from 1:44 to 2:00 it looked pretty okay altogether, b cus u actually moved around and "morphed" it all into one piece almost. ya'know what i mean? like it doesnt look all choppy and weird. not tht choppy is weird.. it looks awesome if you can do it right, but to me it looked like you were going for the more smooth type of hip hop- popin w/e tht was =o but i think with a little more variety and practice, you will HAVE IT!!! ^_^ <3 :P
lol after smokin some dank i watched this. tight as fuck hahaha keep up wif the classes n u will start feeling the music. its an amazing feeling when u get to that point.
You look like you could have some pretty good talent in terms of isolation and pop-lock with a bit of teaching...keep it up, you're on the right track!
Good so far, but some advice, don't think you should take classes for this kinda dancing. Workshops like once in a while, but mix it up a bit.
For simple choreo, learn some waving or popping. And if you get good enough and think you're strong enough and have ALOT of time, maybe bboy, but probably stick with waving, tutting or popping.
Your not listenin to the music, make your body hit the beat while moving. plus make various movements because i didnt see to many transitions.. i would advise you to learn some styles first> poppin, wavin & tuttin would fit the most
honestly it wasn't that good but i admire how you decided to pursue learning hip hop. i can tell you have some moves waiting to come out in you just keep practicing and i'm sure you'll be amazing soon. try to dance more on beat too. dance moves look better that way. i have a video posted it's not that good but check it out if you want sometimes you get better just by watching someone else. I'm curious to see how good you'll become. keep at it man. lol
Thanks for the nice words. My instructor says my next big breakthrough will come when I learn to better move my core and learn musicality so that I can hit moves on certain beats. There's a lot to this dancing stuff!
nice, got the basics, all you need to add a more moves!
aquajak 3 months ago
no offence but it's all the same dance moves!
lol but i like it(:
XxRodgirlxX 1 year ago
lol
potatomeg123 1 year ago
u must get alot of pussy dancing like that at the clubs
coop0poop878 1 year ago
from 1:44 to 2:00 it looked pretty okay altogether, b cus u actually moved around and "morphed" it all into one piece almost. ya'know what i mean? like it doesnt look all choppy and weird. not tht choppy is weird.. it looks awesome if you can do it right, but to me it looked like you were going for the more smooth type of hip hop- popin w/e tht was =o but i think with a little more variety and practice, you will HAVE IT!!! ^_^ <3 :P
popinlockingurly 1 year ago
I thought it was good
lukelee1495 1 year ago
millions hahaha only 5118 ...i'm the 5119 though lol
cocopacho 1 year ago
looks more like retarded tektonik
vi3txkien 1 year ago
@vi3txkien asionik!!
cocopacho 1 year ago
hahahahhahaa
rheaheartzacefron 1 year ago
Lol you got a longggg way ! . Dont giveee up man. not bad
S7NDifty 1 year ago
lol after smokin some dank i watched this. tight as fuck hahaha keep up wif the classes n u will start feeling the music. its an amazing feeling when u get to that point.
brettpecott 2 years ago
ur body isnt sync wit da music
litoazndevil1008 2 years ago
Waaaaaay too much random footwork.
xporkbuns 2 years ago
You look like you could have some pretty good talent in terms of isolation and pop-lock with a bit of teaching...keep it up, you're on the right track!
rachaelllh 2 years ago
Hhahah, thats hilarious.
Your body is just moving around randomly.
wiltonchanman 2 years ago
Good so far, but some advice, don't think you should take classes for this kinda dancing. Workshops like once in a while, but mix it up a bit.
For simple choreo, learn some waving or popping. And if you get good enough and think you're strong enough and have ALOT of time, maybe bboy, but probably stick with waving, tutting or popping.
julianthegiraffe 2 years ago
how many dance moves do you know??
JinantotniVisiBobby 2 years ago
good
its awsome for ur first vid
but make ur body go to the rythm
okkk
=]
hiphop9597 2 years ago
Your not listenin to the music, make your body hit the beat while moving. plus make various movements because i didnt see to many transitions.. i would advise you to learn some styles first> poppin, wavin & tuttin would fit the most
DemianRX 2 years ago
dude way funny. dont try out for so you think you can dance. but shred it up at the club A+
tags01blast 2 years ago
thats fuckin raw yo
rite on bro
videocontent420 2 years ago
more energyyyy! But its good...and cute. :)
lilfirenze87 2 years ago
keep on working at it man, takes time. more energy, a bit repetitive, and dance to the beat, or mix it to the beat.
best of luck
XXbaby1985 2 years ago
amazing, i see a dance floor! now for the girls...
snoopyloopy 3 years ago
not bad but gets repetitive..
xnightkill 3 years ago
great dance moves but needs more diversity
kev1higa0 3 years ago
honestly it wasn't that good but i admire how you decided to pursue learning hip hop. i can tell you have some moves waiting to come out in you just keep practicing and i'm sure you'll be amazing soon. try to dance more on beat too. dance moves look better that way. i have a video posted it's not that good but check it out if you want sometimes you get better just by watching someone else. I'm curious to see how good you'll become. keep at it man. lol
bjclue17 3 years ago
i appreciate your constructive criticism. Learning to dance isn't easy, but it sure is fun!
cspotrn 3 years ago
Your good.
But I feel like you could have used more of a variety in your dance 'moves' (My lake of a better word).
And.. Maybe mix up the pace of how fast you dance at times? .. ?
iiMusicRAWR 3 years ago
Thanks for the nice words. My instructor says my next big breakthrough will come when I learn to better move my core and learn musicality so that I can hit moves on certain beats. There's a lot to this dancing stuff!
cspotrn 3 years ago
Okay man, this one was much better than your Michael Jackson one... much better.
VnOnWoNg 3 years ago
That's funny. I actually thought the MJ one was better. It was shot after the first one, so I was warmed up. Maybe it was the angle it was shot in...
cspotrn 3 years ago
awesome video man.. should submit this in the contest on the far east movement forum!
FMonyourdial 3 years ago