0:58-1:09 yeah, we get the idea, make sure he died... but, without any movement of the body, it will be boring. try to add some kicking :P and make it short. like i said earlier, some special fx will be good here..
other comments:
1. CAMERA SHAKY!!! try to hold the camera with both hands, and limit the cameraman movement.
2. voice not audible enough.... try to add some subtitle (yeah, i know how english hate it.. but we asian sure love a subtitle, even if it is in english :) )
not a bad start for a new film making. try to do more video and u will get the hang of it...
try to take a look at my bar bet video. yeah, i know i cant push my actors that much or they wont help with my assignment. :P. i try to upload another video of mine which will be a good reference ( IF i am not too lazy ......)
0:00-015. no comment
0:16-0:26. u r speaking but the camera is not focusing at you at all. try to change the setting and arrangement.
0:33-0:51.try to change the camera angle a little bit. here and there. try to copy all those action movie, high drama style.
0:43 the white guy had a glimpse at the camera! this is an absolute "NO! NO!"
0:52-0:54. it will be nicer if u can include some slow mo, flash, a change of colour (red will be nice) and a multiple angle.
0:58-1:09 yeah, we
rodhirejab 2 years ago
0:58-1:09 yeah, we get the idea, make sure he died... but, without any movement of the body, it will be boring. try to add some kicking :P and make it short. like i said earlier, some special fx will be good here..
other comments:
1. CAMERA SHAKY!!! try to hold the camera with both hands, and limit the cameraman movement.
2. voice not audible enough.... try to add some subtitle (yeah, i know how english hate it.. but we asian sure love a subtitle, even if it is in english :) )
rodhirejab 2 years ago
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rodhirejab 2 years ago
or try to re-record the voice. i know it is hard, but that is what u get for low cost movie... or try to limit the usage of voice in a movie.
advance style:
1. try to make the screen smaller. 4:3 screen. small screen is good for thriller, suspense film.
2.try to increase brightness and contrast of the film. this will tremendously increase the quality of the film
3.try to get a BETTER place setting. dont get me wrong, if u want to make the audience felt "WOW!", a classroom is not a good idea
rodhirejab 2 years ago
well, hope that helps.
not a bad start for a new film making. try to do more video and u will get the hang of it...
try to take a look at my bar bet video. yeah, i know i cant push my actors that much or they wont help with my assignment. :P. i try to upload another video of mine which will be a good reference ( IF i am not too lazy ......)
rodhirejab 2 years ago
this is a good video as well. produce by my senior, the one who taught me :)
"KYUEM Teachers Day Video"
search for it.......
oh yeah, this video shows that, A GOOD SONG CHOICE IS VITAL!!
rodhirejab 2 years ago
yeh it is
ftade 2 years ago
hehe It's Lydia ( cross) here! lol this is Ahmad right? lol awesome vid
spidereine 2 years ago