This is excellent ! I love his voice, its dark. I just wish you guys filmed this at night. It never sat right with me to see Batman operating in the daytime.
As a fellow filmmaker and Batfan, I thought this was pretty good. However, my criticisms would be the fight choreography, the editing during the fights, the SFX and you shouldn't have tried to make daytime look like nighttime. The music, VFX, voice acting (for Batman), and costume was fantastic though! Speaking of which, how did you get that costume? Specifically the cowl.
One of the most brilliant short films I've ever seen. Intelligent, bold, profound, clever, penetrating, etc... Paul's talent is unbelievable and this is just the beginning. He's only going to excel from here on and one day he'll be owning every director, producer, and actor in California/New York. Great job Paul. Your talent is more than inspiring and the film is golden. Keep it up!
The story, voice-over and costume were alright, but the fight scenes weren't well-choreographed and why was Batman out in the daytime? Shouldn't he be attending Wayne Enterprises boardroom meetings or getting his troubled 3 hours of sleep? Still, nice try. One thing I really liked at the end, "Batman created by Bob Kane AND Bill Finger". Hell yeah!!! Good to see Finger get acknowledged for his contribution to the Batman legend, seeing as Kane and DC screwed him out of credit.
My opinion/criticism (hopefully taken constructively): I thought the voice over was good, Batman costume wasn't that good, fight scene sounds (punching, kicking...etc) sounded too fabricated/fake, liked the storyline, the fight choreography could have been better as well. Great effort!
@fkncody thanks for your feedback! There are definitely things that could have been improved -- tho keep in mind this was an extremely small shoot with limited resources. Hope it was entertaining nonetheless!
Wow. This is amazing.
rickzilla0825 1 week ago
how did you make that batsuit I GOTTA KNOW!!!
Metalgear461 2 weeks ago
is that scott heramn from the real world? :D
kryptonTJM 2 weeks ago
brillant bat man looks bad ass cool that was brillant awsome story to
davidconway001 1 month ago
This is excellent ! I love his voice, its dark. I just wish you guys filmed this at night. It never sat right with me to see Batman operating in the daytime.
MrJonwade 2 months ago
You know when batman holds a gun shit just got real!!! Seriously though great fukin job I want to make my own film now thanks for the inspiration!!!
Metalgear461 2 months ago
Pretty cool short. I really liked the rooftop shot of batman
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robertm5252 2 months ago
As a fellow filmmaker and Batfan, I thought this was pretty good. However, my criticisms would be the fight choreography, the editing during the fights, the SFX and you shouldn't have tried to make daytime look like nighttime. The music, VFX, voice acting (for Batman), and costume was fantastic though! Speaking of which, how did you get that costume? Specifically the cowl.
EliteF50 2 months ago
One of the most brilliant short films I've ever seen. Intelligent, bold, profound, clever, penetrating, etc... Paul's talent is unbelievable and this is just the beginning. He's only going to excel from here on and one day he'll be owning every director, producer, and actor in California/New York. Great job Paul. Your talent is more than inspiring and the film is golden. Keep it up!
alyssalovesmusic325 3 months ago
Well done Paul!
caulfiled 3 months ago
@caulfiled thanks Michael! Couldn't have done it without you! :D
G2Prods 3 months ago
@G2Prods Szabolcs :)
caulfiled 3 months ago
@caulfiled Both you and Michael ;)
G2Prods 3 months ago
So proud of you Paul, great job!! I'm looking forward to seeing your work on the screen in the very near future!!
smile10523 3 months ago 4
The story, voice-over and costume were alright, but the fight scenes weren't well-choreographed and why was Batman out in the daytime? Shouldn't he be attending Wayne Enterprises boardroom meetings or getting his troubled 3 hours of sleep? Still, nice try. One thing I really liked at the end, "Batman created by Bob Kane AND Bill Finger". Hell yeah!!! Good to see Finger get acknowledged for his contribution to the Batman legend, seeing as Kane and DC screwed him out of credit.
DoctorPretorious616 3 months ago
Paul Goleburn > Christopher Nolan
Brian007341 3 months ago 5
@Brian007341 haha NEVAH!
-Great job Brian!!!
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My opinion/criticism (hopefully taken constructively): I thought the voice over was good, Batman costume wasn't that good, fight scene sounds (punching, kicking...etc) sounded too fabricated/fake, liked the storyline, the fight choreography could have been better as well. Great effort!
fkncody 3 months ago
@fkncody thanks for your feedback! There are definitely things that could have been improved -- tho keep in mind this was an extremely small shoot with limited resources. Hope it was entertaining nonetheless!
G2Prods 3 months ago
I'm sorry but this is naff is hell! Funny seeing Scott at the start though...
danmunday1 3 months ago
in real life Scott would kick batman"s ass...muhahahaXD
kokilalf01 3 months ago 2
if you cut it down to a trailer it'd be much better...
thelittletoe 3 months ago
This is the first time i havent been on Batmans side, you could have taken him if you wanted to scott! hahaha
havoc1409 3 months ago 2
Epic.
Bryan89130 3 months ago 4
GENIUS SCOTT ! hahaha
biancodubini1 3 months ago
2:01 protien powder? lol! btw i love the video, it was awesome!!
jahanzeb360 3 months ago 3
Good job, although if this was real Scott Herman would of smashed Batman!
VirusExecute 3 months ago 6
@VirusExecute Exactly, in real life the situation would have been reversed and Batman would be laying on the wall passed out.
FitnessByMatt 3 months ago
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emericaordie15 3 months ago
love batmans voice,great video!!!i loved it,good job guys!!i loved it
jesse101995 3 months ago 2
Hah since when does Batman come out in broad daylight?
MohammeddKhan 3 months ago
@MohammeddKhan "Middle of the day, Alfred? Not very subtle." "The Lamborghini then...much more subtle."
Aliksmyth 3 months ago
Scott Herman o.O
1990LIGHT 3 months ago
FINALLY!!! Came out great man!!! I loved it!
ScottHermanFitness 3 months ago 12
@ScottHermanFitness you were great man!!! hope to see you soon!
G2Prods 3 months ago 2
this is excellent!
silverrcircuit44 3 months ago 3
@silverrcircuit44 thanks!!
G2Prods 3 months ago
Awesome work paul. And to all those involved!!
darkknight36351 3 months ago 2
@darkknight36351 thanks! :)
G2Prods 3 months ago
this was incredible!
kasuke21 3 months ago
@kasuke21 thanks man! :D
G2Prods 3 months ago