Kudos for the good work . I loved the way you have drawn analogy between Ganga and the stature of an indian women. Hopefully one day both "ganga" and indian women would recieve better treatment than what they currently do .
these days there is not poet who can write any poem without using urdu words. they hate urdu and always associate it with Islam but cant help without it.
how many urdu words they use in every poem if they see it, they will surely feel shame on hating urdu and islam
listen gandu urdu came out of hindi not the other way around. just like you were hindu b4 you were converted to islam with force. we can speak and write hindi without using urdu words but you can not speak or write single word without hindi. for instance can you write kitan kubsura din hai aaj. in this sentence kubsurat is only farsi word can and rest are hindi words can you write same sentence without using our hindi words. i don't think so. Islam is a cult no surprise your all fucked up.
You can recite all your poems on my site "SoundLantern", we even have a channel type called "Poet", come check out SoundLantern i have the link on my channel, let me know what you think of SL
a wonderful creation
mrinaldivendu 4 months ago
ITS TOOOOOOOOO GREAT PLZ GET ME THE AUTHOR
PLZ...........
keerthu1497 5 months ago
can any one translate it to arabic or english
x7safah9ed8e7sasix 7 months ago
too good brilliant, fur ally enjoyed. you have a gift x
Rickygola 7 months ago
bahut khoob!
AntarcticChill 1 year ago
wowwwwwwwwwwww wat a beautiful wording!!!
kdawg42188 1 year ago
wowwwwwwwwwwww wat a beautiful wording!!!
kdawg42188 1 year ago
riveting. u r so much better than those punks who act movies ( u know like the plastic woman)
stasihdae 1 year ago
Hats off aapko :)
deepanshugarg123 1 year ago
very good
luckyhsr 1 year ago
gr8 i love the poem the way tell the poem is amazing..............
bholeyshankar 1 year ago
A BEAUTIFULL & DECENT MIND
tejwanichander 2 years ago 4
Archana,
Kudos for the good work . I loved the way you have drawn analogy between Ganga and the stature of an indian women. Hopefully one day both "ganga" and indian women would recieve better treatment than what they currently do .
Please keep up the good work .
Thanks
samj802002 2 years ago
Archna ,
you should read out atleast 500 poems and then again read the poem .Ganga ..it seems a 7th standard girl reciting the poem
rouhani83 2 years ago
Awesome delivery of the poem. I've been trying to find a translation of the lyrics but have had no luck. Do you know anywhere I can find them?
monkeyfingernails 2 years ago
kya khoob hai waah waahh..
anmolshabd 2 years ago
these days there is not poet who can write any poem without using urdu words. they hate urdu and always associate it with Islam but cant help without it.
how many urdu words they use in every poem if they see it, they will surely feel shame on hating urdu and islam
MohammadFazlurRahman 2 years ago
listen gandu urdu came out of hindi not the other way around. just like you were hindu b4 you were converted to islam with force. we can speak and write hindi without using urdu words but you can not speak or write single word without hindi. for instance can you write kitan kubsura din hai aaj. in this sentence kubsurat is only farsi word can and rest are hindi words can you write same sentence without using our hindi words. i don't think so. Islam is a cult no surprise your all fucked up.
rockee0111 2 years ago
Neither came out of the other, seeing as how they are related/identical languages. The Parsi words serve only to enrich Urdu.
gloomyoutlook 2 years ago
very nice. keep it up.
amitksagar 3 years ago
Very nice..
I suggest you upload the same in 'Dynamycdesi'.It is a online talent contest site for people.
sdhanyam 3 years ago
great performance......
andshkmsc 3 years ago
good one I am rwaly happy....
bane raho
harenshah 3 years ago
wow beautiful poem, archana ji, hindi kavita sun ka alag hi maza hai, thanks for the poem buddy
vInspireSRI 3 years ago
Awesome.
shivpachori 3 years ago
You can recite all your poems on my site "SoundLantern", we even have a channel type called "Poet", come check out SoundLantern i have the link on my channel, let me know what you think of SL
audioscool86 3 years ago
I am speechless....its gr8 .
dont have wrds to appreciate
nishathussain 3 years ago
Great Poem!!
viv765 3 years ago