Original Song - Hate Me Romeo

[MsQueenPea]

U R A GREAT STORYTELLER!!!!

not quite sure how i stumbled on this but im glad i did.

THANK U for sharing ur talent and keepin it real.

[Valek2k6]

awesome song m'lady xxx

[frankieloveband]

Nice song, I enjoyed it

[Musicislife08ily]

wow. Your amazing! I think thats my official favorite song. It even made me cry in the end. Very touching

[AxelSchebach]

yeah! refreshing music... and quite a mature sound!

have you thought about buying a proper mic and digital interface? would be great to hear your voice in better quality...

[Angeldog99705]

your pretty good and keep doing...

[MirJChester]

First i was lookin hah , what she is trying..

but now I see, youre a good at it, keep going girl!;)

[pjfitz]

I like it! your lyrics are really good. check out some of my original stuff if u get the chance :)

[zongengacherput]

.....u r not so bad ,keep trying.....

[windymare]

LOVE ITTT

[cleverhans27]

keep on writing.... original artists brighten my day... would love to hear what you think of a couple tunes I've been fooling around with

[asidgw19]

Thanks very much! sure i'll have a listen

[13realgirl]

wow this is really good i like the idea and imspiration for the lyrics i would love to download it ^_^ bulid on it and send it to big companys and be reconized your bond to get your big break

[zelda288]

ya...sure..go head barf!!

jk its good!

[libbysealy]

The lyrics were amazing.

Your voice was amazing.

Your guitar playing was amazing.

I loved it all.

Go on and be famous!

[asidgw19]

Thanks very much! Thanks for giving it a listen

Antonia

[libbysealy]

You're welcome, I really like it.

[libbysealy]

@asidgw19 You're completely welcome. Sorry, I just now saw this again after 2 years. Damn. I still absolutely love this song though.

[KisaAndHiro]

i love your song, you are real talented , i hope you make more like this ^^

[xDeathNotexLx]

D:

Wow.

Great job!

[asidgw19]

Thanks for checking it out :D

[babyshilo05]

your amazing nice lyrics and voice and playing

[asidgw19]

Thanks very much babyshilo05, glad ye liked it

[BorrowedCactus]

good show - nice transitions and chord selections - too bad my pc lags on this stuff I would love to hear it full length with no stupid pauses - A+.....Randy/Lake Havasu AZ (BullzEye)band

[manfromhongkong]

You are great. Keep it up as you have a real music future in front of you!

[asidgw19]

Thank you muchly manfromhongkong! Thanks for listening!

[coolestpri]

hey.......u r good........real gud

[asidgw19]

Thanks very much! :D

[coolestpri]

i'll be w8ing fr ur album in future......coz i think u can become a famous singer...good luck

[asidgw19]

wow thanks very much! Im glad you like it :D

[qvsohfnn]

Nice work keep goeing and someday maby you will make the big time

UG.

[TrickyDicks]

Beautiful song, very nice job. 5*s

[edster612]

Great job on this song.  Very nice.

[asidgw19]

thanks so much for listening!

[guitarrox]

wow this realy sounds great ! you sing and play guitar so well! your have some realy heartfelt lyrics to this tune! ! Kudos on you for writing this gem 5 stars from rox without a doubt *****

[Jeanie813]

you write really good lyrics.

[asidgw19]

thanx! thats kinda what comes easiest to me, im not the best guitarist

[jdavis8425]

you are amazing! you've got to put an album out. If i had the funds, i'd produce your album!

[asidgw19]

aww wow thans very much! Same here, if I had the fundsI think I would try put an album together even just for fun. Also got a lot of uni work on the go but im hopin to atleast get some better recordings of some songs soonish. Thanks again!

[NapoleonRage]

Cool. Let me know if you want to collab on something. I dunno if I'm any good or not. Just sayin'. Happy new year.

[ChrisF116]

Nice. Is that a Takamine?

[asidgw19]

thanx. no fraid not its just a legacy, iv become rather attached to it though lol

[tomaperson]

wow thats a sad story

[Cursedlight]

I LOVED IT :D did u make it your self?

[asidgw19]

thanx! yeah I did, one of many lol

[tonygrimsley]

Good to see that there are a few new Jewels out there to balance the Britneys

[asidgw19]

aw thanx very much, and thanx for taking the time to listen

[lllboysenlll]

i really liked the story-song a lot

and you got a nice voice, im going to chek out if u have some other good videos.

(5 stars and an aplause)

[asidgw19]

Thanx! Yeah well i have quite a few of my originals on here now, would be ace for u to check em out

[GodOfwar164]

5 stars....hell yeah

[asidgw19]

Thanx a bunch :-)

[sethwmax]

Great song! Very Indigo Girls-ish (which is a great compliment I hope)

[asidgw19]

thanx! glad u liked it

[GodOfwar164]

F**kin Awsome

13records... it shit

[13records]

If your goal is to sound like a man -- mission accomplished.

[Cursedlight]

Fuck u.. she is a bether singer than u are evah gonna be so go and cry!

[huntgeeseforever]

wow!!! you have a nice voice!!! grat job!!! you are ausome

[asidgw19]

aww thanx very much! im glad you like it!

[patman2112]

Great song!

5 stars

[asidgw19]

thanx for taking the time to check it out!

[SeveranceBand]

Fantastic song. I don't normally post comments at all, but this was good enough :)

Amazing voice and great music to go with it.

[asidgw19]

wow thanx, im very grateful!

[xxDROWNiNGiNLOV3xx]

wow, this is an amazing song. I wish I could play guitar. I do sing, but can't play guitar. I write songs too, but this is way better than mine. Keep writing and I'd love to hear more from you.

~Deanna~

[asidgw19]

Wow thanx very much! Everybody has to start somewhere, i've had to work on my voice most of all. keep writing songs that mean something and you cant go wrong! x

[xxDROWNiNGiNLOV3xx]

Your welcome and thanks for the advice. It's greatly appriciated. When I was reading your lyrics for this song, I got an idea for a song. You have a beautiful voice. your also very pretty and don't let anyone tell you any different.

~Deanna~

[dropit43]

[cont 2]which I think could sound a lot more distinctive and individual -that is, like YOU. I guess you've heard Belle and Sebastian (you are Scottish?) for example, and I think that could be an interesting way to try performing! Oops, this got a bit long, sorry! msg back tho and tell me what you think or how it goes! Keep enjoying it!

[asidgw19]

hey, thanx very much for the comments,its always great to hear constructive critisism. Good point on the voice,i dont really mean to sound american, and i do enjoy it more when i try to sing scottish. Though i have a random accent anyway lol. Glad you like the song though

Antonia x

[dropit43]

[cont] 2) (This is a bit of subjective criticism from me, only my opinion, doesn't mean I don't like it as it is! just find it useful when people give me feedback, so...) Could you try perhaps next time you're writing/recording something to drop any element of Americanism / Pop-vocal in your voice? I think your accent and the clarity of your voice when you speak at the beginning is brill, and I'd love to hear you sing in that same voice,

[dropit43]

Hey! Sounds great, jus been browsing some original songs on YouTube and came accross you. I don't often comment on vids, but I thought it would be worthwhile to say two things: 1) This is great! I think the direction throughout the song is really powerful, and you deliver it in a refreshingly open, honest and likeable way - keep it up!

[jenny0285]

you are an excellent lyricist!! see how you link the phrases!! i think this is a beautiful song! subscribing! x

[nathankmart]

you sound mexican

[asidgw19]

mexican? lol nope shetland

[TrueArtNow]

Find a chick with a great voice and crappy songs and create a duo.

Great story.

[TomsterMusic]

Wow! What an awesome surprise this is! I can already tell that you have natural talent, and this is only the firstest song I came to! That.. is one of the coolest stories I have ever heard! Where it would just be easier for him to think that she left him.. there's not enough room for the rest of what I wanna say! LoL! That was brilliant!

♫ ToM! ♪

[asidgw19]

Aww wow thanx very much, i really appreciate it!

[EdMuirton]

Excellent! Great voice and song.

[montomaniac]

great job! Good songwriting!

[asidgw19]

thanx!

[oldie1001]

i like your voice 5 stars

[asidgw19]

thanx alot, i always think my voice isnt that great. Ive really had to work on it since i started writing songs!

[ChaseOmusic]

very cool lyrical concept: first couple of verses you're wonderin' what's up with this girl? Then the last verse gives the answer. very nice

[asidgw19]

kool thanx, its always kool t c the lyrics are accepted!

[Johnfern99]

Great song and performance! I love your voice and for someone who just started doing this a few years back, you've already accomplished some awesome tunes.

Five stars!

[asidgw19]

cheers johnfern99, thanx for listenin too!

[ParadiseEarth1]

Very Nice!*****... and very sad as well, if that's the main reason she's walking away, I doubt that it's in Romeo's broken heart to hate her at all.

Do you believe people like them will meet again?

[asidgw19]

Hey cheers fir listenin! I think they will meet again, yeah!

[thejamesholz]

I agree with TeamCanabis (lol, he has a great name)

[TeamCannabis]

What a well written,well played,and well sung tune.Loved it.Thanks asidgw19,and thanks Rocket for the "gift".

[asidgw19]

thanx!

[JonPatric]

Very good,, Encore :D

[asidgw19]

cheers muchly :)

[shawnmcnair1]

I like it!

[asidgw19]

glad u did! thanx

[kalidescopeeye]

oh god this is really a sad song great imagination and delivery ...rocket knows a good song when he hears it

[asidgw19]

thanx loads!

[REDNECKPEPI64]

you rock,really beautiful song and cool voice!

five & subscription

[asidgw19]

wow thanx v much!

[wastedguitar0]

That was awesome! Great playing and beautiful voice! Keep it up.

ps: Ottawarocket sent me the vid.

[AnnieCanada]

Wonderful Song... Great Lyrics...Lovely Vocals and guitar too..! Thanks OttawaRocket for sharing..

[NINTHMARINE]

ROCKET SENT ME THIS VIDEO Excellent & 5 stars from me.....C.A.*****

[coolanddark]

whoa what do we have here!what a great song!you write and play terrific.excellent.

[Ottawarocket]

This is a great song, I really loved it. Your singing is wonderful, Great melody, and your lyrics kick ass. 5 and faved, keep up the great work.

Rocket

[REDNECKPEPI64]

thanks old bro!

great link!

[LeopardJoy]

Awesome, Antonia!! Keep going at this, and you're gonna go a long, long way. You have a wonderful voice and your playing is superb. And I like your 'presence' and style! 5stars and FAVed...you're very creative with your lyrics as well! Best, Joy

[Ottawarocket]

I totally agree with you joy : )

Rocket

[JonPatric]

Thank you Rob for sending me this video.She is very talented :D

[DaveDaddario]

Cool titel for a song,

but indeed a little more power/agression would be even more COOL!

[TalkMusicBiz]

This is a real nice song. NICE melody and I love the stop-start and tempo changing in the middle. Excelent lyrics. Let's get a touch more agressive with your voclas cause you have a good voice, I just want a bit more push IMO. 5*****

[asidgw19]

thanx, an thanx very much for taking the time to listen!

[vinthium]

this is reallynice, good job !

:)

[asidgw19]

thank you!

[EatitAlive]

this is really good, keep it up!

[asidgw19]

thanx! glad u liked it

[Travelersole]

great job! keep up the writing! thanks for sharing

[stealurface1976]

very nice again...such a soothing sound you have

[Kadinkski]

i liked it up until i noticed how you spelt 'Juliet' and then i was kinda put off. It was good up til then though.

[asidgw19]

woops, changed it now though

[CasualDaveDotCom]

Nice song!

[TheTroubadourJacobs]

Yeah, real sweet!

[she4me]

Very nice, a little rough, but enjoyable.

[irock198]

nice song.

[David777111]

Good story song. Nice voice.

[asidgw19]

thank you!

[tefer82]

Hey love the song, good lyrics and great vocals. Would be good if you got some studio time to do a demo cd.

[asidgw19]

thanx very much, im glad you like it! im gonna see if i can do just that, need to get some cash first tho eeek

[IChoseTheRedPill]

that was awesome... just curious, how long have you been playing? i ask because i just started lessons not too long ago. the lyrics were sad but beautiful none the less... keep up the good work, you're a star!

[IChoseTheRedPill]

i listened to this a second time after dinner. very very cool

[asidgw19]

This is prob getting near 3 years but ive just been teaching myself and its taken me a while to be able to afford another guitar (all be it a cheap one) to play wihle im at uni! Though i do play alot, lol i just sit down and then look up and its been several hours (that i should have been doing essays in lol). Thanx very much for your comment! Good luck with the lessons!!

[Riverman1971]

damn u Paul.....he beats me again! gonna have to get a job where i finish earlier... love the voice, pretty song x

[asidgw19]

lol thanx for listenin, glad u liked it!

[prirox]

this is very good.......but the chorus needs to be a bit more catchy.....it sounds too much like the verse............great voice!! and fantastic guitar playing.......i loved it!!

[asidgw19]

Thanx muchly for the comment, always good t hear ideas too!

[prirox]

ur welcome...

[runeshai]

Hell of a sweet job. Awesome song this one. Nice lyrics, nice delivery, awesome. Congratulations. I hope you get "spotted" here. Good luck in the contest too.

[Burch9]

Hey I see a friend of mine's already been here, I have to agree with Paul, You sing and play Great, Nice song too!! 5 more from me!

[asidgw19]

cheers!

[PaulW2007]

Cool song.... and if I hurry I'll be the first to comment too, ooh, ooh! Great lyrics, nice work. 5 stars! =o]

[asidgw19]

lol thanks alot!