i wrote a poem also here it goes ..i asked u if i was pretty u said yes i asked u if u loved me u said yes.i asked u if u wanted to b with me for ever..u said no. i asked u if i left would u cry u said no i started to walk away but u grabbed my hand and said stay.we sat there for hours u telling me how everythings gunna b okay.u told me to eat.minutes after i came back and saw the knife and realized wat u had done i grabbed the knife and started to cry..so i started to cut but nothing happened
you poem is good but there is this guy that has a good imagination for poetry...(Color My Life With The Chaos Of LOVE.) go to this site...earthlymartian.blogspot.com
I wrote this poem for my late girlfriend. She fell off a cliff and died on impact. Here's my poem, don't judge me. I loved you so much I loved your soft touch You fucking bitch I loved your soft skin I loved the way you'd sin You fucking bitch I loved your skank smell Loved you straight to hell You fucking bitch I still love you of course I'd even love your corpse If I knew where it was But your mom won't tell me You fucking bitch
your poems are better than mine :( mine are short see hears one i did cause evry 1 sed i was stupid. and yes i know spelled a couple thins wrong just get over it
why would you put that slut who thinks she can sing(please do stop the muic in her case)in the back ground you should have put a song by a emo band in there and i dont mean tree days grace becaus there not emo and neather are MCR.
i wrote a poem also here it goes ..i asked u if i was pretty u said yes i asked u if u loved me u said yes.i asked u if u wanted to b with me for ever..u said no. i asked u if i left would u cry u said no i started to walk away but u grabbed my hand and said stay.we sat there for hours u telling me how everythings gunna b okay.u told me to eat.minutes after i came back and saw the knife and realized wat u had done i grabbed the knife and started to cry..so i started to cut but nothing happened
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you poem is good but there is this guy that has a good imagination for poetry...(Color My Life With The Chaos Of LOVE.) go to this site...earthlymartian.blogspot.com
Jamesbolado2 10 months ago
this is awesome
TheWickedclown101 1 year ago
can my band plzzzz use this for a song :(
keiferlogan 2 years ago
mbm13213 2 years ago
emo play maple story????
AzinCamboDude 2 years ago
i dont play anymore. n im not emo :P everybody has their ups and downs
MiniCookiez 2 years ago
this is really awome
randomMaster101 2 years ago
your poems are better than mine :( mine are short see hears one i did cause evry 1 sed i was stupid. and yes i know spelled a couple thins wrong just get over it
i cant think today.
am i dumb?
am i stupid?
i am drounding in my thots.
gasping for air.
looking for the answer.
knowing it cant be found.
skiillss 2 years ago
wow that awesome! Come check out my channel! I'll have more poetry videos up soon so check out the ones I have! Don't forget to subscribe!
bam55599 2 years ago
1 c0ver y0ur m0uth with y0ur hand
2 make a wish int0 it
3 cl0se y0ur hand {make it int0 a fist}
4 h0ld y0ur fist t0 y0ur heart f0r 5 sec.
5 send dis t0 3 m0re vide0s
6 t0m0rr0w will be y0ur best day ever
emoXlove100 2 years ago
:) i Likes It.
I Might make someee, from the poems on my channel.
XbloodPainX 2 years ago
nice :]
XmelaXleny 2 years ago
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turbidmist 2 years ago
heres a emo poem i got from my friend i forgot the rest lol
my life is boring and lonley
i hate myself and baloni.
thats all i kno rofl
soccerulez9 2 years ago
i liked it
complicated040 2 years ago
I love it
maakaa1391 3 years ago
that was awesome your really good you should write mor
xxmyxxmiragexx 3 years ago
great poems but quiddich master has a point the song could b sumthing more appropriat
badtimesallthetime 3 years ago
n.n yesh yesh i do:D
QuidditchMaster86 3 years ago 2
yayy :D
MiniCookiez 3 years ago
terrible song im sorry maybe something alitte more depressing?
QuidditchMaster86 3 years ago
other than the song you like the poem right ? D:
MiniCookiez 3 years ago
why would you put that slut who thinks she can sing(please do stop the muic in her case)in the back ground you should have put a song by a emo band in there and i dont mean tree days grace becaus there not emo and neather are MCR.
undeadassaaain45 3 years ago
idk i was rushing through it. and was bored. oh wells. the pictures are for the emotions not for basically and litterally emos.
MiniCookiez 3 years ago
bad song 4 an emo poem i'm emo and a suggest next time you make an awesome poem like this put a song like never to late, by three days grace ok
InuyashaGirl67 3 years ago
ROFLS! yeah i know! i was running outta songs
MiniCookiez 3 years ago
emos.........
xsM1L3yxD 3 years ago
i luv its. <3333
CookieMonsterx33 4 years ago
i luv its. <3333
CookieMonsterx33 4 years ago
ohemgee, i love the poem muimui<3
- sien
C0Ookiesx33 4 years ago