It's good, but needs more improvement, you have to understand the speech more, maybe watch other videos (from movies maybe) of this speech to do better with the tone, or whatever, the change/stages of the emotion and tone (i don't know what the right words to use :)) I agree with the sarcasm on honorable man. Uhm her face was blank? Needs more improvement on the facial expression and gestures. Didn't seem natural, i felt it was all voice
I quite like it overall. It had faults, yes, but she is learning. People saying it is horrible not only are rude, but wrong. It was by no means horrible, but much better than what most students could do, who cannot even read in their own minds, let alone aloud without studdering like idiots. Sure she was overlysarcastic and emotional in some ways, but she carried herself with great confidence and presence, she annunciated well, she knew what she was saying, and made all the proper pauses.
are you trying to put on an accent? i'm sorry but for the most part this isn't good at all, however there is potentialm you need to go through and analyze the punctuation and not be so obvious with the sarcasm, your stage presence is also quite weak. i suggest getting a decent acting coach.
@WorldWarPropaganda I have to memorize this play for a 9th grade English project and so has everyone else at my school, as well as thousands in America.
I would love to meet the kids who think that Caesar is just a salad, for I am sure, or at least I hope, that they are young and have not yet encountered him in their history lessons or have not yet read any William Shakespeare.
@WorldWarPropaganda i have to memorize and recite this for my school. You can not make the assumption about most kids thinking Caesar and anything more then a salad, and if i may quote "Meera is an Indian born and brought up in America, and was in boarding school in India for 2 years.
That is the reason for a mixed accent.
gleep111" so this gives you no right to assume things about the general youth in america. i am not denying the 'decline in society' but with your 'declining in knowledge'
Its good to hear. I would still disagree about your optimistic view of "Not" a "decline of knowledge". That is to say, its not only, that people are getting "dumber" but also, what is taught in "schools" was never meant to give you unconditional "knowledge", more so just prepare you to conform/adapt/adjust/function in to modern society.
Anyways, all of this is should be expected in an era of mass tech, quickest results, consumer- service industrial society.
I think for the reason she's yelling is because she doesn't have a microphone and she projecting her voice to a huge auditorium. And if she does have a speech problem then she's doing good anyway.
The rhetoric in the speech I laden with subtext and the inflection of your voice seems to adequately convey that. However, the force of the argument and the passion innate in it are best derived from the guttural cadence of the male speech organ that women (for the most part) are not endowed with. Im not sure that this casting works here ?
good sarcasm infliction in voice to interpret who real culprits are. You need to tone down the higher voice a little and get more boom in the voice. Good!!
Thank you very much for your comments. This will be very helpful to the teachers who prepare the students. Meera has fine expressions and a very positive attitude to learn. She is very mild and soft spoken as a person so she gave more force to her voice.
you got the right infliction in your voice for the necessary sarcasm so that people know who arethe real culprits. Because you have a higher voice, as a woman (I am a woman) you need to slightly tone down the shout and get your voice a little more booming at the same time. Well Done!!
Y was it bad just cauze of the yelling. But the point is that Antony is grieving over his friend and superior. He's also trying to give the message to the people of Rome who the real bad man was ! So I would like to hear your side .
she sounds like a crazy/evil/indian/british supervillian from starwars :D
explosionbooom 5 months ago
It's good, but needs more improvement, you have to understand the speech more, maybe watch other videos (from movies maybe) of this speech to do better with the tone, or whatever, the change/stages of the emotion and tone (i don't know what the right words to use :)) I agree with the sarcasm on honorable man. Uhm her face was blank? Needs more improvement on the facial expression and gestures. Didn't seem natural, i felt it was all voice
christinaumali 5 months ago
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christinaumali 5 months ago
she got potential..she knows how to pace...quite good...
lumbiaknight87 6 months ago
I quite like it overall. It had faults, yes, but she is learning. People saying it is horrible not only are rude, but wrong. It was by no means horrible, but much better than what most students could do, who cannot even read in their own minds, let alone aloud without studdering like idiots. Sure she was overlysarcastic and emotional in some ways, but she carried herself with great confidence and presence, she annunciated well, she knew what she was saying, and made all the proper pauses.
wainscottbl 11 months ago
better for a male to say it
999933333 1 year ago
are you trying to put on an accent? i'm sorry but for the most part this isn't good at all, however there is potentialm you need to go through and analyze the punctuation and not be so obvious with the sarcasm, your stage presence is also quite weak. i suggest getting a decent acting coach.
ILikeToPlayWithFire 1 year ago
horrible
flohthemachine 1 year ago
Nice job, young lady!
detect9001 1 year ago
expressions are not appropriate.but good job
TheAshwathi 1 year ago
i cant get past the inflection from the accent
stutzand000 1 year ago
@stutzand000 Meera is an Indian born and brought up in America, and was in boarding school in India for 2 years.
That is the reason for a mixed accent.
gleep111 1 year ago
This video is a fine example of why America is in a cultural void and declining in knowledge.
Most American kids think Caesar is nothing more than a salad. While in India they recite Anthony's speech.
WorldWarPropaganda 1 year ago
@WorldWarPropaganda I have to memorize this play for a 9th grade English project and so has everyone else at my school, as well as thousands in America.
I would love to meet the kids who think that Caesar is just a salad, for I am sure, or at least I hope, that they are young and have not yet encountered him in their history lessons or have not yet read any William Shakespeare.
malcominthemid 1 year ago
@malcominthemid
I am very glad to hear that. It doest change the fact o thef decline in society.
WorldWarPropaganda 1 year ago
@WorldWarPropaganda i have to memorize and recite this for my school. You can not make the assumption about most kids thinking Caesar and anything more then a salad, and if i may quote "Meera is an Indian born and brought up in America, and was in boarding school in India for 2 years.
That is the reason for a mixed accent.
gleep111" so this gives you no right to assume things about the general youth in america. i am not denying the 'decline in society' but with your 'declining in knowledge'
irockyoursocks12356 1 year ago
@irockyoursocks12356
Its good to hear. I would still disagree about your optimistic view of "Not" a "decline of knowledge". That is to say, its not only, that people are getting "dumber" but also, what is taught in "schools" was never meant to give you unconditional "knowledge", more so just prepare you to conform/adapt/adjust/function in to modern society.
Anyways, all of this is should be expected in an era of mass tech, quickest results, consumer- service industrial society.
WorldWarPropaganda 1 year ago
She has an American Accent ! So its not that hard to understand !
pinkwings9 2 years ago
her accent slaughtered this speech
HarbingerGunship 2 years ago
I think for the reason she's yelling is because she doesn't have a microphone and she projecting her voice to a huge auditorium. And if she does have a speech problem then she's doing good anyway.
pinkwings9 2 years ago
The rhetoric in the speech I laden with subtext and the inflection of your voice seems to adequately convey that. However, the force of the argument and the passion innate in it are best derived from the guttural cadence of the male speech organ that women (for the most part) are not endowed with. Im not sure that this casting works here ?
123tilma123 2 years ago
1st off stop yelling and second, absolutely horrible! does she have a speech problem? ( lispe or something )
Extinction15 2 years ago
good sarcasm infliction in voice to interpret who real culprits are. You need to tone down the higher voice a little and get more boom in the voice. Good!!
acoustictricks 2 years ago
Thank you very much for your comments. This will be very helpful to the teachers who prepare the students. Meera has fine expressions and a very positive attitude to learn. She is very mild and soft spoken as a person so she gave more force to her voice.
girishjimenon 2 years ago
you got the right infliction in your voice for the necessary sarcasm so that people know who arethe real culprits. Because you have a higher voice, as a woman (I am a woman) you need to slightly tone down the shout and get your voice a little more booming at the same time. Well Done!!
acoustictricks 2 years ago
Y was it bad just cauze of the yelling. But the point is that Antony is grieving over his friend and superior. He's also trying to give the message to the people of Rome who the real bad man was ! So I would like to hear your side .
pinkwings9 2 years ago
Bad! :( lessen the shouting!! :D
seriousgirl12 2 years ago
uuuhh..this was good man...becuse it takes alot to do that
kamanarifox 2 years ago
uhhh..that was a no
lightisbright777 2 years ago 2
ya mmmm no
sarahlovesmetal7 2 years ago 2
sadly no
violmaster19 2 years ago 2
bad
sean151291 2 years ago 5
nice
musicfreakfri13 3 years ago