ok... first of all... ABOUT FRICKIN TIME... I've been waiting for you to do a short film and put a story with your fights. So you are already off to a good start. Your falls look good. Some of the shots don't compliment the choreography and some of the moves aren't visable cuzz of the camera placement. Still some bits of shots and choreography look interesting so I'm looking forward to seeing this. But you should start investing in a new editing software soon.
the edit is good, fighting could be better, but everything happens in time... good job....
bringdastorm 10 months ago
@bringdastorm Thanks. There will be sequal to this film coming out in 2 months, it's alot better then this one.
Fearlessmaster12 10 months ago
Awsome it looks so real.
cant wait!!
s7lipk7not7 2 years ago
@s7lipk7not7 the film is already uploaded its on my profile if you want to see it
Fearlessmaster12 2 years ago
wooth keep up tthe good work guys ; )
MGcompanie 2 years ago
Ah, the beginning of a film making career. It's a beautiful thing. Keep it up Charlie!
Oddikak 3 years ago 4
Very good... Can't Wait to see it.
ghostface1999 3 years ago
very nice I cant wait
coopprouductions 3 years ago
nice title of the film man and great skills
SAISENSEI88 3 years ago
goodwork guys!
choileefut 3 years ago
spelling mistake though..."friendship"
pascalaka 3 years ago
lol yea i saw that my mistake lol
Fearlessmaster12 3 years ago
ok... first of all... ABOUT FRICKIN TIME... I've been waiting for you to do a short film and put a story with your fights. So you are already off to a good start. Your falls look good. Some of the shots don't compliment the choreography and some of the moves aren't visable cuzz of the camera placement. Still some bits of shots and choreography look interesting so I'm looking forward to seeing this. But you should start investing in a new editing software soon.
dardrex777 3 years ago
lol i might get vegas software for christmas so i'm working on that and thanks for commenting darren
Fearlessmaster12 3 years ago
btw... that shot at :25 BADASS
Your fall at :30 and :32 kick ass
As well as that double kip up shot.
You already have some good stuff in there.
dardrex777 3 years ago
lol thanks darren
Fearlessmaster12 3 years ago
cool falls
GwailoDragon 3 years ago