Mass Effect Movie: Shepard Origin Part 8 (fan made)

[AssassinsReign]

Wrex is Vegeta??? XD

[larsmuller97]

I two think tommy has to die and i would like Garry like fataly injured after ha saves shepard and her squad ! You know like he redemed himself :) I would cry to that XD good job and keep them comning

[slowryd3r]

I'm thinking that Abby dies. If Shepard got wounded trying to get to Abby after she got shoot. it would then double the emotions. You then see Kaiden, Tommy and Garry screaming and killing slavers in a blurry picture as if seen through Shepards eyes while she is fainting. The next scene could feature Shepard in a hospital bed and Garry is saying he has been chosen to tell Joker that Abby is dead, Shepard says she should go, but Garry then says she needs can't leave the hospital and leaves.

[slowryd3r]

@slowryd3r I know it's a cliché, but it gets to me in every movie it have happened before. Love the story! It's good that you have introduced many characters from the game in this part so you dont meet all the characters at the same time later.

[zenlord22]

i would say tommoy dies trying to save his girlfriend

[simongenius1]

@zenlord22 My friend, who did the voiceover for Wrex, is saying that too. He says Tommy dying would be more powerful. I'm thinking of doing something different though. I think mine is more powerful. Let me know which version you think is more powerful in Part 10.

[zenlord22]

@simongenius1 wait what about part 9?

[simongenius1]

@zenlord22 The Blitz part of Skyllian Blitz happens. A lot is going on. Just setting things into place. Death happens in part 10.

[zenlord22]

@simongenius1 well you sort of spoiled the end

[simongenius1]

@zenlord22 Yea someone has to die. Even with that spoiled, I don't think audience can guess who at the end of part 9. Plus, more than 1 can die.

[halfhalo33]

@simongenius1 i think tommy's girlfriend should die

[SumJ23]

Trent and Tommy.it gives the opportunity for shep to take command and it also makes tommy's gf a potential ally who works outside shep squad along with garry and abby.

OR

tommy and his girlfriend die together, however trent almost gets abby and garry killed due to some tactical problems and are saved by shep who managed to do a last resort plan and this makes her out stand and surpass trent, this makes trent acknowledge shepherd and be nicer to her, however, having a touch of jealousy.

[hinbow]

Trent dying would open up leadership for Shepard.

abbey dying would be pretty impacting considering she's Shepard best friend and Jokers gf.

Tommy dying would be only impacting for Shepard.

Garry would be slightly impacting because he is everyone's friend.

Tommy's girlfriend would open up a relationship between Tommy and Shepard.

[simongenius1]

@hinbow I've gone for the one you won't expect... hoping it will pay off. I think it will. I got a bit emotional when I was writing it.

[QuickSilverD]

Trent death would be most dramatic, sets the stage for Shepard to become the leader, also this works best if you make Trent less of an asshole

[Hbakid]

You should probably put this into a text document so you can easily remember it

[simongenius1]

@Hbakid remember what?

[Hbakid]

@simongenius1 all the movie ideas plot point ect..

[simongenius1]

@Hbakid oh. of course. When I narrate, i'm just reading what I wrote down. Thanks for following my story.