Maybe when you were in High School you read a different version than I did, but I believe you left out the part about the narrator running into the house and getting the bird book to figure out what the bird was called. And that the narrator refered to Doodle as 'His Scarlet Ibis'. Other than that, you did a very good job. The two boys did their acting very well. I believed Doodle's character so much. Thanks for this, I always wished it would've been made into an actual film.
The baby had long hair the actual boy had short hair and then at the part of teaching him to walk he got long hair o,o not to say it was bad but why'd yu do that?
I thought the video was good, you portrayed the characters and story line well even though your nephews could speak little English and the hurricane aspect of the story was not used in the video. I especially enjoyed the setting you used since the part of Israel you were in reminded me of the areas discussed in the story. I also liked the narration because when matched with the video it gave me a better understanding of what the story is about and what was happening in it.
The story is very sad but in a great way. It teaches us to be thankful for the people that surrounds us and not take them for granted. The video is great ! They can really act. The songs were my favorite. -- Ashley C.
Although there wasn't a hurricane coming towards the end of the video, like there was in the story, the kids were good actors and they portrayed the meaning of the video very well. You could sense the brotherly bond between the two boys. The story is very sad. I liked the narration, it helped me understand the text better. This video made me think about my own siblings and how you have to appreciate them because you don't know what you have until its gone.
Probably one of the most important lessons in life, appreciate things while you have them because you'll never know when they will be gone. It is becuase when they are gone, you will live in regret for the rest of you life wondering that you could have done things better, it is the worst feeling in the world. So appreciate your parents, siblings, and teachers because you have a lot more than other children your age.
i liked the video although the ending was sad his brother was mean to him on perpose but it was werth it cuz now doodle can walk run and swim the video was beautiful and u people cant spell
thiss was ah qhudd moviee. i like thee endinqq. ihts reely funniee =D && when yer nephew is runninqq awayy. dhat made mee lauqh. buhh i shed alil tear aht thaa end. i tried to hid iht(hehehe...) buhh yea, veryy fawsomee mr.Abel \m/ rock on !!
i rrly enjoyed watchin tis it was great.....mr abel ur good at makin movies...!!! =) fantastic! i luved da part wen doodle was walkin n u did a close up how khute....also how u showed the settin in the beggining of part 1
i lol'd
captain0ron 3 months ago
lol hey thats my teacher's voice
qirlyondahloose143 4 months ago
I love this film, you did a great job !(; does anyone know the name of the song that's at the end ?
kathyhernandez16 5 months ago
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this is a good movie
Bigtimerush122 7 months ago
So sadd ); , btw you guys just helped me write a paper :D
cassieeNseanbaha 1 year ago
What is the name of the song?
TragicallyNothing 1 year ago
Maybe when you were in High School you read a different version than I did, but I believe you left out the part about the narrator running into the house and getting the bird book to figure out what the bird was called. And that the narrator refered to Doodle as 'His Scarlet Ibis'. Other than that, you did a very good job. The two boys did their acting very well. I believed Doodle's character so much. Thanks for this, I always wished it would've been made into an actual film.
TragicallyNothing 1 year ago
@TragicallyNothing
if you had been looking closley, the part were their looking in the tree the older brother runs inside and comes out with a book
amber556587 11 months ago
The baby had long hair the actual boy had short hair and then at the part of teaching him to walk he got long hair o,o not to say it was bad but why'd yu do that?
ILykeSushi 1 year ago
the ending is so sad the music really captures the emotions. cant wait for the essay.
crackerscruch343 1 year ago 2
I thought the video was good, you portrayed the characters and story line well even though your nephews could speak little English and the hurricane aspect of the story was not used in the video. I especially enjoyed the setting you used since the part of Israel you were in reminded me of the areas discussed in the story. I also liked the narration because when matched with the video it gave me a better understanding of what the story is about and what was happening in it.
ASalkey1 1 year ago
The story is very sad but in a great way. It teaches us to be thankful for the people that surrounds us and not take them for granted. The video is great ! They can really act. The songs were my favorite. -- Ashley C.
OhMahGah333 1 year ago
Although there wasn't a hurricane coming towards the end of the video, like there was in the story, the kids were good actors and they portrayed the meaning of the video very well. You could sense the brotherly bond between the two boys. The story is very sad. I liked the narration, it helped me understand the text better. This video made me think about my own siblings and how you have to appreciate them because you don't know what you have until its gone.
englishxphs 1 year ago
Probably one of the most important lessons in life, appreciate things while you have them because you'll never know when they will be gone. It is becuase when they are gone, you will live in regret for the rest of you life wondering that you could have done things better, it is the worst feeling in the world. So appreciate your parents, siblings, and teachers because you have a lot more than other children your age.
~Monique
1843TwilightLuver1 1 year ago
great video i was supposed to read the whole friggin story for my english class but instead i watched the video .. thanks :D
VRLSkateTeam 1 year ago
@VRLSkateTeam haha same here (:
Karmasbish78 1 year ago
red hot chili peppers hirt on doodle at 4:11
TheBluesguitarman 1 year ago
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oh wow, Doodle have his own watch back in 1900s lolz and the older bro either have a "king of something" shirt
larsion1 1 year ago
oh wow, Doodle have his own watch back in 1900s lolz and the older bro either have a "king of something" shirt lolz
larsion1 1 year ago
in the book its raining when he leaves Doodle
707xVAMPIRE 2 years ago
i have 2 write my own endding for class =]
707xVAMPIRE 2 years ago
So sad
Although, I'm surprise why someone would leave their most loved brother and run.
girlla123 2 years ago
they cant make it rain... so theres no point in saying that... but anyway good video
DCBSable 2 years ago 7
@DCBSable use a water hose
ilovedogs1401 3 months ago
Doodle is wearing a Led Zeppelin shirt XD
curtissboggs 2 years ago
aww man im crying *tears* a sad story indeed
sexyboa25 2 years ago
it was raining when doodle diied.
wweandmrt 2 years ago
when doodle died blood came out his mouth and was all over him making him look like the scarlet ibis
Modelos1234 2 years ago
hehe when he finally walks in front of the mom he has a led zeppelin shirt on lol
xxichigoxxx 2 years ago
good job! nice angles when filming!
shortterror 2 years ago
man i almost cried at the end its rly good movie , good work keep it up
who551cares 2 years ago
But when ever doodle dies is raining
K80blogfan 3 years ago
i liked the video although the ending was sad his brother was mean to him on perpose but it was werth it cuz now doodle can walk run and swim the video was beautiful and u people cant spell
seitenamanda 3 years ago
i loveeee y0ur videooooooo
- mari .
MonikaxBaby 3 years ago
Hey Aqain Mr.AbeL .!
another job well done =)
The second part was so qudd. It was very suspensful and i couldnt stop watchinqq. The endinq was very sad but i didnt cry =)
U shuld definetly direct it one day.
MUSiiCADDiCt94 3 years ago
Are some of you trying to hurt Mr. Abel's eyes with your typing? haha~
The ending was sad. It was actually just a bit sadder than the ending in the story, so excellent job there!
PartysLikeAPoptart 3 years ago
good directinggg!
kriistaynahh 3 years ago
Mr. Abel this was sad D: but you are an amazing director and now it is time to get started on the movie review(: I'll see you in class tomorrow!
J4CK13FR3SH 3 years ago
thiss was ah qhudd moviee. i like thee endinqq. ihts reely funniee =D && when yer nephew is runninqq awayy. dhat made mee lauqh. buhh i shed alil tear aht thaa end. i tried to hid iht(hehehe...) buhh yea, veryy fawsomee mr.Abel \m/ rock on !!
UhMiiTsDaNax3 3 years ago
i rrly enjoyed watchin tis it was great.....mr abel ur good at makin movies...!!! =) fantastic! i luved da part wen doodle was walkin n u did a close up how khute....also how u showed the settin in the beggining of part 1
LilmissKhutie23 3 years ago
i cried when i read this and i almost cried watching the end.
it was very moving.
greenzimer4lfe 3 years ago
man this story is sad closest i've come to crying in years the video is great too
comatarmsFTW 3 years ago 7
@comatarmsFTW
wow the ending made me feel so sad, its the thought of losing someone that is so close to you that can make anybody cry
crazybud32 1 year ago
@comatarmsFTW
wow the ending made me feel so sad, its the thought of losing someone that is so close to you that can make anybody cry
crazybud32 1 year ago
Genious, PURE genious Mr. abel!!!!!! I love the editing, great job, and your nephews are so cute!
myliferulez 3 years ago
Wow..all I can say is wow.. Excellent job.
jaclynnmew 3 years ago
i loved it...!
it was almost as good as
the short story..
i almost cried when we read
this in class..
and i actually cried while
watching this..!
awesome job..
if they made a
movie you should direct it!!
gbenga4 3 years ago
Awesome job!
jdebona 3 years ago
Too cute!!! Steve, you are a cinematic genius!!! Oh no! What are you doing to me???
Don't tell me it ends like this. Steve, we are no longer friends.
jdebona 3 years ago
Great second half! Terrific song at the end; very moving.
CForlini521 3 years ago