AfterMath - Episode 1

[sebs625]

lmao I knew the first soundtrack without even checking. Its from The Day After Tomorrow

[M3rc3naries2]

nice

[iownu1567]

This Is Kool!

[kmanblazzer]

wonderful editing

[eggymean123]

Part 2 is out, just so you know :)

[ItachiKun678]

AWESOME the guy in the background has recon LOL

[ItachiKun678]

AWESOME! story line plz comment back

[sebs625]

AWESOME!!!!

[smoggyproductions]

you did a good job but the storyline was just boring 3/5

[eggymean123]

Part 2 is better, trust me :)

[WHOOOOZIS]

that was really good, great stuff!

[PorkaDoboBOY]

Epic dead bodies.

[Wiin360Lover]

well this wasnt the type of machinima i wanted it to b but its pretty cool for me so ill subscribe and keep watchin ur machinimas :D

[Freelancer581]

sweet

[TheGoldenShyGuy]

i watched your bungie day vid and well... IT WAS COOL how you dudes never gave up and this vid was awesomelylylylylylyly EPIC plz add me but if you dot i understand GT:ii AiVi REc0n

[TheHumbleDrummer]

not to be a geek but whos the guy with recon

[benjedimaster]

And by the good music i mean the woman at the start but everything else was epic as well

[benjedimaster]

Nice music at the start Eggy :)

[LindenTheGod]

dude this was better than machnima and i like all of your vid there awesome

[simongr07]

Nice machinima man. It's got a pretty epic feel to it! Although, you might want to look at fixing up those changes in volume with the music. They seem to jump up and down, this sudden change caught my attention over what was being said. So, try and get the music volume changes to be smooth so that the whole thing flows. At the moment, it really cuts the flow when the music goes from loud to soft with out and fade.

[eggymean123]

Fixed it for part 2 :)

[MrSpannman]

awesome job man

[Skilledify]

Wkd Cant wait for Part 2

[Darksider13]

All right, I'll give my honest critique as I've done before with Machinimas like yours. Overall, it's good, it's very well shot, angles were good (with the exception of the grass shots, those were a little shaky and you can't really see) and plot was awesome. My big issue was voice acting. I'm getting spooked by those deep, serious toned voices. Not saying don't be serious, just raise the pitch a bit as all. Pretty good overall, I'd love to be involved any way possible!

[eggymean123]

Thanks! With the voices, only one of them was edited for a deeper pitch. The character with CQB. All of the others were either my regular voice, or edited higher. His voice, the CQB is meant to be deep, he's supposed to be a little overboard.

Thanks, and send me a message with your gamertag, I'll add you.

[pysck]

Common Eggy you forgott DOuLIKEpancakez

[lordofsnipers]

nice dude, make more!

[Alexo670]

Who's the sexy beast at 7:12 :D. Great job for your first one ;P

[eggymean123]

In all fairness, it was magnet's idea. Well, his idea to put you in and not just the other two :P

And thanks. Im mostly using this one as groundwork, so the next one(s?) will be better in quality and such based on the feedback from this one. Which has been positive, for the most part.

[riseofasolja]

I say nice job

5/5

[CliffordBHS]

GJ eggy and lol u had to put Alex and Coke n Pepsi in it to didnt u

[dem0nf1are]

Looks great, glad to be a part of this! ^.^ ( my gamertag is Bobo Iz BEA5T.)

[Zael187]

Good shit, great Camera Angles, Music, Story has been thought out well.

5/5

[eggymean123]

Thanks! Really makes me feel like all the work was worth it :D

[fu2yda]

looks good for it 1st episode

[Magnetdragon2]

ZOMJ, it's the 1st episode