The ending was a bit rushed, not to mention a huge cliff hanger, but I thought this was an excellent first VN. The pacing was pretty good, and I was actually invested in the story by the middle to end of it (that's a huge compliment from me)
Its rough, but its obvious you have talent. Keep up the good work, please expand upon the story :D
I at least want to support ya as a statement to other people considering making VN's on Indie Games. I haven't gotten far in it, but it seems promising :D
@sapnyosentry Trying to post a link to another video of a visual novel engine I have but it doesn't seem to want to let me...I wasn't as happy as I could have been with this game I was so tired at the time and there's a lot of restrictions on XBL. I decided to have another try - it won't be on xbox it will be on IPad and the engine is a lot better. It's also going to have a battle system and branches to break up the gameplay a bit. It's hard to get the art and people to help ect is tough
Thanks a lot for the comments guys. Unfortunately the sequel is a while away still as we are taking our time on it but it should be a huge improvement on the first one :)
The ending was a bit rushed, not to mention a huge cliff hanger, but I thought this was an excellent first VN. The pacing was pretty good, and I was actually invested in the story by the middle to end of it (that's a huge compliment from me)
Its rough, but its obvious you have talent. Keep up the good work, please expand upon the story :D
sapnyosentry 8 months ago
How long is this VN? I'm planning on picking up a point card later tonight.
sapnyosentry 9 months ago
@sapnyosentry You can probably finish it in about 2 hours buddy it's not very long I'm afraid.
05josephsmi 8 months ago
@05josephsmi
ah well, i already bought it ;)
I at least want to support ya as a statement to other people considering making VN's on Indie Games. I haven't gotten far in it, but it seems promising :D
sapnyosentry 8 months ago
@sapnyosentry Trying to post a link to another video of a visual novel engine I have but it doesn't seem to want to let me...I wasn't as happy as I could have been with this game I was so tired at the time and there's a lot of restrictions on XBL. I decided to have another try - it won't be on xbox it will be on IPad and the engine is a lot better. It's also going to have a battle system and branches to break up the gameplay a bit. It's hard to get the art and people to help ect is tough
05josephsmi 8 months ago
Thanks a lot for the comments guys. Unfortunately the sequel is a while away still as we are taking our time on it but it should be a huge improvement on the first one :)
05josephsmi 1 year ago
this was a bloody good virtual noval i hope a sequal is on the way
MOHSIN2 1 year ago 2
@MOHSIN2 definately and the soundtrack was epic
ShadowHeligo 1 year ago