hmmmnn. Tryin to hard. The guys pacing is off, and the girl is not "take charge" enough with her coy answers.
Alabama's character is more complex than you allow, girl actress. Dude actor: your not being an excited guy; remember, you know your going to get laid, and want to make it better.
Pretty good. I know nothing about directing but in scenes like this, I kinda like it more if they do a 2-shot. The cuts every 2 seconds get a little distracting.
fail ! and the guy is a douche
VikingThor1 1 year ago
baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah, this sucks. like i know you probably put a lot of effort into this but c'mon this fucking sucks
umarqwerty 2 years ago
sucks.
deatune 3 years ago
...it's more tasty than having dinner where a waitress doesn't wear a dress like they used to!
phambo101 3 years ago
So, when are you two going to get to the phonebooth sex scene?
phambo101 3 years ago
hmmmnn. Tryin to hard. The guys pacing is off, and the girl is not "take charge" enough with her coy answers.
Alabama's character is more complex than you allow, girl actress. Dude actor: your not being an excited guy; remember, you know your going to get laid, and want to make it better.
Brosephj 3 years ago
@Brosephj No, he doesn't find out she's a call girl until afterward, at his apartment. In this scene he still thinks he's working it...
GingerAleRain 9 months ago
Pretty good. I know nothing about directing but in scenes like this, I kinda like it more if they do a 2-shot. The cuts every 2 seconds get a little distracting.
TomFromJersey 4 years ago