The video editing was fine, but it was thrown off by the audio in a few places (where a line would be repeated slightly). Watch for that as you keep practicing your editing.
The smiley face gag didn't fit within the context of the rest of your movie. If your piece was slapstick it would have been great.
Your film dragged in the middle as we waited for them to really start to really run out of time, and then it just sorta stopped.
Clever use of the elements, and funny too. Nicely done. Amazing what you put together in one day! The acting seemed very realistic. The kids were naturals. The lady in the curlers reminds me of someone.
Funny! Good job ya'll. Reminds me of getting ready round our place sometimes, hee hee, I know you had a blast doing it, and it turned out really well! Congrats!
LOL! I love the story!:)
LadyAbigail90 4 years ago
The video editing was fine, but it was thrown off by the audio in a few places (where a line would be repeated slightly). Watch for that as you keep practicing your editing.
The smiley face gag didn't fit within the context of the rest of your movie. If your piece was slapstick it would have been great.
Your film dragged in the middle as we waited for them to really start to really run out of time, and then it just sorta stopped.
Endings are difficult. Keep working at it. -Luke
TomySky 4 years ago
Great editing, and everyone acted very well!
DanielGardner 4 years ago
Very nicely done, kids seem to have a natural acting ability. Great use of elements, and lighting. Nice job.
kc135rpilot 4 years ago
That better not be what I think it is!
Clever use of the elements, and funny too. Nicely done. Amazing what you put together in one day! The acting seemed very realistic. The kids were naturals. The lady in the curlers reminds me of someone.
thefullarmor 4 years ago 2
Funny! Good job ya'll. Reminds me of getting ready round our place sometimes, hee hee, I know you had a blast doing it, and it turned out really well! Congrats!
PixelPablo 4 years ago 2
ok i see all three now
cwerks525 4 years ago 2
i only saw to elements..the cheerios and the "that better not be what i think it is"...bu it was good. Very good acting!
cwerks525 4 years ago