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  • i wright poems also

  • really good poetry. i write poetry myself

  • Amazing poem! Absolutely wonderful!!

  • Wooooooooooow, this was really great! I think the music really added something else to it, as well! I'm a Muslim and i enjoyed it :)

  • The lord is separating the sheep from the Goats. All can sense it, those who believe and even those among us who don't and call it by another name.

  • Okay, so I may be an Atheist but... This poem.. Its sad, true, graphic... It means a lot. And I know there will probably someone trying to preach to me after I post this, don't bother, i won't listen.

  • Wow, this poem was amazing. It really opened my eyes, it told me to go and search for God, and not let God find me. Because it is our choice to find him or not. Thank you for uploading this, it might have saved my life.

  • I'm just not religous lol ignore my opinion here it is a very good poem @gothicaj

  • Wow, I liked it. Though it was scary, in such a way it's not. I've been pushed down to the lowest low for a while, on and off. I've been thinking of suicide, but everytime I'd think I'd do it, something deep within me keeps me away, and I am happy to have that part of me, or I'd be dead. That and the fact my friend made me promise not to. Actually, I think that part of me that scares me from suicide and pushes me away from it is God helping me... And god bless you... to...

  • WOW

  • This is rly good a little too preachy for me but still amazing

  • @gillianm9

    a little to preachy? What do you mean by that?

  • lol..well this was...different? tnx 4 wasting 10 min. of my life

  • @MistressesMiA

    Lol, it was your choice to watch it. :p

  • @GothicaJ umm, how graphic, visually? I dont want the crap scared out of me

  • This was actually life changing for me. it made me look at life in a completely new way. very very creepy, but, you did an amazing job on this video

  • It was a little scary, but God works in us all. Keep writing and praying to hear His voice

  • i can tell this is strait from the heart... and the lord. you have done a very good job. if more people would watch this it would save so many people and help soooo many kids. keep on writing.

  • I'm no longer a Christian but I love this. Good job!

  • Wow, this is really intense. I wonder what Gods trying to tell you, A warning perhaps?

  • was this an actual dream u had if it was than you have insane nightamares.

  • I don't like 6.00-7.00 but otherwise good job and @morbidromantic666 it has not produced any evils it's the ignorant people who abuse it that produce evils ;)

  • a horrible yet wonderful poem!

    Keep writing, it really touched me :D

  • that was very deep i believe jesus speaks to his people through there dreams and you are truely blessed and by the way your poem made me cry and the ending was just perfect very excellent job may god keep blessing you for truely you are a child of him.

  • im sorry if im asking something that you answerred already. great poem but im confused about the ending. you told the girl to adore someone, then changed your mind and told her to grab the light... what is the meaning behind that part?

  • this is a really powerful video and the sad thing is it is true everything is true it's sad the way we all have been living everything is about sex and drugs now i mean come on wat happened especially with school ur not allowed to say prayrers aloud and no more bible in school wat has happened to this world

  • this is great! god bless!

    P.S. What is the song At 1:39 ?????????

  • This....is so amazing... i think i have seen this about 3 or 34 times and i just cant get over how beautiful and amazing this is..... :) amazing... truly amazing God Bless

  • wow, this is so cool and awesome, so glad you put it on here!

  • ...Wow. im speechless. This is amazing. You did a very great job. Its just so amazing...i wanted to cry :") fantastic job!

  • Very good GothicaJ, it brought tears to my eyes...And though it is creepy, it isn't any worse than if the Lord allowed us to look into the supernatural and at all the demons around us, now that would be very scary...

  • Wow so this was a dream you had? I really liked watching this, I don't mind all the gory, creepy stuff lol. That poem was awesome!! =D

  • no, it wasn't a dream. but i've had equally creepy ones.

    this was something i believe the Lord gave to me. I didn't think these thoughts, he just poured the lyrics into my pen.

  • @GothicaJ That's so amazing you've been touched by the Lord to create such beautiful - yet sorrowful - poetry. Such beauty is captured in such sweet sorrow. Keep allowing Him into, not only your pen, but your life also! =D God bless.

  • thanks man! I really appreciate it :) You too!

  • @GothicaJ Great job, GOD be with you man, when the last trumpet sounds, you shall be saved. You have also got me thinking and i thank you. :D

  • @TheMaggot870621345 If you like poetry you will like this poem Search " IS the Cross Christian" It will blow your mind!!!!!!!!If you are Deep!!!  The presentation is wack but the content is potent.

  • Wow..wow. God is amazing.

  • Very creepy poem and pictures. It also makes you think about life in a new way. well it did for me.

  • @nascarwrecks If you like poetry you will like this poem Search " IS the Cross Christian" It will blow your mind!!!!!!!!If you are Deep!!!  The presentation is wack but the content is potent.

  • i loooooove this video because it shows what is going to happen in the future also most christian poems are about love and peace but this vid. tells us that theres a hole lot more than just that its an endless war of love and hate thats why i love this vid. because you have to be graphic to explain Gods love for us. you rock <(") penguin!!!!

  • that sun was creepy but great job!

  • So good words like "wonderful" and "amazing" almost seem like insults, but they have to be used because I lack any other words to describe this!

    Truly AMAZING!

    †††††††

  • I LOVE YOU JESS! that was great, you are so talented! <3

  • AMAZING! I love it!

  • God be with you and guide you in your life.

  • wow,

    this is amazing

    well done

  • Brilliant! God's blessed you with an amazing gift!

  • So sad but so happy at the same time! I write some poetry but I wish it was as good as this!!!!

  • Holy crap...AMAZING!!!!! The video was wonderfull!!!

  • Best Poem I've ever heard, read, and felt!!!

  • THAT WAS AMAZING. i LOVE it! Great job!

  • So beautiful. It brought a tear to my eyes..

  • Just a beautiful and gracious poem. I love watching this video and is very motivating for me when I lose faith in the lord.

  • Excellent 10*

  • appreciate it!! :)

  • That's great GothicaJ!!!!

  • thanks dude!! :)

  • watch my poem video, and the other english video have, comment and rate please! thankyou! :)

  • THAT WAS FANTASTIC. total epic. wicked hardcore. wow. very impressed. great job :)

  • dude thanks!! I love your comment, glad you liked it! :)

  • Remarkable video! Great job! Great message!

  • wow! this was incredible!

  • this was truly a story spoken from the breath of the lord. now i should go breath it unto others

  • that was great!!!

  • You did an amazing job!!! good job. God bless

  • the truth is graphic but it need to be told and you did an awesome job of telling it. thank you and God Bless

  • EPIC.

    That was emotionaly beautiful,nd very very hardcore.:]

    COOL!

  • lol, thanks for the mention of it being hardcore. That's pretty freaking awesome :P

  • I don't want to sound rude I feel it will but it's probably not.:

    Do you walk out to the girl that day or did you add it?

    It was a wonderful and powerful pome that should be shared with all thank you for posting this video and Thank you God for sharing it with Jessica.

    ~KappaK.

  • This is amazing!!

  • cool!!!

  • I found this on Gaia... never thought I would find something like this on there! :O

  • Wow... I just watch this video OVER AND OVER. It's great!

  • I love watching this video! :]

  • this is amazing.

    my youth group leader used this in one of our lessons.

    it was very touching. :)

  • Wow...totally love it...God Bless!

  • enjoyed this loves the detail and the way u put it together and stuff.

  • I am in simple awe of you ^^ truly a amazing poem

  • Thanks, but God is who you should be in awe of! He is the creator of everything, and through His words, I wrote this poem :) All credit, honor, and glory belong to Him!!

  • I love this. It's so intense and deep.

  • This is amazing. I found it on the link you posted for the Gaia Christian Gothic guild, I absolutely love it.

  • Breathtaking. I wouldn't say its graphic, but truth, and its just amazing how well you captured the essence of sin and death as well as life and God in a simple, yet powerful poem. ^^

  • As an aspiring poet I can only say"AWESOME" and God Bless. You are definitely gifted in your ability to mix song, poetry and life to bring together thought provoking points to inspire us to get out side of our selves.

  • I know ive watched this like a hundred times cause i love it, but the end actually brought a tear to my eye today lol, its an amazing piece of writing!

  • Aw, thanks man!! Praise God that it touched you! :) Do you mean the very ending (with the techno) or the tear in the girls eye? Either way, thanks again! :)

  • NO the tear in the girls eye, its such a powerful pic that goes along with your words

  • oh my gosh

    i loved it XD

  • This has to make you stop and think. What are you living for? Are you letting the world infiltrate your thinking? BE HONEST WITH YOUR SELF! God already knows the truth. Less than 100% for Him is not the goal. Wholly for the Holy God?

    Think on this and go do for HIM! "For the Glory!"

  • This is captivating!

  • Instant favorite! Bravo Bravo

  • wow this was amazing. I felt a sense of mixed emotions as I watched this. The imagery and music used helped elevate your story to make it that much BETTER. great piece of work!

  • Hey its me Jacob From Blur Of Hope, just shouting out and saying still i love the video and i cant wait to share this

  • Oh My Gosh... You are truely blessed with a gift of writting. It's quite graphic but it almost connected with me. I felt the pain and fear that you decribed in the poem. Please continue to write such amazing poetry.

  • Wonderful, I love the poem, and I also really love you music selection, especially your use of Barber's Adagio. Maybe I'm partial because I've played it several times, but that piece still gives me goosebumps.

    Amazing job, the one thing I wish is that some of the audio transitions were faster, maybe with a slight overlap, but still, this video is beautiful and very effective.

    Well done.

  • Thanks a ton! :) I also love Adagio for strings. It's one of my favorite pieces ever! I can't believe you've actually played it, that's incredible! You officially receive high kudos in my book!

    Thanks for the suggestion! Do you mean between the different songs? I probably would have made them so, but since i'm using Windows Media Maker it doesn't have the capability to do that, and make it sound good. It just has "fade in" and "fade out". If i put it too close, they overlap.

    Thanks though! :)

  • Thanks for the kudos :-). I've actually been playing cello most of my life, so I've had the opportunity to play it in a few different orchestras... really beautiful piece, and surprisingly challenging. The "black and white notes" are mostly simple, but it requires so much more... passion than just playing notes.

    And I mean a little bit of an audio cross-fade, so they overlap and transition together. I use Final Cut, so that's what it's called there. I'm impressed you managed this with WMM!

  • Wow, I can only imagine the feel of listening, and performing that live. I know what you mean by the passion though, I don't think you could play that piece unless you really put your heart into it. That's so incredible! You should put some of your cello work on youtube :)

    Ah, i see what you mean. Yeah, WMM doesn't have the capability to do that unfortunately. I WISH i had a program like yours :P I just recently got a mac though, so we'll see how Imovie works out :)

    Thanks again!!

  • Jessica, That was very good, keep it up.

    You are very talented, and I am glad that you are focusing you're talent positively.

    God Bless You.

  • oh my gosh, Jessica!! i loved this...oh my gosh..was this really a dream you had?

  • Sort of, i guess :) I wrote the poem myself, and when i start to write these things, i become one with them. You get so wrapped up into it you can see it, feel it, touch it, smell it..ect. I guess that's why there was so much imagery that described what i was seeing, because even though i was looking at a piece of paper, what i really saw was this. Thanks! :)

  • That is so awesome! God has definitely given you an amazing gift. Weather it was a real dream or not, i know God placed that into your mind and onto your heart. I love writting things like these, and i know where your comming from, you do get completely pulled into what your writting.

    i loved it.

    <3

  • wow!! im crying! thats amazing! xXxGOD BLESSxXx

  • Jess, this is a magnificent poem! I love it, in a dark way... XD It's very powerful and moving! And the music is great! What song is it?

  • lol, which song? I think i used 5 in there :) The credits to the songs i used are at the end though just to let you know :)

  • Ha! XD I realized that after I saw the credits! :P

  • wow...amazing...iam speechless...

    honestly its breath captivating....beautiful keep it up... ^^

  • This is a very powerful poem. Thankyou for posting it. It leaves great motivation for change in my heart and to help others with change and silencing the agony of the world. Great job! May God reach out his hand to the lost and scared. Hope God brings peace within you always!

  • This is absolutly amazing. I loved it! Great job! God Bless!

  • I loved it! its genious and very true. the world we live in to me is very similar to the one you described the planet IS dying

  • I love poetry... and to see used for god's glory

    pierced my heart... keep on fighting the enemy!

  • That was really beautiful! You coordinated everything perfectly! 5 *'s! God Bless!

  • Words can't really do justice, I can't say the kind of feelings that are envoked by this video. I really can't its just wow, thats all I can say is wow

  • awesome

    i always watch this every once in a while

    great music selection and images!

  • That was Awesome LzZz

    Doc

  • its so true isnt it. all that suffering. why are ppl just ignoring such tragedy?!!

  • Bravo! Hallelujah! lol

    The poem/story/video encapsulated me from the start to end (which is a good thing). I noticed a few typos. I don't mind them but I didn't know if you knew about them.

    God Bless

    -Keep working that Talent! Colossians 3:23

  • God bless your loving soul.

  • Awesome!!! Wow!! Thanks so much for this video. Very thought provoking. Great Job!!

  • This was amazing such a blessing. God in all his glory is worthy to be praised.

    Let us all who are now in truth spread his word and love. God Bless.

  • You've done a very good job. Very touching. I loved it=)

  • that was beutiful

  • Woah. You really did a great job.

  • this is great poam!!! loved it and god sould be soo pround of you!

  • This was deep,.,Keep on the good work

    We need to spread the word

    May the Lord bless you.

  • i liked it!!!

    preety cool!!

    God bless u !!

  • Hey GothicaJ good job.!

    i like so much

    im mexican and live here in mexico

    and i like this music

    is the best music

    jejejejeje...

    god bless you 4ve

    i´m christian and i belive in god

    is my lord

    see you..!!

  • Yes. We have a choice in life. And when Jesus is involved, it is awsome.

  • amen! Well spoken! :)

  • wow

  • wow. Truly amazing! I am speechless.

    God bless you

  • thanks so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it :) God bless you too!

  • That was beautiful. I'm almost in tears. That's wonderful. You wrote the poem and put the movie together so well. It touched my heart. I loved it. I can't believe you don't have more comments, that was just beautiful!

  • That was beautiful. I'm almost in tears. That's wonderful. You wrote the poem and put the movie together so well. It touched my heart. I loved it. I can't believe you don't have more comments, that was just beautiful!

  • Wow hun...very powerful video... I really liked it..

  • Thank you! I'm glad you liked it! :)

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