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  • a wonderful creation

  • ITS TOOOOOOOOO GREAT PLZ GET ME THE AUTHOR

    PLZ...........

    

  • can any one translate it to arabic or english

  • too good brilliant, fur ally enjoyed. you have a gift x

  • bahut khoob!

    

  • wowwwwwwwwwwww wat a beautiful wording!!!

  • wowwwwwwwwwwww wat a beautiful wording!!!

  • riveting. u r so much better than those punks who act movies ( u know like the plastic woman)

  • Hats off aapko :)

  • very good

  • gr8 i love the poem the way tell the poem is amazing..............

  • A BEAUTIFULL & DECENT MIND

  • Archana,

    Kudos for the good work . I loved the way you have drawn analogy between Ganga and the stature of an indian women. Hopefully one day both "ganga" and indian women would recieve better treatment than what they currently do .

    Please keep up the good work .

    Thanks

  • Archna ,

    you should read out atleast 500 poems and then again read the poem .Ganga ..it seems a 7th standard girl reciting the poem

  • Awesome delivery of the poem. I've been trying to find a translation of the lyrics but have had no luck.  Do you know anywhere I can find them?

  • kya khoob hai waah waahh..

  • these days there is not poet who can write any poem without using urdu words. they hate urdu and always associate it with Islam but cant help without it.

    how many urdu words they use in every poem if they see it, they will surely feel shame on hating urdu and islam

  • listen gandu urdu came out of hindi not the other way around. just like you were hindu b4 you were converted to islam with force. we can speak and write hindi without using urdu words but you can not speak or write single word without hindi. for instance can you write kitan kubsura din hai aaj. in this sentence kubsurat is only farsi word can and rest are hindi words can you write same sentence without using our hindi words. i don't think so. Islam is a cult no surprise your all fucked up.

  • Neither came out of the other, seeing as how they are related/identical languages. The Parsi words serve only to enrich Urdu.

  • very nice. keep it up.

  • Very nice..

    I suggest you upload the same in 'Dynamycdesi'.It is a online talent contest site for people.

  • great performance......

  • good one I am rwaly happy....

    bane raho

  • wow beautiful poem, archana ji, hindi kavita sun ka alag hi maza hai, thanks for the poem buddy

  • Awesome.

  • You can recite all your poems on my site "SoundLantern", we even have a channel type called "Poet", come check out SoundLantern i have the link on my channel, let me know what you think of SL

  • I am speechless....its gr8 .

    dont have wrds to appreciate

  • Great Poem!!

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