Nice work. The kind of 'original' the studio's don't know they're looking for. Maybe a minute shorter and for my dollar more cryptic; less traditional cutting, more sound effects and music (or find some talent to score it). If you're gonna do camp, do camp. Good for you. Keep writing and you will be the happpiest man ever!
tighten up some loose ends, loosen up on the realism and make it obvious your using ketchup on sumthin stupid liek that... shut the mail man up a bit... add a bit more humor.. i would definitely make this a daily show to watch on my list. but not my vid so who am i to say what you have to do?
I agree with some of the comments posted that you might want to tone the graphic nature of it a little bit. But the comedy in it was funny, my favorite part was when he slapped the mailman. The characters are likeable as well. I hope to see more of your videos in the future!
Excellent!! You are obviously a pro. There is just one thing i am concerned about, though you have certianly captured the viewers` attention, it is a little too explicit (just tone it down a little and then it will be perfect!). I wish you all the best, you definitely have potential tallent, keep at it!
OK, DUDE, First of all, i dont find it "that" ofenssive, now this is not the kind of program that can be on TV at 9:00! , maybe at 11:00...you know what i mean?....cool...keep up the good work...
Hey All! I'm not spaming or anything I just think this site is really cool! It's www.revver.com There you can put your videos on it and make money on them! I am not affiliated with the site but I think its awsome that you as the creator of the movie can make money off your creations! Go and put your videos up there and start earning some dough...(The site is still in beta mode but the money part is comming soon) Go check it out now!!!!
It was alright. Not really funny. The cinematography was pretty good, but questionable at times. Example: at the moment he farts and calls his wife's name, the camera jerks up to follow his head. Had the shot been properly framed that wouldn't be necessary.
You're so good to me, watchin out for my health, my good looks!
ParentalWarning 1 year ago
THAT SHIT IS CRAZY LOL WTF that was funny. Is it a full TV show or DVD?
TheColorist 3 years ago
WTF
utuberyan8 3 years ago
Wow, this was amazing.
TheCanNot 4 years ago
xDDDd no more i can say :]
baronzlo 4 years ago
wrinkle sausage!
eversoangus 4 years ago
Ive never seen a more motivational video anywhere.
ParentalWarning 4 years ago
sticky blood on a floor...
wife charactrer is the best.
Janeb34 5 years ago
Liked it alot, would defiently watch it regularly, loved that housewife Gertrude character the best :)
fusion2323 5 years ago
rofl
Jack923 5 years ago
Your American Emo Idol is WAITING...
http://youtube.com/watch?v=5-tufk7okbA
emosurfer 5 years ago
I love stupid humor. Great job I say!
karmapolice911 5 years ago
If you really want this show to get picked up, you need more wrinkle sausage references.
SupaDupaMestizo 5 years ago
Nice work. The kind of 'original' the studio's don't know they're looking for. Maybe a minute shorter and for my dollar more cryptic; less traditional cutting, more sound effects and music (or find some talent to score it). If you're gonna do camp, do camp. Good for you. Keep writing and you will be the happpiest man ever!
RESTOTLE 5 years ago
... suitable for late night television...
tighten up some loose ends, loosen up on the realism and make it obvious your using ketchup on sumthin stupid liek that... shut the mail man up a bit... add a bit more humor.. i would definitely make this a daily show to watch on my list. but not my vid so who am i to say what you have to do?
brilliant production though...
ieatflux1 5 years ago
It's professional looking and the shots are decent but the writing is lacking.
NateHorowitz 5 years ago
sucks - stupid script - characters not real, and not fun in a fantasy way either
fverona 5 years ago
This show is perfect, you must make more. The vulgarity must stay!
kungfo0 5 years ago
trying to promote a website. would appreciated if you post your video on qoolv.com
kiledo 5 years ago
I think Gertrude is the funniest person I've ever seen. Ever. Fantastic job!!
TehFloof 5 years ago
I agree with some of the comments posted that you might want to tone the graphic nature of it a little bit. But the comedy in it was funny, my favorite part was when he slapped the mailman. The characters are likeable as well. I hope to see more of your videos in the future!
asdfasdfasdfff 5 years ago
Funny in a really creepy way.
CyanideLacrosse 5 years ago
Production is real tight. Script is the weakest thing I have ever seen, worse than a poor SNL sketch. Sorry.
mickeygoofy 5 years ago
thats pretty cool man
phobophile6 5 years ago
MORE!!!
KShy 5 years ago
tight work..tight work..
alienbrayn 5 years ago
GRAET!!11
Luke1337 5 years ago
HAHAHAHA LOL!!!
johncena06 5 years ago
Excellent!! You are obviously a pro. There is just one thing i am concerned about, though you have certianly captured the viewers` attention, it is a little too explicit (just tone it down a little and then it will be perfect!). I wish you all the best, you definitely have potential tallent, keep at it!
maltezer 5 years ago
HAHAHAHA!! great stuff!!!
Kukuruzo 5 years ago
Good luck ace show!
SteveKubrick 5 years ago
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Bomb montage:
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ericucsd 5 years ago
stoopid
gneb 5 years ago
adult, comic humour.
tcarternyc 5 years ago
the best part was the bottle opener and trash can thing. that's awesome.
jawknee5 5 years ago
This is beautiful! I love this! I'm definitly adding this to my favorites!
FallenAngelAisu 5 years ago
Really cool, thanks!
davidaddison 5 years ago
I'm sorry dear but this is just not funny. If this is your best effort perhaps you should consider selling shoes at Nordstrom's.
njprncss4216 5 years ago
Well lst off The theme song rocked my soxs.
This has to be the funniest short movie 've ever seen. I hope you get the show. Good luck
BTW Gertie is creepy .
eggygurl 5 years ago
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jesseeast 5 years ago
cool - guardian angel, with only one arm *lol* - flaming hamer *morelol* - realy cool.
Donnervogel 5 years ago
not cracking out tear funni but is funny, SPLAT pervert...
chinaman215 5 years ago
the theme soong rix my doors off
darkpojo 5 years ago
OK, DUDE, First of all, i dont find it "that" ofenssive, now this is not the kind of program that can be on TV at 9:00! , maybe at 11:00...you know what i mean?....cool...keep up the good work...
Loved it man!
p0p5ux 5 years ago
this video made me laugh so hard i was cryin!!! fuuuukin sweet!
stuntkirk 5 years ago
OMG that fuc*** ruled. You got to keep them comming
mountindew 5 years ago
holy shit, this rocks.
aercires 5 years ago
Hey All! I'm not spaming or anything I just think this site is really cool! It's www.revver.com There you can put your videos on it and make money on them! I am not affiliated with the site but I think its awsome that you as the creator of the movie can make money off your creations! Go and put your videos up there and start earning some dough...(The site is still in beta mode but the money part is comming soon) Go check it out now!!!!
MattPyrch 5 years ago
yo shut the fuck up you faggot, u spammed to like all the top rated videos.
Ericthebest 5 years ago
oh my god
taht was hilarious hahahaha.
you HAVE to make more
i love it.
mrjonesluckiest 5 years ago
what the hell was that??
Delaypat 5 years ago
GREAT!!!! That was one of the funniest videos ever.
cirthungl 5 years ago
thats is freakin amazing!!!!! u've got upload more!!!!!
Grimgravy91 5 years ago
thats is freakin amazing!!!!!!! I u've got to upload some more of those!
Grimgravy91 5 years ago
AWSOMENESS!!!!
BuffandStuff 5 years ago
yo.. thats a gangter movie man... fucking aeswome..
alienbrayn 5 years ago
this is hilarity and gory blood-larity
darkpojo 5 years ago
ROFL, that is FUCKING INCREDIBLE.
guerriktrakkt1 5 years ago
I'm hooked. Please make more.
hatebush123 5 years ago
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barfylarfy13 5 years ago
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watch me attack my girlfriend.
barfylarfy13 5 years ago
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watch me attack my girlfriend.
barfylarfy13 5 years ago
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watch me attack my girlfriend.
barfylarfy13 5 years ago
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watch me attack my girlfriend.
barfylarfy13 5 years ago
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jm8tATTSACw
watch me attack my girlfriend.
barfylarfy13 5 years ago
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jm8tATTSACw
watch me attack my girlfriend.
barfylarfy13 5 years ago
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jm8tATTSACw
watch me attack my girlfriend.
barfylarfy13 5 years ago
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jm8tATTSACw
watch me attack my girlfriend.
barfylarfy13 5 years ago
watch this very sexy emo guy http://www.youtube.com/watch?v =xW2q3knXyv0
mustangv8506 5 years ago
REMEMBER ALL!!
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sploshy 5 years ago
heh a little odd
williamhemsworth 5 years ago
awesome
spanx79 5 years ago
Very cool indeed. Nice work.
Moonracer 5 years ago
that is the best movie in television ever!!great!!
kalapate 5 years ago
I liked it.
Darklorden 5 years ago
Nice... good job. The girl is the best part. She's very animated. Plus the ending was pretty funny.
BrattyCeline 5 years ago
Cheesy.
xamox 5 years ago
Very well done ! Reminds me of some folks I know lol
Best of Luck with it ;}
dasdave 5 years ago
awesome
gwok 5 years ago
I like the characters and the kitchyness of the deco. Very John Waterish. Fun! Love the overacting!
pcmorice 5 years ago
prety cool ;well done!!
liuatsil 5 years ago
It was alright. Not really funny. The cinematography was pretty good, but questionable at times. Example: at the moment he farts and calls his wife's name, the camera jerks up to follow his head. Had the shot been properly framed that wouldn't be necessary.
humptiness 5 years ago
pls look this video lool! (-:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=NRe3Qij8HuI
thx
DasFlo 5 years ago
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x7hwB2m0aUs
DasFlo 5 years ago
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keevsbiz 5 years ago
dewayne is so cool, i love this movie!!!
zoozulo 5 years ago
i enjoyed it, job well done... best of luck getting it on the air.
unluck 5 years ago
my wife!
cheesedude9909 5 years ago
This shit is so goddam funny. I absolutely love it.
nicanais01 5 years ago
F*CK YEAH!!! BEER.
steejoan 5 years ago
Thor's hammer was funny.
mmockbettys 5 years ago
"Intuitive and new. Hot and steamingly sexy. Outrageously funny and seemingly hornyish." ~ L.A. Times
ParentalWarning 5 years ago
I love it. I must see the rest of them!
krishnell 5 years ago
its not what i expected at all, and it was actually funny. love the chick, skes like on some kinda medication.
krishnell 5 years ago
dewayne is ultimately the sweetest dude.
ParentalWarning 5 years ago
evan this is so funny and it's so your style. i love it.
mmomoh 5 years ago