You've shown us that you're a good animator, now show us you're a good storyteller. Sorry if this comes across as harsh, but I didn't understand a lot of what I was seeing. What was a tropical bird doing in the Nordic mts.? Why was his lost love there? How did she die? The good animation is only a tool. You need to exploit what you can DO with it.
A really great piece. Well done. I wish that mainstream animation was more like this. I think it is pathetic that animation is mainly used in Hollywood as a kid's tool, when there are pieces like this. Anyway, keep it up and please can we see more!
Outstanding. Great sound. Good action. The most talent I've seen in animation. Too bad the story doesn't do all your other talents justice. But, I'm just a critic.
OMG he killed himself!?!
AndreaDaFirst 1 year ago
You've shown us that you're a good animator, now show us you're a good storyteller. Sorry if this comes across as harsh, but I didn't understand a lot of what I was seeing. What was a tropical bird doing in the Nordic mts.? Why was his lost love there? How did she die? The good animation is only a tool. You need to exploit what you can DO with it.
Bobzeaux 5 years ago
A really great piece. Well done. I wish that mainstream animation was more like this. I think it is pathetic that animation is mainly used in Hollywood as a kid's tool, when there are pieces like this. Anyway, keep it up and please can we see more!
movieboy3000 5 years ago
Just wanted to say thanks to everyone for taking time to watch this little piece. Its great to hear your feedback!!
hansbrekke 5 years ago
very haunting. and impressive animation. i'd love to know what motivated you to see this concept to completion. sad birds... it's thought provoking.
MistaColins 5 years ago
Outstanding. Great sound. Good action. The most talent I've seen in animation. Too bad the story doesn't do all your other talents justice. But, I'm just a critic.
ntrimm 5 years ago
Hilarious!
terrancetate 5 years ago
you have real skill. i expect you to bring back drawn animation! seriously!
isitpat 5 years ago
Saddest thing EVER! Well-drawn, I hope you'll make a happier one next time, because this one made me cry.
TheScrappyCat 5 years ago
Again, thanks again everyone for watching. I appreciate your comments!!
hansbrekke 5 years ago
No, Don't kill youself!!! So sad...
TheTasper 5 years ago
wow that was sad
Brandon10792 5 years ago
This made me cry ;o-o;
TokugawaShogunate 5 years ago
that is so sad. poor bird.
leathstitch 5 years ago
thanks for watching!
hansbrekke 5 years ago