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From: HpLyrikzTV
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  • this is beyond amazing.im so in love with your voice <3

  • danm this joint is a infinity out of a 10

  • you're doing great things with your music man, keep going.

    only 2 pieces of advice: the most common word in this rap is 'me', its okay if its about you but don't make it so obvious. Using metaphor, simile, and other poetic devices will take you rapping to a whole new level

    also, when you get the chance try to use some different chord progressions, so your songs don't sound like the usual four-chord songs everyone else are writing. be original, experiment with what you've got and you'll go far

  • your the best i swear I LOVE ALL THE SONGS !! FUCK ALL THE RAPPERZ UR THE BEST!!!!

  • still supporting you :D

  • thats amanzing!

  • You Need To Make More Music All Of Them Are 2-3 Years Old. I Love You And Your Music(:

  • The Next Big "Punjabi" rapper......I just love your creation.....i wud say make it lil more "globalized" by putting sum punjabi verses im em......and ur ratings will go sky rocketing.....plus u'll be noticed even more.....

  • Cool

    

  • HP Lyrikz Is Going To Be Next BEST Singer/Rapper .

  • Your so inspirational.. i luv all ur songs<3:)

    

  • rhyming words..... nice

  • your beast .... M. ayala

  • Eminem was my favoeite rapper until i heard about u

  • Ur better than eminem

  • ewwwwwwwwwww!

    

  • 6 people dont know what good rapping is.....

  • What's the instrumental?

  • This song made me have more faith in myself and helped me alot you wouldnt even believe how much..

    Check My Music Out Plz! & Thanks.

  • my fave ! <3

  • Man ..... I just accidently came across this video, YOU GO HARD!! Well keep going, this is good, if theres any haters along the way tell them you taking over ;)

  • damm....luv it

  • You rapped this?!

  • Oh my goodness! I really love your music! You're really talented and through all that you've been through your still up and going with the people around you. You're also a really cute guy with amazing lyrics(: keep it up!

  • This a deep song, I like the thought pattern

  • Do anybody Got the Piano Cord TO This Or Video??!

  • Fuck ,This Song Really Makes Me Feel Better .!

  • ur really talented im glad ur better now i am seriously addicted to ur music itz my inspiration to keep on going lotz of love and respect

  • i really love this and all ur songs ..there all really good and jus cant stop listening to them .... keep up the great job and never no one bring you down ... :) much ..love and respect to you HpLyrikz <3 :)

  • Cann i Pleaseee! Havee the Pianoo Chordds!?!?

    Or Make A videoo Of Itt Pleasee Itss Soo Niceee!

  • You have talent. ur my favorite rapper man..... thimk about a career doing this if u want help ask me about it.... I can help u and i no people who will beg to record u man. Think about and post on my youtube.

  • whats the instrumental

  • ur awsome... no ur amazing up there wit the best!!!! i love how ur music is so great i dont understaind how ur music istent on the radio... but till then youtube is addicting because your music is the drug. (: love you!!!!

  • yo homes,keep it up,this shit right herre has a meaning,dope,keep it up

  • I love your songs. I love how reall u are. You've been threw alot and it inspires me alot! I hope you reach all of your goals!♥

  • - This sonq hella mad meh thinkk about my life &' how itreated my parents | wel ilove yuhhr sonqs♥ they speakk thee real life

  • I felt this shyt rite here-

  • i really hope that you make it far in life with ur rapping...ur lyrikz go hard! i luv ur songs...<3 *Asii'Ma* aka *HannaH*MaRie*

  • omg i cant stop listening to this Song its just AWESOME!!!! :D <3

  • I believe!!!(: This The Song!

  • Have u already thought of makin an album ? Dat ll be sum awsum shyt?

  • Dayum this song is the second best song ever the best one is ties of a friendship.!

  • Ey hp? Were did u get the beat for "nobody else"?

  • Best song you have ever writing and done. Mad fucking propsss!!!

    I feel this song more then any song.

  • i love it :) he is the best

    

  • I LOVE IT <3

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  • i believe in him i never gave up who can stop us .....nobody!!

  • LOVE THIS :D...~,XxX,~

  • omg i hope u r way better i looked up wat u had and i was shocked i was speachless imin glad u got better i love ur songs ur such a good vocalist like no lie...glad ur better :)

  • Good Workk :D

    I Likee Thiss Babee <33'

    Broookeee, (:

  • man i luv Hp

    DUDE UR DA BEST

    luv dis songggggggg 

  • yo hp where do you live i think you and my bro could be a team he is a fan he should you to me just hit me up 956-904-9462

  • @ HpLyricsTV bro I love the myspave girls one it's funny Brown Pride!! and btw how old are you?

  • Wow you are super good at raping I love all the music you make dude if you were famous I would be the frist one to see you in a concernt :) Keep your head up high and you will become something BIG

  • HP LYRIKZ IS BACK NIGGAAAAAAAAS!!

    good shyt maines...

  • Love this Track

    What did you use for the instrumental if you dnt mind me askin .. ?

  • i love you music your one the best!!! cant wait to see you when your bigger then these other ppl that call them selfs rappers...!! <3333333

  • dang u came back stornger then u ever did before.. keep following ur heart to make great music . ur voice is so storng in this new song.. an i love it. keep it up okey dont give up 

  • yuh snapped on thix NEW SONG..yuh did a goewd job dawqq..!!!

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  • hes on the road to fame like my bro

  • you uploaded a new song : D i love all your songs man

    i can relate to some of them they're meaningful they

    touch my heart and they're bad asz songs : )

  • ur awesome omg i love ur voice : )

  • i love this song its wiked good work keep lisenin to it nt gettin bored :D

  • my names in here lmao n im srry that must suck im glad ur doin better kinda reminds me of my ex self for he has a sleeping disorder so he has to take pills to sleep im glad hes not that bad tho

  • Lovee Ihtt(:

  • yah a im single ladys add me onmyspace rbz_999@yahoo.com i make songs like him lol wanna here them kall me ask fo da numba..

  • yah a im single ladys add me onmyspace rbz_999@yahoo.com i make songs like him lol wanna here them kall me ask fo da numba

  • I love this song so much. <3 <3

  • nice song hp its awesome ^_^ *keep ur head up n dnt let no1 put u down dey hate bc dey noe u bettah than dem and bc u makin t up there and they aint lmao so keep i up ~much love~

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  • i love this.! 

  • how u make the beats?

  • whats the page for Slick Beatz?

  • @Dilpreet1633 go to soundclick and search em up there his very talented

  • Lmaoo Man so you were like eminem? lol Yea god healed you

  • Hey dude do you know a dude named kartik madaan?he says u gus are cousins?

  • Harpreet Its A Veryy Good Sonqq..Keep Your Head Up Nd Do Wut U Do Best..Music!

  • . <3

  • i realli love this song && the beat that goes with it your lyrics are realli deep && i can relate to em in many wayys. thanks for continuing to write lyris even tho you were jus getting over a medical problem. _Love2LoveHP.<3

  • this songs great <3 good job hp =D

  • i love this song;

    keep it up (:

  • cool song HP. Keep on doing it

  • Inshallah HP u will get even better

  • Like the new song man!! keep it up

  • great song ! good to know yur feelin better :)

  • Nice man ! Brown pride

  • damn hp...awesome...song!!!

  • hell naw man welcome back this is ur best track yet.

    im still waiting for the blue rose though

    once again u have inspired me to follow and continue all of my dreams

  • @HpLyrikzTV WOULD YOU BE DOWN FOR A COLLAB??

  • This is a really good song. I Believe you got a potential to be a great artist in the near future (not that you already aren't). Your hook-making has always been on point, the delivery shows heart and emotion behind the mic and your lyrics always got substance. Some things I would suggest you work on though is that your flow needs to switch up every now and then because it sounds repetitive after listening to a few songs and most importantly, at least in my opinion, is that I suggest you use

  • @DopeBoy878 a more complicated rhyme scheme. I'm sure you know what I mean, but in case you don't know just incorporate internal and multi-syllable rhymes (rhyme more than just the last 2 words in each bar). With that said I wish you luck in your dream of becoming a Hip-Hop Artist and welcome back to this culture after that marvelous recovery of yours.

    Christian Maciel

    (Chris of 9'4")

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  • OMGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FINALLYYY!!! YAY, bro this is amazing, thnx for coming back, and welcome back :)

  • Welcome back man great song. That's an amazing story i hope the improvement continues!

  • Nice!

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