself.

[dumbdonkey01]

No female can ever possibly right that messy! Good video though!

[xXHarryR18Xx]

where was the epic necrofeliac rape scene?????

[NH2Contents]

@SagelessRanger what do you mean?

[xxshino123]

the writing obivously isnt girl writing he needed to add hearts above the I's

[xxxsnipergod]

@SagelessRanger and fingerprints on the gun

[Fiber04]

That's a fucking great video. Holy shit. MOAR.

[Dr4g0nair]

The writing is obviously not a girls writing 

[assannight]

awesome didnt expect that to happen

[Dessinator17]

That was astounding. I would love to see more.

[hihi100202]

lol that was cool

[xxxsnipergod]

THIS ISNT A GAMEPLAY!!!!!

[J1hk3r]

That was great :D

[JeffOnCp]

That girl is actually 2 Bucks' real life girlfriend. I've seen her IRL pics on AIM.

[brenden403]

fucking brilliant

[badmarvin901]

What kind of gameplay is this? lol jkjk

[footyspoak]

Great video + editing with a few HUGE forensic flaws. Still though, very well done!

[matmann96]

........No....

[brandon01994]

wow of course the video pauses as im about to find out who it is at the door

[rage13371]

its dexter season 1002310312312

[handicapfishy]

You have bad handwriting.

[MrPivotman12]

that was not creepy!

[CantStopDonut]

akimbo gloves weren't necessary.

[mnfdsng]

this would have been so much better if it actually had a story to it. for example, what were his motives for doing that? was he crazy or was the girl going to mess his life up? if some questions like those would have been answered, then this short film would've have been great.

[acooldude0]

Amazing short film. Very good.

[iiTzZenNnX]

this story had no point to it, what so ever.

[gun070]

0:01

[skateboarding]

holy tits

[xblFishflash]

i was expecting him to commit suicide, very well written

[lilpopivin7697]

I honestly did not see that ending coming! Double Like.

[11kaspar11]

wtf??



[JohnXtwo]

I enjoyed this very much! Awesome job man

[CH33KYiZninj4]

well that was sad dark and not happy

[VlakvarkAsh]

really good

[CrazyGameplays]

hey guys i wold like a new gamer tag 1 to 2 words is amazing please send any ideas and no profanity please!

[htcoolio]

@CrazyGameplays untouchable penis

[odyssey2341]

@CrazyGameplays Fuck Sex.

[44antman]

@CrazyGameplays robotic dildonic

[skateboarding]

@CrazyGameplays fuckshitdamnpissanalcavitydouc­hebagtitsbluewafflerustytrombo­ne

[g4m3mast3r]

@skateboarding More than 15 characters

[lusteraliaszero]

@CrazyGameplays fuckingprofanity.

[PregnantFox]

@CrazyGameplays CrazyGameplays

[JohnThePunisher]

@CrazyGameplays GoofyShubStack

[TheMudkipArmy]

@CrazyGameplays Hugh Jass

[matmann96]

@CrazyGameplays FrailtyofProfanity

[N1wSGaming]

@CrazyGameplays Adolf Muhhumad

[WIEvansChang]

@CrazyGameplays

Here's an idea for your gamer tag: Stop_Spamming,_Fuckwad

[assassinmanthing]

@WIEvansChang ahahah,he saidno profanity,Stop_Spamming_Dickhe­ad

[TheLukeylala]

@CrazyGameplays The Furry Lemon

[freerealmsvids1]

@DaProdigyFTW Why did you copy that and? put? so? many? "?"!

[VengeanceDUDE]

i dont get it...

[Dorrektor125]

WHAT DO YOU SAY WHEn YOU TO FUCKED UP?

[XxEMOGUYxX117]

i give it a 9.5/10 it was actually better than what i was expecting

[unitedclans]

amazing

[aperson44u]

great short, best in a while by far

[mrtmantohead]

predictable but i liked it

[MyStaTuStuDioS]

Inxy is a fuckin bitch

[cjc696]

Is that 2bucks

[HardGravy]

@cjc696 2bucks is a dog

[MonsterMo44]

very nicely done... had me engaged the entire time.

[potofham]

I DONT GIVE A SHIT ABOUT NO "FOOPETS" I WANNA SEE THIS DAM VIDEO NOT VIRTUAL PUPPY PORN DAMMIT

[Elitehaxme]

i thought he was leaving but was righting a ledder while doing it cause he didnt wanna say it and it would end with him like god dang bitch cant u let me right a letter and go off on her then leave not this but this was still awesome but exspected funny

[iloveboobiesLAWWLZ]

He didn't have gloves when writing that letter.....enough said.

[codenamezeta11]

@iloveboobiesLAWWLZ

Im sure they'll catch on right as the see the letter. I don't know one chick that writes that shitty... lol

[BestVidsRightHere]

@iloveboobiesLAWWLZ

Lol, you're right

What a fail.

[epicbattler]

meh. 1080p at least.

[inxyEdits]

Do you know how fucking stupid you are Fragtality? He didn't have gloves on when he started writing the letter (in the kitchen), therefore authorities will know Claire didn't fucking do it... I don't like you at all, actually... I hate you, unblock my fucking IP from H3F or Dualtality gets taken down. Your fucking choice asshole piece of fuck.

[mushman1]

@inxyEdits Someone's a sad panda.

Anyway, nice short film, made me laugh when they looked at each other in the door

[dannygmiseter]

@inxyEdits shut up you cry baby puss

[LolitaSupreme]

I liked it.

Not pretentious like most amateur college films.

As a karate expert, I see much potential in the maker of this film.

[Axohco]

creepy, nice job

[habs1master]

I'm also going to say this. I am not saying this to be mean, I am saying this to be constructive criticism. My main point being don't make a film about something you're not educated on.

Handwriting is one of the MOST telling pieces of evidence, it can tell MANY things which would be able to create a profile of any suspect. It can tell things like gender, emotion, race, intenions, age, and much more.

From things such as vocabulary, sentence patterns, font, pressure, slants, and much more.

[DudeitsLandon]

@habs1master thats wut i was thinking

[habs1master]

@mule619 Stfu.

[KillerBeasT1995]

its christmas not halloween

[LoboPal]

But, the bullet hit her in the left side of the head...

[southparkrules112233]

This film was like watching and episode of Lost. It's mysterious, intriguing and entertaining but it has you craving for explanations.

[Liamkole]

why??? i dont understand why he made this?

[mllj0]

To really critique this, a lot of negative comes to mind. But then again overall it was a fairly good movie. One example would be bullet entry and correlation to the handgun placement, especially if it was in her left hand? Another simple one would be handwriting on the letter - can it be hers? Or even the man's MO? The editing at least, with no continuity errors, was superb. Just the storyline...oh well. I'll just take it for what it is. Again, it is your first film! Bravo!

[habs1master]

Flawed, they would know it is not suicide, because she wouldn't have gun powder residue on her hand, not to mention the angle she was shot from, and e position of her hand and he gun. Any mediocre CSI unit would see all of these things, and probably alot more.

Some ways this would trace back to him are; 1, the gun, depending on who it is regisered to. 2, the note, not only did he leave HIS fingerprints on it, he didn' t even attemp to put hers on it. Lastly, the writing.

3/10, The Truth hurts.

[mllj0]

@habs1master

I totally agree. Exactly what I would have elaborated. Nice. Friended.

[habs1master]

@mllj0 Thanks, will accept in just a second. There were a few other things, but I didn;t have enough space to add it all.

People just seem to lack common sense in this suff.

[bballsocceboy12345]

@habs1master

its just a story film for people to enjoy

dont have to go try-hard

[habs1master]

@bballsocceboy12345

*sigh* I'm sick of prepubescent little faggots picking battles with me.

[bballsocceboy12345]

@habs1master

iam not picking a fight, i have better things to do than that

iam just saying, that this is a pretty good film for someone that doesnt have a ton of experience

and if you think otherwise, fine

[habs1master]

@bballsocceboy12345

Ughh, anyone with common sense could do better then this. Really, this "short" is hiding behind equipment, and resources. It lacks acting, a proper plot, intelligence, creaivity, and much more.

[dr4g0nt4nk3r]

@habs1master "Quote from the creator:

This film was a project for a beginning film-making class that I took this semester where we had to write, direct, film, and edit our own 2-5 minute short film over the course of two weeks. Although I have been a casually self-taught editor for around two years, this was my first time juggling all the other responsibilities involved in the film-making process."

[TheGifted93]

wow that was the best short film ive ever seen

[DannySmackaHo]

I almost turned it off then he wrote "Claire" and I was like "Boring...oh wait a minute!"

That guy is by far the most offensive person I have ever watch on my computer screen.

[KDBcorporations]

pretty good audio seemed off, might be from lack of music but still entertaining, glad 2 bucks is featuring this kind of stuff that i'm into

[JohnnyPicasso4]

i thought it was funny when she died

[IxiceMAN]

very good, loved the ending. did not see that coming

[kevsan17]

that was awesome.5/5

[HDSkittles]

wtf that was random thatguy must be gay she was HOT AS HELL

[eiviking]

what the hell was that random tingy magiger it is x-mas eve you know

[MrcookiePolarBear]

@eiviking i know right?! lmfao 

[eiviking]

what the hel was that random thingy magiger hope you know ot oi x.mas eve

[Holyfraek12]

@eiviking hey i hope u realize that hes making videos and he can make w/e the hell he wants u retart

[bbgun123321]

I'm surprized he didnt hav a x-box 360!!!!!

[kameron900000]

Sincerly, Claire.Awesomest deaath line evar.

[RobotChobot]

MIIIINDDD FUUUCCK. (not really but still good)

[sorzanx]

not too short not too long...

not too bitter not too sweet...

just Good...

[hugge123456]

Oh, SHEEEET...

[thizznation145]

is this 2 bucks

[GrenadeApple3]

@thizznation145 No, 2bucks is asian.

[BobFard]

@GrenadeApple3 No, 2 Bucks is a dog. An asian dog.

[GrenadeApple3]

I swear if this is going to scare me, I'm going to slap you with a fish.

[matthew2337]

wasn't creepy but was cool :)

[TYLER13xXx]

Wow all I can say Is very good job!

[Hullabalooooooo]

I was like wtf but then it all came together and I was like OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO­OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO­OOH!

[BetaBro]

this was kinda dumb because if this guy was smart he wouldve killed her much more meticulusly. 1. he would have used a silencer otherwise a neigbor couldve heard it. 2. (this is most important) tha angle he shot her was straight through the forehead, an investigator would know immediately that it was not a suicide as people usually fire up from the chin or side from the temple.

[SiL3NtxProdigy]

@BetaBro Ahh shut up and enjoy the clip will ya

[habs1master]

@BetaBro You've kind of got the idea. You're assuming he house is in a neighbourhood, it could be in the country, or even an area where gunshots is normal. You're also assuming he was shot in he forehead, not that it makes a difference, but she could've been shot anywhere - Neck, Heart, and many other possible kill shot areas.

[KaosEspada]

all i can say is...WTF!

[shakir1506]

wat was the point of this?

[EcFXSN1P3RX]

yes 301st viewer!

[CabooseWillPwnCheif]

first i was like :o then i was like :O

[Mcrichalot12]

I dont get what happened 

[KILLERxKNIGHT1]

That was kind of disturbing.

[wetiophgf]

steinert, we have to kill steinert! why mason why!?

[RileyPsyches]

not that great of a story

[AvantChase]

what?

[JstaffGaming]

That was good.

[pokeyclap7]

WTF?

[cabbagesftw]

did he died

[theDECENTswe]

nothing to impressive.

[vlametspek]

Great film with a surprising ending! Verry nice camera work and great lighting. Too bad it was only 4 minutes long. The voice sounded kinda 'fake', but i don't mind it. Favourited, 9/10!

[xxdanxexx]

@vlametspek I kind of agree, but I also thought it was more "real" at the same time. Because, it kind of deviates from the typical deep male narrator voice.

If that makes sense.

[benched4lyfe]

@vlametspek

thanks

im happy you didnt spoil a line from the film.

[Animefreak84e]

wtf??

[CeNSoRGaMiNG]

Thumbs up if u want to go to the pet store and get your own 2buks!!

[kingdong4]

@MisterDyer thats all you got out of this? go back to watching cartoons.

[MisterDyer]

@kingdong4 No, I was commenting on something, not explaining the full meaning of the video. Anyway, I will take your suggestion and go watch The Simpsons or something.

[nickOZ88977]

WTF???

but niice :)

[tERtasdf]

pedobear is rather amusing...

[McdBzsarok]

@tERtasdf

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[F1NJP]

@McdBzsarok Is it just me or is your comment written in a different font than everyone else's? O.o

[McdBzsarok]

@F1NJP

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[F1NJP]

@McdBzsarok so, umm.... how?

[iamafloorguythe3rd]

o.O

[metallicas123]

I love 2 bucs ?

[herkaorange]

jag äger



[Davidthechubbykid]

hello

[markong98]

furst

[soggyumbrella]

FIRST!!