You sound good. But wen you rap breatha some. You sound like you holding your breathe. My cuzzens likes it as well but she says the samething that I say.
Keep it up YOUNGJDASTAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Reach out to the teens.
Not to bad, tighten up your flow, maybe lose some words, you might be trying to fit to many in a few bars. Lyrics were cool, work on your production though, try and get that quality right, keep doing your thing though and repping Christ.
@Tweetybird16 lol okay thanks
YOUNGJDASTARTV 6 months ago
You sound good. But wen you rap breatha some. You sound like you holding your breathe. My cuzzens likes it as well but she says the samething that I say.
Keep it up YOUNGJDASTAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Reach out to the teens.
tweetybird216 6 months ago
Hey I'm a teen female christian rapper...go to my page and tell me what you think :D
MsPinkSugar96 6 months ago
Not to bad, tighten up your flow, maybe lose some words, you might be trying to fit to many in a few bars. Lyrics were cool, work on your production though, try and get that quality right, keep doing your thing though and repping Christ.
ReytheCoolestLoser2 7 months ago 2