I like a lot! I suggest to add in just the middle part of the song some drums and a classical instrument (e.g. violin) to give energy and improve epic scenario. 10/10
I think you are good singer with a lot of passion, your lyrics are great, and the song composition is great. I want to take a moment to talk about the suicide gun-in-mouth move you did with your hand at 1:43.
Listen dude you are a great talent with a lot to offer you need to stop that crap, don't dwell on such thoughts and don't encourage others to either. Think about how your music will influence others. Do yourself a favor don't ever do that move again, committ to living this life fully!
You need some sort of drums or something.. but like with a big sound and better tempo. it would be better if there was more going on the background seeing as your voice is quite quiet. listen to bjork and get some inpiration from her.
Amazing ^_^ I'm downloading this =] If that's alright with you guys? (I have this software that converts it to mp3) :) I really want this on my ipod heehee or to use it for a video!! =D xxxxxxx
I like a lot! I suggest to add in just the middle part of the song some drums and a classical instrument (e.g. violin) to give energy and improve epic scenario. 10/10
gianluse 2 years ago
I think you are good singer with a lot of passion, your lyrics are great, and the song composition is great. I want to take a moment to talk about the suicide gun-in-mouth move you did with your hand at 1:43.
Listen dude you are a great talent with a lot to offer you need to stop that crap, don't dwell on such thoughts and don't encourage others to either. Think about how your music will influence others. Do yourself a favor don't ever do that move again, committ to living this life fully!
MountAthos 2 years ago
By the way I give this song 10/10
MountAthos 2 years ago
You need some sort of drums or something.. but like with a big sound and better tempo. it would be better if there was more going on the background seeing as your voice is quite quiet. listen to bjork and get some inpiration from her.
MewoAndTheCrow 2 years ago
'Ok' is a better song...more going on in the background, suits your voice better i think
AdamScott82 2 years ago
You look like korn, sound like linkin park.....but all in all its pretty good except for the background music...ehh can be better
xfchris999 2 years ago
hope we will see you on big stages soon)
ColdButterfly 2 years ago
Awesome song. :D
somechick73 2 years ago
but ofcourse with ur own unique way. The lyrics are epic..
iRepEast 2 years ago
The lyrics are good, the combination of instruments just comes out weird.
Grungelize it. ...kinda like blind melon
iRepEast 2 years ago
YOU SUCK YOU TWAT WAFFLE
grassynoll715 2 years ago
I like your style. The sound is just right, a little bit of everything without being overly done. Great work.
SDAG 2 years ago
in my opinion it's too much like that linkin park sound...
JRR951 2 years ago
love your music!
Riiyona 2 years ago 4
Very niice! Your music is great!
Sporezlol 2 years ago
♥ it
hhfflgirllove 2 years ago
you could make it big! keep it up! this music is good for chillin
Jeanettetherandomone 2 years ago
amazing....5/5
GetsugaTenhou 2 years ago
Amazing ^_^ I'm downloading this =] If that's alright with you guys? (I have this software that converts it to mp3) :) I really want this on my ipod heehee or to use it for a video!! =D xxxxxxx
IshiiNihonto 2 years ago
You cant go wrong with a bit of (electric) piano in a rock song.
webbhead92 2 years ago
i like everithing except for the electronic drums
bogeaqYT 2 years ago
lol nice gunshot thing =P
erikslilangel00phan 2 years ago 2
ur definitley hot !
tmox23 2 years ago
first comment
jefzig 2 years ago