you're doing great things with your music man, keep going.
only 2 pieces of advice: the most common word in this rap is 'me', its okay if its about you but don't make it so obvious. Using metaphor, simile, and other poetic devices will take you rapping to a whole new level
also, when you get the chance try to use some different chord progressions, so your songs don't sound like the usual four-chord songs everyone else are writing. be original, experiment with what you've got and you'll go far
The Next Big "Punjabi" rapper......I just love your creation.....i wud say make it lil more "globalized" by putting sum punjabi verses im em......and ur ratings will go sky rocketing.....plus u'll be noticed even more.....
Man ..... I just accidently came across this video, YOU GO HARD!! Well keep going, this is good, if theres any haters along the way tell them you taking over ;)
Oh my goodness! I really love your music! You're really talented and through all that you've been through your still up and going with the people around you. You're also a really cute guy with amazing lyrics(: keep it up!
Oh my goodness! I really love your music! You're really talented and through all that you've been through your still up and going with the people around you. You're also a really cute guy with amazing lyrics(: keep it up!
i really love this and all ur songs ..there all really good and jus cant stop listening to them .... keep up the great job and never no one bring you down ... :) much ..love and respect to you HpLyrikz <3 :)
You have talent. ur my favorite rapper man..... thimk about a career doing this if u want help ask me about it.... I can help u and i no people who will beg to record u man. Think about and post on my youtube.
ur awsome... no ur amazing up there wit the best!!!! i love how ur music is so great i dont understaind how ur music istent on the radio... but till then youtube is addicting because your music is the drug. (: love you!!!!
omg i hope u r way better i looked up wat u had and i was shocked i was speachless imin glad u got better i love ur songs ur such a good vocalist like no lie...glad ur better :)
Wow you are super good at raping I love all the music you make dude if you were famous I would be the frist one to see you in a concernt :) Keep your head up high and you will become something BIG
dang u came back stornger then u ever did before.. keep following ur heart to make great music . ur voice is so storng in this new song.. an i love it. keep it up okey dont give up
dang u came back stornger then u ever did before.. keep following ur heart to make great music . ur voice is so storng in this new song.. an i love it. keep it up okey dont give up
my names in here lmao n im srry that must suck im glad ur doin better kinda reminds me of my ex self for he has a sleeping disorder so he has to take pills to sleep im glad hes not that bad tho
nice song hp its awesome ^_^ *keep ur head up n dnt let no1 put u down dey hate bc dey noe u bettah than dem and bc u makin t up there and they aint lmao so keep i up ~much love~
i realli love this song && the beat that goes with it your lyrics are realli deep && i can relate to em in many wayys. thanks for continuing to write lyris even tho you were jus getting over a medical problem. _Love2LoveHP.<3
This is a really good song. I Believe you got a potential to be a great artist in the near future (not that you already aren't). Your hook-making has always been on point, the delivery shows heart and emotion behind the mic and your lyrics always got substance. Some things I would suggest you work on though is that your flow needs to switch up every now and then because it sounds repetitive after listening to a few songs and most importantly, at least in my opinion, is that I suggest you use
@DopeBoy878 a more complicated rhyme scheme. I'm sure you know what I mean, but in case you don't know just incorporate internal and multi-syllable rhymes (rhyme more than just the last 2 words in each bar). With that said I wish you luck in your dream of becoming a Hip-Hop Artist and welcome back to this culture after that marvelous recovery of yours.
this is beyond amazing.im so in love with your voice <3
kittykat04100 2 weeks ago
danm this joint is a infinity out of a 10
jbrezzydaman 2 weeks ago
you're doing great things with your music man, keep going.
only 2 pieces of advice: the most common word in this rap is 'me', its okay if its about you but don't make it so obvious. Using metaphor, simile, and other poetic devices will take you rapping to a whole new level
also, when you get the chance try to use some different chord progressions, so your songs don't sound like the usual four-chord songs everyone else are writing. be original, experiment with what you've got and you'll go far
DreamOn4Evar 4 weeks ago
your the best i swear I LOVE ALL THE SONGS !! FUCK ALL THE RAPPERZ UR THE BEST!!!!
Bella20283 1 month ago
still supporting you :D
suhkmeup 1 month ago
thats amanzing!
camkpma 1 month ago
You Need To Make More Music All Of Them Are 2-3 Years Old. I Love You And Your Music(:
Ezmeralda8342524 2 months ago
The Next Big "Punjabi" rapper......I just love your creation.....i wud say make it lil more "globalized" by putting sum punjabi verses im em......and ur ratings will go sky rocketing.....plus u'll be noticed even more.....
enigma143007 2 months ago
Cool
geyser14 3 months ago
HP Lyrikz Is Going To Be Next BEST Singer/Rapper .
AngelKhalifaLeon 3 months ago
Your so inspirational.. i luv all ur songs<3:)
chivas45able 4 months ago
rhyming words..... nice
sarahxsungx129 5 months ago
your beast .... M. ayala
sarahxsungx129 5 months ago
Eminem was my favoeite rapper until i heard about u
Chopaholic123 6 months ago 2
Ur better than eminem
Chopaholic123 6 months ago
ewwwwwwwwwww!
TheDigitalThought 6 months ago
6 people dont know what good rapping is.....
ParkourConnor14 7 months ago 10
What's the instrumental?
homeworksucksass 8 months ago
This song made me have more faith in myself and helped me alot you wouldnt even believe how much..
Check My Music Out Plz! & Thanks.
MsGhettoDreams 8 months ago
my fave ! <3
xxalex2cool4uxx 8 months ago
Man ..... I just accidently came across this video, YOU GO HARD!! Well keep going, this is good, if theres any haters along the way tell them you taking over ;)
anestheticthievery 9 months ago
damm....luv it
TheBabyGirl442 9 months ago
You rapped this?!
kansasfananna 9 months ago
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Oh my goodness! I really love your music! You're really talented and through all that you've been through your still up and going with the people around you. You're also a really cute guy with amazing lyrics(: keep it up!
AreKidsKool 9 months ago
Oh my goodness! I really love your music! You're really talented and through all that you've been through your still up and going with the people around you. You're also a really cute guy with amazing lyrics(: keep it up!
PunjabiKuri818 9 months ago
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Fuck ,This Song Really Makes Me Feel Better .!
AreKidsKool 11 months ago
This a deep song, I like the thought pattern
Fariouz 11 months ago
Do anybody Got the Piano Cord TO This Or Video??!
Undefeted54 11 months ago
Fuck ,This Song Really Makes Me Feel Better .!
bebeygirls 11 months ago
ur really talented im glad ur better now i am seriously addicted to ur music itz my inspiration to keep on going lotz of love and respect
babygurl1073able 1 year ago
i really love this and all ur songs ..there all really good and jus cant stop listening to them .... keep up the great job and never no one bring you down ... :) much ..love and respect to you HpLyrikz <3 :)
nene4022010 1 year ago
Cann i Pleaseee! Havee the Pianoo Chordds!?!?
Or Make A videoo Of Itt Pleasee Itss Soo Niceee!
angelmarie54 1 year ago
You have talent. ur my favorite rapper man..... thimk about a career doing this if u want help ask me about it.... I can help u and i no people who will beg to record u man. Think about and post on my youtube.
Manyx619 1 year ago
whats the instrumental
benkuszffc 1 year ago
ur awsome... no ur amazing up there wit the best!!!! i love how ur music is so great i dont understaind how ur music istent on the radio... but till then youtube is addicting because your music is the drug. (: love you!!!!
unicorncrew20 1 year ago
yo homes,keep it up,this shit right herre has a meaning,dope,keep it up
VMGmusic5 1 year ago
I love your songs. I love how reall u are. You've been threw alot and it inspires me alot! I hope you reach all of your goals!♥
mariaverysweet 1 year ago
- This sonq hella mad meh thinkk about my life &' how itreated my parents | wel ilove yuhhr sonqs♥ they speakk thee real life
TheMystery4eva 1 year ago
I felt this shyt rite here-
Pagen101 1 year ago
i really hope that you make it far in life with ur rapping...ur lyrikz go hard! i luv ur songs...<3 *Asii'Ma* aka *HannaH*MaRie*
NativePride907 1 year ago
omg i cant stop listening to this Song its just AWESOME!!!! :D <3
xxHeartBosnia321 1 year ago
I believe!!!(: This The Song!
angelmarie54 1 year ago
Have u already thought of makin an album ? Dat ll be sum awsum shyt?
TheNikes831 1 year ago
Dayum this song is the second best song ever the best one is ties of a friendship.!
TheNikes831 1 year ago
Ey hp? Were did u get the beat for "nobody else"?
TheNikes831 1 year ago
Best song you have ever writing and done. Mad fucking propsss!!!
I feel this song more then any song.
bengalz859 1 year ago
i love it :) he is the best
supercool805 1 year ago
I LOVE IT <3
Elka1609 1 year ago
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AreKidsKool 1 year ago
i believe in him i never gave up who can stop us .....nobody!!
AreKidsKool 1 year ago
LOVE THIS :D...~,XxX,~
KhaistaDiamond 1 year ago
omg i hope u r way better i looked up wat u had and i was shocked i was speachless imin glad u got better i love ur songs ur such a good vocalist like no lie...glad ur better :)
1lizzyliz 1 year ago
Good Workk :D
I Likee Thiss Babee <33'
Broookeee, (:
BrookeValddezz4215 1 year ago
man i luv Hp
DUDE UR DA BEST
luv dis songggggggg
ahiskalover555 1 year ago
yo hp where do you live i think you and my bro could be a team he is a fan he should you to me just hit me up 956-904-9462
TheJoseph12ification 1 year ago
@ HpLyricsTV bro I love the myspave girls one it's funny Brown Pride!! and btw how old are you?
Doey73Harman0200 1 year ago
Wow you are super good at raping I love all the music you make dude if you were famous I would be the frist one to see you in a concernt :) Keep your head up high and you will become something BIG
Shayla270 1 year ago
HP LYRIKZ IS BACK NIGGAAAAAAAAS!!
good shyt maines...
MrNepzkid 1 year ago
Love this Track
What did you use for the instrumental if you dnt mind me askin .. ?
McZeeBaby 1 year ago
i love you music your one the best!!! cant wait to see you when your bigger then these other ppl that call them selfs rappers...!! <3333333
unicorncrew20 1 year ago
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dang u came back stornger then u ever did before.. keep following ur heart to make great music . ur voice is so storng in this new song.. an i love it. keep it up okey dont give up
Bosnianbabygirl1 1 year ago
dang u came back stornger then u ever did before.. keep following ur heart to make great music . ur voice is so storng in this new song.. an i love it. keep it up okey dont give up
Bosnianbabygirl1 1 year ago
yuh snapped on thix NEW SONG..yuh did a goewd job dawqq..!!!
adr902 1 year ago
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yuh snapeed on thix NEW SONG...yuh did a goewd job dawqq..!
adr902 1 year ago
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adr902 1 year ago
hes on the road to fame like my bro
TheJoseph12ification 1 year ago
you uploaded a new song : D i love all your songs man
i can relate to some of them they're meaningful they
touch my heart and they're bad asz songs : )
callmelovex 1 year ago
ur awesome omg i love ur voice : )
94Tazzy 1 year ago
i love this song its wiked good work keep lisenin to it nt gettin bored :D
angelkhan1988 1 year ago
my names in here lmao n im srry that must suck im glad ur doin better kinda reminds me of my ex self for he has a sleeping disorder so he has to take pills to sleep im glad hes not that bad tho
destiny829 1 year ago
Lovee Ihtt(:
dance4fun128 1 year ago
yah a im single ladys add me onmyspace rbz_999@yahoo.com i make songs like him lol wanna here them kall me ask fo da numba..
4lilshady8 1 year ago
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yah a im single ladys add me onmyspace rbz_999@yahoo.com i make songs like him lol wanna here them kall me ask fo da numba....
4lilshady8 1 year ago
yah a im single ladys add me onmyspace rbz_999@yahoo.com i make songs like him lol wanna here them kall me ask fo da numba
4lilshady8 1 year ago
I love this song so much. <3 <3
MahiraBaybee 1 year ago
nice song hp its awesome ^_^ *keep ur head up n dnt let no1 put u down dey hate bc dey noe u bettah than dem and bc u makin t up there and they aint lmao so keep i up ~much love~
princessrebelde4ever 1 year ago
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princessrebelde4ever 1 year ago
i love this.!
babynanas1 1 year ago 23
how u make the beats?
4lilshady8 1 year ago
whats the page for Slick Beatz?
Dilpreet1633 1 year ago
@Dilpreet1633 go to soundclick and search em up there his very talented
GiftedLyrikz 1 year ago
Lmaoo Man so you were like eminem? lol Yea god healed you
IRapForFun 1 year ago
Hey dude do you know a dude named kartik madaan?he says u gus are cousins?
wazzupz123 1 year ago
Harpreet Its A Veryy Good Sonqq..Keep Your Head Up Nd Do Wut U Do Best..Music!
SURGURL 1 year ago
. <3
ENA2SMUV 1 year ago
i realli love this song && the beat that goes with it your lyrics are realli deep && i can relate to em in many wayys. thanks for continuing to write lyris even tho you were jus getting over a medical problem. _Love2LoveHP.<3
TasiaLov3 1 year ago 23
this songs great <3 good job hp =D
iitszx0sanah 1 year ago
i love this song;
keep it up (:
andreatayy 1 year ago
cool song HP. Keep on doing it
mcnattisit2009 1 year ago
Inshallah HP u will get even better
coolercoolercoooler2 1 year ago
Like the new song man!! keep it up
BMWOfficial 1 year ago
great song ! good to know yur feelin better :)
collaboration14 1 year ago
Nice man ! Brown pride
Doey73Harman0200 1 year ago
damn hp...awesome...song!!!
TheGaNgsTaLUV09 1 year ago
hell naw man welcome back this is ur best track yet.
im still waiting for the blue rose though
once again u have inspired me to follow and continue all of my dreams
xOfficialYoungStar 1 year ago
@HpLyrikzTV WOULD YOU BE DOWN FOR A COLLAB??
OfficialDrastic 1 year ago
This is a really good song. I Believe you got a potential to be a great artist in the near future (not that you already aren't). Your hook-making has always been on point, the delivery shows heart and emotion behind the mic and your lyrics always got substance. Some things I would suggest you work on though is that your flow needs to switch up every now and then because it sounds repetitive after listening to a few songs and most importantly, at least in my opinion, is that I suggest you use
DopeBoy878 1 year ago
@DopeBoy878 a more complicated rhyme scheme. I'm sure you know what I mean, but in case you don't know just incorporate internal and multi-syllable rhymes (rhyme more than just the last 2 words in each bar). With that said I wish you luck in your dream of becoming a Hip-Hop Artist and welcome back to this culture after that marvelous recovery of yours.
Christian Maciel
(Chris of 9'4")
DopeBoy878 1 year ago
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DopeBoy878 1 year ago
OMGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! FINALLYYY!!! YAY, bro this is amazing, thnx for coming back, and welcome back :)
gill4liife 1 year ago
Welcome back man great song. That's an amazing story i hope the improvement continues!
LMAOxPeter 1 year ago
Nice!
LILSLUGGZ831 1 year ago